nashaaa..sheba

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               be-noor to nahin par woh khilta bhi nahin.!
               kami to nahin par aksar woh milta bhi nahin.!

               yeh hansi  kaisi mehfil mein aaj uske.!
               khushi mein aise woh pighalta bhi nahin.!

               phaili hai khushbu uski fiza mein dekho.!
               bahaar ke mausam mein woh nikalta bhi nahin.!

               bejaan si zindagi apni khud banaya usne.!
              hai takleef kitni par  woh sambhalta bhi nahin.!
 
             'ana' aisi ki khud ko pahchanta nahin  sheba.!
              hai parwana par mehfil-e-shama mein woh jalta bhi nahin...!

              
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2010, 01:32:49 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Shebaji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2010, 06:06:57 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 14, 2010, 01:14:32 PM


               be-noor to nahin par khilta bhi nahin.!
               kami to nahin par aksar milta bhi nahin.!

               yeh khilkhilahat kaisi mehfil mein aaj.!
               khushi mein aise woh pighalta bhi nahin.!

               phaili hai khushbu uski fiza mein dekho.!
               bahaar ke mausam mein nikalta bhi nahin.!

               bejaan si zindagi apni khud banaya usne.!
               itni takleef pakar woh sambhalta bhi nahin.!
 
               phoolon ko bhi apni khushbu ka ana hai sheba.!
               parwana hai par wo mehfil-e-shama mein jalta bhi nahin...!

             

bahut khub

hai naseeb gar mera accha ,to bus itna bata de
kyu naseeba mera mujhe jindgi mei milta nahi

base hai gum mere mere he dil mei is kadar
chahakar bhi phool khushi ka khilta nahi
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2010, 09:34:25 AM »
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Good lines, keep it up.

Quote from: Sheba on June 14, 2010, 01:14:32 PM


               be-noor to nahin par khilta bhi nahin.!
               kami to nahin par aksar milta bhi nahin.!

               yeh khilkhilahat kaisi mehfil mein aaj.!
               khushi mein aise woh pighalta bhi nahin.!

               phaili hai khushbu uski fiza mein dekho.!
               bahaar ke mausam mein nikalta bhi nahin.!

               bejaan si zindagi apni khud banaya usne.!
               itni takleef pakar woh sambhalta bhi nahin.!
 
               phoolon ko bhi apni khushbu ka ana hai sheba.!
               parwana hai par wo mehfil-e-shama mein jalta bhi nahin...!

             
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2010, 04:20:51 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 14, 2010, 01:32:49 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Shebaji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you khawaish ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2010, 04:21:51 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 14, 2010, 06:06:57 PM
bahut khub

hai naseeb gar mera accha ,to bus itna bata de
kyu naseeba mera mujhe jindgi mei milta nahi

base hai gum mere mere he dil mei is kadar
chahakar bhi phool khushi ka khilta nahi



thank you manoj ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2010, 04:45:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 15, 2010, 04:21:51 PM
thank you manoj ji
its ok sheba g
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2010, 04:49:37 PM »
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bahut khoob sheba ji...
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2010, 10:37:55 PM »
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Achi khoshish hai....keep writing

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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2010, 06:20:26 PM »
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bahut khoob Sheba ji...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 19, 2010, 05:07:33 PM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on June 15, 2010, 09:34:25 AM
Good lines, keep it up.


shukria janab waquif sahab
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 15, 2010, 04:49:37 PM
bahut khoob sheba ji...

thanks broken ji
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Quote from: aaina on June 15, 2010, 10:37:55 PM
Achi khoshish hai....keep writing

aslam

shukria aslam sahab
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«Reply #13 on: June 19, 2010, 05:22:17 PM »
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Achhi creation hai Sheba ji. you can do much better.Keep it up.
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2010, 08:45:28 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 17, 2010, 06:20:26 PM
bahut khoob Sheba ji...!!!

thank you klaskar ji
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