PATTHRON KO DETE JAWAAB DEKHA HAI........MUSAAHIB

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क्या अजब ही फूलों ने आज ख्वाब देखा है...
रात पत्थरों को देते जवाब देखा है...

रस्म रात सब के सब रह गये निभाने से...
रात आप को मैंने बेहिसाब देखा है...

आप के ही जैसा हमने भी और देखा है...
याद आज आया वो आफ़ताब देखा है...

बाँट फिर कहीं मेरे मुल्क को न दें ये सब...
आज फिर से हाथों में वो ग़ुलाब देखा है...

आज फिर कहीं कोई ज़िन्दगी से हारा है...
बेशुमार उड़ते मैंने उक़ाब देखा है...

प्यास तो "मुसाहिब" की आज बुझ ही जायेगी...
आज़ बादलों में वो इज़तिराब देखा है...

Ukaab - Vulture , Iztiraab - restlessness

kyaa ajab  hi fulon ne aaj  khwaab dekha hai..
raat  pathron ko dete  jawaab dekha hai..

rasm  raat sab ke sab  rah gaye nibhane se..
raat aap ko  maine   behisaab dekha hai

aap ke hii jaisa humne  bhii aur dekha hai..
yaad aaj aaya  wo aaftab dekha hai...

baant  fir kahin mere  mulk ko n  deN ye sab..
aaj fir se hathon mein wo  gulaab dekha hai..

aaj  fir  kahin koii zindagii se haaraa hai ...
beshumaar   udte   maine ukaab dekha hai..

pyaas to musaahib kii aaj  bujh hii jayegii...
aaj badlon mein wo iztiraab dekha hai..  
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2013, 11:18:59 PM »
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kyaa ajab  hi fulon ne aaj  khwaab dekha hai..
raat  pathron ko dete  jawaab dekha hai..

rasm  raat sab ke sab  rah gaye nibhane se..
raat aap ko  maine   behisaab dekha hai

aap ke hii jaisa humne  bhii aur dekha hai..
yaad aaj aaya  wo aaftab dekha hai...

baant  fir kahin mere  mulk ko n  deN ye sab..
aaj fir se hathon mein wo  gulaab dekha hai..

aaj  fir  kahin koii zindagii se haaraa hai ...
beshumaar   udte   maine ukaab dekha hai..

pyaas to musaahib kii aaj  bujh hii jayegii...
aaj badlon mein wo iztiraab dekha hai.. 

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah wah bohut khub
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2013, 11:32:02 PM »
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ek rau ke saath dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2013, 11:38:10 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2013, 11:46:26 PM »
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Nice effort and dedication.
It's good that you are concentrating and perfection needs continuous writing.
Just keep it up.  


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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2013, 11:57:52 PM »
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kyaa ajab  hi fulon ne aaj  khwaab dekha hai..
raat  pathron ko dete  jawaab dekha hai..

rasm  raat sab ke sab  rah gaye nibhane se..
raat aap ko  maine   behisaab dekha hai

aap ke hii jaisa humne  bhii aur dekha hai..
yaad aaj aaya  wo aaftab dekha hai...

baant  fir kahin mere  mulk ko n  deN ye sab..
aaj fir se hathon mein wo  gulaab dekha hai..

aaj  fir  kahin koii zindagii se haaraa hai ...
beshumaar   udte   maine ukaab dekha hai..

pyaas to musaahib kii aaj  bujh hii jayegii...
aaj badlon mein wo iztiraab dekha hai.. 

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah wah bohut khub
Shukriyaa Jeet Jee..
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ek rau ke saath dheron daad
bahut bahut shukriyaa Sir...
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«Reply #7 on: December 30, 2013, 12:01:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Miraj Jee..
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«Reply #8 on: December 30, 2013, 12:04:07 AM »
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Nice effort and dedication.
It's good that you are concentrating and perfection needs continuous writing.
Just keep it up. 



Thanks a lot Sir, I will Sir..
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2013, 12:27:08 AM »
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क्या अजब ही फूलों ने आज ख्वाब देखा है...
रात पत्थरों को देते जवाब देखा है...

रस्म रात सब के सब रह गये निभाने से...
रात आप को मैंने बेहिसाब देखा है...

आप के ही जैसा हमने भी और देखा है...
याद आज आया वो आफ़ताब देखा है...

बाँट फिर कहीं मेरे मुल्क को न दें ये सब...
आज फिर से हाथों में वो ग़ुलाब देखा है...

आज फिर कहीं कोई ज़िन्दगी से हारा है...
बेशुमार उड़ते मैंने उक़ाब देखा है...

प्यास तो "मुसाहिब" की आज बुझ ही जायेगी...
आज़ बादलों में वो इज़तिराब देखा है...
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bahut khoooob MUssahib ji
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Ek RAU haazir hai......
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2013, 03:39:10 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat. Pls accept a RAU. Wish you a very happy new year.
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Bahut khoobsurat. Pls accept a RAU. Wish you a very happy new year.
Bahut Bahut Shukriyaa Anand Mohan Jee, And wish u a very happy and prosperous happy new year....
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2013, 04:59:22 AM »
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