Muskura ke kaha Dil ne...

by Pooja on August 20, 2009, 06:30:54 PM
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Ajj bahoot dino baad apni aor sath likhe sathio ki rachna parri "http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/ghazals/adami-adami-ko-kaya-dega-t24772.0.html"

Man ne kuch likhwa diya.. waha likhna uchit na samjh kar... alag se thread open kar rahi hu.. shayad app sab ko pasand ayye

Waqat ke sath najaare badal jaate hai
girte ansoo ke sahare badal jaate hai

Pucha ajj dil ne phir se mujhse
badla hai rang pani ka, ya kinare badal jaate hai

hai chattan ajj bhi, lahre bhi bikhar bikhar jaati hai
dard thehar gaya hai kahin, ya sahne ke jazbaat badal jaate hai

Adami adami ko kaya dega, parr rahi hai ajj phir se Pooja
muskura ke kaha dil ne
hath bada kar, jo kuch karne ki rakhein himmat
uske liye Asmaan ke sitaare bhi badal jaate hai….


Adami Adami ko kaya dega, yah na soch kar kabhi chalna zindagi main
Jo dene ki rakhein khud ko khud se himmat, uske sath rahne wale insaan bhi sawar jaate hai….
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2009, 06:36:42 PM »
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bahut hi aacha likha hai pooja ji
mazaa aa gaya pad ke
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2009, 04:45:36 AM »
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Adami adami ko kaya dega, parr rahi hai ajj phir se Pooja
muskura ke kaha dil ne
hath bada kar, jo kuch karne ki rakhein himmat
uske liye Asmaan ke sitaare bhi badal jaate hai….

Adami Adami ko kaya dega, yah na soch kar kabhi chalna zindagi main
Jo dene ki rakhein khud ko khud se himmat, uske sath rahne wale insaan bhi sawar jaate hai….

Wah wah bahut acche  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2009, 10:11:55 AM »
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Wah Pooja Ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2009, 05:04:34 PM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Pooja ji.. Bahut Hi Umda Gazal Pesh ki hai aapne.. Lafzon ko Bakhoobi Sajaaya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2009, 05:10:27 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2009, 05:43:51 PM »
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bahut hi aacha likha hai pooja ji
mazaa aa gaya pad ke
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukaria TGR JI!!


Wah wah bahut acche  Applause Applause

Thanks Roja!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2009, 05:44:26 PM »
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Wah Pooja Ji

shukaria SARVESH RASTOGI ji!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause
behad behtreen likha hai aapne Pooja ji
bahot khoob  icon_thumleft

bahoot bahoot shukaria Kaash ji!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2009, 05:45:15 PM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Pooja ji.. Bahut Hi Umda Gazal Pesh ki hai aapne.. Lafzon ko Bakhoobi Sajaaya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

thank you so much Mann ji... apke shabd bahoot motivate karte hai!!! Tahe dil se shukaria!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2009, 05:45:53 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja

Thanks Celmira! apke comments dekh kar dil ko bahoot acha lagta hai!! hamesha aise he sath dete rahiyega!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2009, 04:34:58 AM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Usual Smile

INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega
Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai

Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost
Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai

Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe
Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai

Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main
Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai

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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2009, 06:34:14 AM »
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Waqat ke sath najaare badal jaate hai
girte ansoo ke sahare badal jaate hai

Adami adami ko kaya dega, parr rahi hai ajj phir se Pooja
muskura ke kaha dil ne
hath bada kar, jo kuch karne ki rakhein himmat
uske liye Asmaan ke sitaare bhi badal jaate hai….


Adami Adami ko kaya dega, yah na soch kar kabhi chalna zindagi main
Jo dene ki rakhein khud ko khud se himmat, uske sath rahne wale insaan bhi sawar jaate hai….

Bahut khoob Pooja ji! Khaas kar aapkey yah asha'ar bahut achchhey lagey!!

                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2009, 10:32:39 AM »
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Muskura k kaha dil ne mere bahut achha likha hai aapne....daad kabul karein.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"HIMMATE MARDA MADDADE KHUDA"
 KAHAWAT KO aapne apne shabdo mai naya roop diya hai...
 Suna tha..."Kaun kehta hai aasma mai chhed nahi hota
             Ek pathar tou dil se uchhalo yaaron.."
Aadmi soche tou kya nahi kar sakta....Himmat se kadam ek badho tou sahi..

Ajj bahoot dino baad apni aor sath likhe sathio ki rachna parri "http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/ghazals/adami-adami-ko-kaya-dega-t24772.0.html"

Man ne kuch likhwa diya.. waha likhna uchit na samjh kar... alag se thread open kar rahi hu.. shayad app sab ko pasand ayye

Waqat ke sath najaare badal jaate hai
girte ansoo ke sahare badal jaate hai

Pucha ajj dil ne phir se mujhse
badla hai rang pani ka, ya kinare badal jaate hai

hai chattan ajj bhi, lahre bhi bikhar bikhar jaati hai
dard thehar gaya hai kahin, ya sahne ke jazbaat badal jaate hai

Adami adami ko kaya dega, parr rahi hai ajj phir se Pooja
muskura ke kaha dil ne
hath bada kar, jo kuch karne ki rakhein himmat
uske liye Asmaan ke sitaare bhi badal jaate hai….


Adami Adami ko kaya dega, yah na soch kar kabhi chalna zindagi main
Jo dene ki rakhein khud ko khud se himmat, uske sath rahne wale insaan bhi sawar jaate hai….

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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2009, 03:35:26 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..

Bhaut Gehri baatein Ki Hai Aapne Pooja..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2009, 07:16:48 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja Di.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Usual Smile

INsaan Insaan ka saath kya dega
Yahan tho Khoon k Riste badal jaate hai

Jo Saath beit kar Haste Gaathe the Dost
Uss Dosti k Roop bhi aksar Badal jaate hai

Jo karte the Parwaah Hamari Har Kadam pe
Wahi Aksar Beech mea Akela chod chale jaate hai

Insaan ki baat kya karun ab tho main
Yahan tho har mod pe Khwaab bhi badal jaate hai



Very True Dear!! Issi liye kaha ki bas
khud per rakh vishwaas
na rakh is dunia se koi AASS
DUKH KE WAQAT RAHTA NAHI KOI APNA BHI PASS
Ajj ki dunia main dhoondein se bhi nahi milte kahi jazbaat

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