Muskurata Raha Geet Gaata Raha

by aaina on May 18, 2010, 11:12:03 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 28, 2010, 10:03:12 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Aslam Bhai.. Behad Hi Jazzbaati aur Dil Ko chhoo Jane wale alfaaz Likha hain aapne.. Aapki Is Gazal Ne Shuru se Hi Baandhe Rakha.. aur Last sher to waqai dil tak utar gaya.. Bahut umda peshkash Hai..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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bhut shukriya Mann ghazal ko pasnd karne liyn yun hi saath daite rahiye bhut shukriya



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«Reply #16 on: May 28, 2010, 10:04:39 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



bhut bhut shukriya khwaish sahab bhut shurkaya


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«Reply #17 on: May 25, 2011, 09:50:48 AM »
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Muskurata raha, geet gata raha
Apne gham ko mai aise chupata rha

Teri yaado.n se lipti hain yaade.n meri
Apni aankho mai jugnu sajata raha

Hum hi har mod par qais bante rahe
Zarfe diwaangi yon.n sataata raha

Humne apne ghronde gira to diye
Rait par kuch bna yaad aata raha

Ab kahani pariyo.n ki jhooti sahi
Koi to tha jo mujhko sunata raha

Sunlay aslam wo shayad ghazal ye meri
Bas yahi soch kar gungunata raha





aslam



bahut khoob aaina ji
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«Reply #18 on: May 25, 2011, 09:54:26 AM »
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Bahut umda aslam ji...
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«Reply #19 on: May 25, 2011, 09:56:28 AM »
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wah wah aslamji... kamaal likha hai aapne... bahut khub....

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«Reply #20 on: January 15, 2012, 09:50:49 AM »
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Muskurata raha, geet gata raha
Apne gham ko mai aise chupata rha

Teri yaado.n se lipti hain yaade.n meri
Apni aankho mai jugnu sajata raha

Hum hi har mod par qais bante rahe
Zarfe diwaangi yon.n sataata raha

Humne apne ghronde gira to diye
Rait par kuch bna yaad aata raha

Ab kahani pariyo.n ki jhooti sahi
Koi to tha jo mujhko sunata raha

Sunlay aslam wo shayad ghazal ye meri
Bas yahi soch kar gungunata raha





aslam




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