Muskurata Raha Geet Gaata Raha

by aaina on May 18, 2010, 11:12:03 PM
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Muskurata raha, geet gata raha
Apne gham ko mai aise chupata rha

Teri yaado.n se lipti hain yaade.n meri
Apni aankho mai jugnu sajata raha

Hum hi har mod par qais bante rahe
Zarfe diwaangi yon.n sataata raha

Humne apne ghronde gira to diye
Rait par kuch bna yaad aata raha

Ab kahani pariyo.n ki jhooti sahi
Koi to tha jo mujhko sunata raha

Sunlay aslam wo shayad ghazal ye meri
Bas yahi soch kar gungunata raha





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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2010, 11:42:32 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji... bahut khoobsurti se aapne ehsaason ko shabdon ki mala me piroya hai... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2010, 11:47:24 PM »
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Wah Aslam ji bahut khoobsurat gazal lika aapne.very touching and lovely creation.keep up the good work.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2010, 08:18:40 AM »
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buhat he khoobsurat ghazal hay.. aaina jee.. buhat pasand aaee hamen..
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2010, 08:43:47 AM »
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wah aslam saheb , kya kahene bhaijaan , bahoth qoob thisra ashar zahen o dimaq pe acer chodta hai , bahoth qoob, dad hazir hai qubool karen .. lajawab kahete ho bhai, bahoth khuch sikhne ko milta hai ..allah apko khush rakhe .. bazm me apki maujodgi banaye rakhe ..


Apka bhai

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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2010, 12:59:05 PM »
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Wah wah kya kahne Aslam Sahab, bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne. Dil-o-zehn mehzooz ho gaye. Bahot khoob. Marhaba.
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2010, 09:55:25 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2010, 02:34:28 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Aslam Bhai.. Behad Hi Jazzbaati aur Dil Ko chhoo Jane wale alfaaz Likha hain aapne.. Aapki Is Gazal Ne Shuru se Hi Baandhe Rakha.. aur Last sher to waqai dil tak utar gaya.. Bahut umda peshkash Hai..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2010, 02:45:40 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai..

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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2010, 09:26:30 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji... bahut khoobsurti se aapne ehsaason ko shabdon ki mala me piroya hai... bahut khoob...!!!

Bhut shukriya Kapil sahab is mohabbat ka


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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2010, 09:27:11 PM »
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Wah Aslam ji bahut khoobsurat gazal lika aapne.very touching and lovely creation.keep up the good work.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



thnxxx so much Madhuwesh jii........


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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2010, 09:33:09 PM »
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buhat he khoobsurat ghazal hay.. aaina jee.. buhat pasand aaee hamen..


bhut shukriya is hosla afzaaii ka VB sahab


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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2010, 09:55:38 PM »
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wah aslam saheb , kya kahene bhaijaan , bahoth qoob thisra ashar zahen o dimaq pe acer chodta hai , bahoth qoob, dad hazir hai qubool karen .. lajawab kahete ho bhai, bahoth khuch sikhne ko milta hai ..allah apko khush rakhe .. bazm me apki maujodgi banaye rakhe ..


Apka bhai

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Qadeer bhai zarranawaai hai aapki dear jo aap is mohabbat se nawaate hain bhut bhut shukriyaa dear aise hi saath daite rahiye



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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2010, 09:56:37 PM »
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Wah wah kya kahne Aslam Sahab, bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne. Dil-o-zehn mehzooz ho gaye. Bahot khoob. Marhaba.


Hoasla afzaii kab hut shurkya Riyad sahab


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«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2010, 09:57:49 PM »
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Ghazal ki pasndagi ke liyn aapka tahe dil se shukurguzaar hun


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