ZAMIN AAPKI AASMAN AAPKA............MUSAAHIB

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असर आप पर तब ये कर जाएगी ...
छू कर आपको जब गुज़र जाएगी ...

करें तैरने का जो हम हौसला ...
समंदर की आदत सुधर जाएगी ....

ज़मीं आपकी आसमां आपका ...
निकल कर भी ये जां किधर जाएगी ...

ये चाँद अब जो छा आसमां पे गया ...
सितारों पे अब क्या नज़र जाएगी ...

"मुसाहिब" किनारा भी मिल जाएगा ...
ये तन्हा भी कब तक लहर जाएगी ...

Asar aap par tab ye kar jayegii ...
Chuu kar aapko jab guzar jayegii...

KareN tairne ka jo hum hauslaa...
samandar kii aadat  sudhar jayegii..

zameeN aapki aasmaaN aapkaa..
nikal kar bhii ye jaaN kidhar jayegii...

ye chaand ab jo chaa aasmaan pe gayaa....
sitaroN pe ab kyaa  nazar jayegi..  

"musaahib" kinara bhi mil jayega...
ye tanhaa bhii kab tak lahar jayegi ...
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2013, 01:09:45 AM »
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PERFECT dheron daad aur aasheerwaad keep it up tumhe rau bhee doongaa
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2013, 01:12:45 AM »
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PERFECT dheron daad aur aasheerwaad keep it up tumhe rau bhee doongaa
bahut bahut dhanyawaad Sir, ye mumkin aapke aasheerwaad se hi hua hai Sir....
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2013, 01:15:41 AM »
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असर आप पर तब ये कर जाएगी ...
छू कर आपको जब गुज़र जाएगी ...

करें तैरने का जो हम हौसला ...
समंदर की आदत सुधर जाएगी ....

ज़मीं आपकी आसमां आपका ...
निकल कर भी ये जां किधर जाएगी ...

ये चाँद अब जो छा आसमां पे गया ...
सितारों पे अब क्या नज़र जाएगी ...

"मुसाहिब" किनारा भी मिल जाएगा ...
ये तन्हा भी कब तक लहर जाएगी ...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
arre wah ji waah mussahib ji kamaal kar ditta......
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2013, 01:17:59 AM »
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असर आप पर तब ये कर जाएगी ...
छू कर आपको जब गुज़र जाएगी ...

करें तैरने का जो हम हौसला ...
समंदर की आदत सुधर जाएगी ....

ज़मीं आपकी आसमां आपका ...
निकल कर भी ये जां किधर जाएगी ...

ये चाँद अब जो छा आसमां पे गया ...
सितारों पे अब क्या नज़र जाएगी ...

"मुसाहिब" किनारा भी मिल जाएगा ...
ये तन्हा भी कब तक लहर जाएगी ...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
arre wah ji waah mussahib ji kamaal kar ditta......
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
Shukriyaa Suresh Ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2013, 01:53:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bhut khub.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2013, 02:20:34 AM »
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असर आप पर तब ये कर जाएगी ...
छू कर आपको जब गुज़र जाएगी ...

करें तैरने का जो हम हौसला ...
समंदर की आदत सुधर जाएगी ....

ज़मीं आपकी आसमां आपका ...
निकल कर भी ये जां किधर जाएगी ...

ये चाँद अब जो छा आसमां पे गया ...
सितारों पे अब क्या नज़र जाएगी ...

"मुसाहिब" किनारा भी मिल जाएगा ...
ये तन्हा भी कब तक लहर जाएगी ...

Asar aap par tab ye kar jayegii ...
Chuu kar aapko jab guzar jayegii...

KareN tairne ka jo hum hauslaa...
samandar kii aadat  sudhar jayegii..

zameeN aapki aasmaaN aapkaa..
nikal kar bhii ye jaaN kidhar jayegii...

ye chaand ab jo chaa aasmaan pe gayaa....
sitaroN pe ab kyaa  nazar jayegi.. 

"musaahib" kinara bhi mil jayega...
ye tanhaa bhii kab tak lahar jayegi ...


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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2013, 02:24:08 AM »
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Not perfect but beautiful,very beautiful.keep improving . You are nearer your goal. Best of luck.
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2013, 02:54:56 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah beautiful, bahut khoob Bishwajeet jee, yuN hi likhte rahiye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2013, 03:11:38 AM »
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करें तैरने का जो हम हौसला ...
समंदर की आदत सुधर जाएगी ....
 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

ज़मीं आपकी आसमां आपका ...
निकल कर भी ये जां किधर जाएगी ...
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ये चाँद अब जो छा आसमां पे गया ...
सितारों पे अब क्या नज़र जाएगी ...
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Lajwab Composition. Ek rau ke  saath Daad Qabool karen.
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2013, 04:02:18 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bhut khub.....
bahut shukriyaa RAJAN jee..
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Shukriyaa qalb jee..
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2013, 04:05:49 AM »
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Not perfect but beautiful,very beautiful.keep improving . You are nearer your goal. Best of luck.
Thanks a lot Sir, I am trying my level best to improve my faults. I will be always grateful for your valuable suggestions.
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2013, 04:09:52 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah beautiful, bahut khoob Bishwajeet jee, yuN hi likhte rahiye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau.
Shukriyaa Iftakhar Jee...Sab aap logon se hi sikh raha hun janab..
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2013, 04:13:24 AM »
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करें तैरने का जो हम हौसला ...
समंदर की आदत सुधर जाएगी ....
 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

ज़मीं आपकी आसमां आपका ...
निकल कर भी ये जां किधर जाएगी ...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ये चाँद अब जो छा आसमां पे गया ...
सितारों पे अब क्या नज़र जाएगी ...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lajwab Composition. Ek rau ke  saath Daad Qabool karen.
bahut bahut shukriyaa Sir, thanks for RAU..
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