Narmee hai nigaahoun mein yaar kee: huaa hai kyaa?

by abdbundeli on September 03, 2010, 06:25:27 AM
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Jaaree hai azal sey wahee Hawwaa ki kahaanee!
Mulk-e-baqaa nahin, tabhee jaahir hai nishaanee!!

Ab bhee nazar uthhaakey idhar deykh leejiye:
Suntey hain, sirf chand roz kee hai jawaanee!

Itney qareeb hokey bhi, kitney judaa hain ham:
Pukhtah nahin hai aaj bhi takreer zubaanee!

Ye mulk-e-fanaa hai, nahin dawaam aik bhee!
Ruktaa nahin hai silsilah, jaaree hai rawaanee!

Har lamhah badaltaa hai anaasir key maqaamaat;
Wo ho hawaa, ki, sookhtaa bahtaa huaa paanee!!

Narmee hai nigaahoun mein yaar kee: huaa hai kyaa?
Padtee hai shokhiyoun ki sharaarat bhi nibhaanee!

Houz-e-sharaab hai yeh, ki, kousar nahin, naasheh!
Kyoun tujhko naapasand rahee saaf bayaanee?

Baatoun mein nahin aayegee, tahzeeb seekhiye:
Ab saaqiyah huyee hai, 'abd', khoob sayaanee!

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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 06:31:16 AM »
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bht khuub abd ji....bht pyari gazal hai ji ye aapki....

ye line kuch samjh nahin aai...
plz bataiye na
Har lamhah badaltaa hai anaasir key maqaamaat;
Wo ho hawaa, ki, sookhtaa bahtaa huaa paanee!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 10:34:45 AM »
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bht khuub abd ji....bht pyari gazal hai ji ye aapki....

ye line kuch samjh nahin aai...
plz bataiye na
Har lamhah badaltaa hai anaasir key maqaamaat;
Wo ho hawaa, ki, sookhtaa bahtaa huaa paanee!!

Thanks a lot, *KasaK* ji!

Anaasir = panch bhoot, five basic elements, that are said to constitute the human body jointly.
maqaamaat = places of temporary stays.

The sher may be translated as under:

'Every moment (that passes) changes the places of their temporary stay (over here): it may either be the air or the drying (gradually evaporating) moving water.'

I hope it might be clear now!
I'm happy to find that you're taking such a keen an interest in my 'kalaam'.

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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 02:50:39 PM »
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Wah wah bhaiyya mere kaam ki cheeze aapne mujhe de di hahahah

Ab bhee nazar uthhaakey idhar deykh leejiye:
Suntey hain, sirf chand roz kee hai jawaanee!

Deewana kahe humko karu q main shikayat
Jab kehta hai shehar usko bhi Ghayel ki deewani...

SG
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 02:57:11 PM »
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Thanks a lot, *KasaK* ji!

Anaasir = panch bhoot, five basic elements, that are said to constitute the human body jointly.
maqaamaat = places of temporary stays.

The sher may be translated as under:

'Every moment (that passes) changes the places of their temporary stay (over here): it may either be the air or the drying (gradually evaporating) moving water.'

I hope it might be clear now!
I'm happy to find that you're taking such a keen an interest in my 'kalaam'.

                     - abd bundeli


I m honoured sir to get an explanation from u in such a manner....
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 02:57:50 PM »
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Wah wah bhaiyya mere kaam ki cheeze aapne mujhe de di hahahah

Ab bhee nazar uthhaakey idhar deykh leejiye:
Suntey hain, sirf chand roz kee hai jawaanee!

Deewana kahe humko karu q main shikayat
Jab kehta hai shehar usko bhi Ghayel ki deewani...

SG

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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2010, 03:20:19 PM »
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Neel ke naam Paighaam,



Yeh thread aapke liye banaye ja rahe hai kya, baat kya hai...............

Waise ek baat bata du zati tajruba hai kuch nahi hota yeh sab karne se......sage maa baap mar jate hai auladein bhool jati hai. Koi kisi ko yaad nahi rakhta aaj phir thode bohat logh pooch rahe hai kal woh bhi nahi poochege.

Zyda seriously na le kisi baat ko aaye apne kalam share kare auro ke kalam padhe, bas waqt katne ka ek bahana hai koi zindagi nahi hai yeh net ki duniya.

Khayaal rakhe apna.

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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2010, 03:49:45 PM »
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Wah wah bhaiyya mere kaam ki cheeze aapne mujhe de di hahahah

Ab bhee nazar uthhaakey idhar deykh leejiye:
Suntey hain, sirf chand roz kee hai jawaanee!

Deewana kahe humko karu q main shikayat
Jab kehta hai shehar usko bhi Ghayel ki deewani...

SG
Thanks bhai SG!

Kahney ko kuchh aur hai,
Karney ko kuchh aur!
Rah-e-zeest yah, azal sey
Jaaree hai yah dour!!

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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2010, 04:02:24 PM »
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I m honoured sir to get an explanation from u in such a manner....
 notworthy notworthy
thnx alot..and i really do aapreciate ur poems..i read them many times and try to extract words from them.. the way u put ur feelings in word .is really very unique....always remain a guiding star for me and many of the new writers who try and imitate u..in writing and expressing their feelings...


You're always welcome, dear *KasaK* ji; and, lot many thanks for all your so kind words & expressions!
Your 'AnAmika' is really very lovely. Congrats! Your perception is remarkable. You do really 'see' things! Neechey likhey do Sanskrit sentences kaa 'arth' NET par talaashnaa!
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