maiN tujhe PAATA raha, KHOTA raha...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 07, 2012, 09:46:37 PM
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JazbaatoN me bikhra hua sa, main ek mohabbat ka pyasa,, Vo mujhse, main unse khafaa sa, Fir bhi aaye kyun ek mazaa sa,, Darr lagta hai khone ka mujhe, Jo vo paas aate haiN zara sa,, Na poocho mera thikaanaa koi, dil me kabhi sadak pe banajara sa,, Vo phool ki komal pankhudhi, main oos ki tarah lipta hua sa,, Beech bhanvar tha vo “taish”, Jo laga tha mujhe kinaaraa sa..........




GhamoN ka bojh main dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Na kabhi aayi khushi ki bahar,
Na mila mujhe mera vo pyar.
Apne daaman ko sukha-sukha ke,
AshqoN se use bhigota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*zindagi, life **raat, night


Chalta raha yuNhi zindagi ka safar
Bhatakta raha maiN dar-ba-dar
Lakh marham kiye maseeha* ne,
Par dard beshumaar yunhi hota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*Chikitsak, doctor...!!


Mujhe dekh,aaj khuda ne ashq baha diye,
Kaha aur kya dooN,sare gham to saha diye.
Jitni kosish ki tujhe bhulane ki,
Utna hi tujhme maiN khota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*zindagi, life **raat, night


Ghamon ka bojh maiN dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.
Jise dhunda kiya zindagi ke safar me,
Usi maut ki godd me maiN ab tak sota raha...
sota raha, bas sota hi reh gaya....
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2012, 10:14:29 PM »
bahut khoob...
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2012, 12:35:36 AM »
Lucky Jee Aadaab!


Janab achchi nazm kahi hai.. ghamoN ka dour aur yeH tanhaai kia
kahne... bahut khoob... Usual Smile
Aapko aise naye andaaz meiN likhte dekhkar achcha laga... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2012, 05:45:23 AM »
bahut khoob...

yash ji bahut bahut shukriya aapki tareef ka, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki ye kalaam aapko pasand aaya, bas duaa yahi rahegi ki aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2012, 06:20:42 AM »
waah waah laajawaab
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2012, 07:05:33 AM »
Woow kyaa baat hai.
Zabardast kalaam hai.
Mubaarakbaad kabool kareN.
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2012, 10:22:03 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2012, 10:23:32 AM »
bahut khub
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2012, 10:48:53 AM »
zabardast ghayal sahab ...Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2012, 11:34:27 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
woooooooooow bahut bahut hi khoooob
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2012, 06:36:28 AM »
Lucky Jee Aadaab!


Janab achchi nazm kahi hai.. ghamoN ka dour aur yeH tanhaai kia
kahne... bahut khoob... Usual Smile
Aapko aise naye andaaz meiN likhte dekhkar achcha laga... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   




parwaaz sahab ko mera salaam,

waise ye humari khusnaseebi hai ki aapko ye chand atpate se jazbaat pasand aaye, duaa bas yahi rahegi ki aage v aap hume yuNHi saraaahte rahiye...
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«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2012, 11:42:40 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot khoob Ghayal ji!! Good work!!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 09, 2012, 02:14:59 PM »
waah waah laajawaab


saini sir ji, bahut bahut shukriya... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2012, 11:31:42 PM »
Woow kyaa baat hai.
Zabardast kalaam hai.
Mubaarakbaad kabool kareN.

sahzada ji, aapki tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas duaa yahi rahegi ki aapka saath hume yuNhi humesha milta rahe...
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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2012, 11:56:44 AM »
very nice

Thanks or the apprecition Bahukhandi ji...
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