Aapki Sharaarat Bhi, Aapki Inaayat Hai.........Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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aapki sharaarat bhi aapki inaayat hai
jo bhi hai mere dilbar aapki mohabbat hai
आपकी शरारत भी आपकी इनायत है
जो भी है मेरे दिलबर आपकी मुहब्बत है
 
ye siyaah zulfeN hee ik niqaab hai tera
ye jo rukh se hat jaayeN, sab kaheN "qayaamat hai"
ये सियाह ज़ुल्फ़ें ही इक निक़ाब है तेरा
ये जो रुख़ से हट जाएँ, सब कहें, "क़यामत है"

jo likha hai qismat meN bas wahee ata hoga
fir bhi aapko is se, us se kyoN shikaayat hai  
जो लिखा है क़िस्मत में बस वही अता होगा
फिर भी आपको इससे, उससे क्यों शिकायत है

maut ik haqeeqat hai par mere watan waalo
jo watan ki khaatir ho aaisee maut nemat hai
मौत इक हक़ीक़त है पर मेरे वतन वालो
जो वतन की ख़ातिर हो ऐसी मौत नेमत है

naam meN hai kya rakhkha sab habeeb haiN be-hubb
maiN "Raqeeb" hooN beshak par kahaaN raqaabat hai
नाम में है क्या रक्खा सब हबीब हैं बेहुब्ब
मैं 'रक़ीब' हूँ बेशक पर कहाँ रक़ाबत है
                                
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2011, 10:56:36 AM »
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aapki sharaarat bhi aapki inaayat hai
jo bhi hai mere dilbar aapki mohabbat hai
आपकी शरारत भी आपकी इनायत है
जो भी है मेरे दिलबर आपकी मुहब्बत है
 
ye siyaah zulfeN hee ik niqaab hai tera
ye jo rukh se hat jaayeN, sab kaheN "qayaamat hai"
ये सियाह ज़ुल्फ़ें ही इक निक़ाब है तेरा
ये जो रुख़ से हट जाएँ, सब कहें, "क़यामत है"

jo likha hai qismat meN bas wahee ata hoga
fir bhi aapko is se, us se kyoN shikaayat hai 
जो लिखा है क़िस्मत में बस वही अता होगा
फिर भी आपको इससे, उससे क्यों शिकायत है

maut ik haqeeqat hai par mere watan waalo
jo watan ki khaatir ho aaisee maut nemat hai
मौत इक हक़ीक़त है पर मेरे वतन वालो
जो वतन की ख़ातिर हो ऐसी मौत नेमत है

naam meN hai kya rakhkha sab habeeb haiN be-hubb
maiN "Raqeeb" hooN beshak par kahaaN raqaabat hai
नाम में है क्या रक्खा सब हबीब हैं बेहुब्ब
मैं 'रक़ीब' हूँ बेशक पर कहाँ रक़ाबत है
                               
                Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

                     HAI SHAKAL MAASOOM SABKI YAHAAN,
                     MAHAUL MEIN PER KAHAAN SHARAAFAT HAI


khoob kahaa SS
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2011, 11:30:50 AM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah waah waah janab ... Kia gazab ki gazal ataa ki hai aapne
bazm ko... behad khubsurat ashaaroN se saji hai aapki..
Kalaam... Khumaar e ishq se Fanaa e zindagi tak ka safar tay
kar liyaa aapne chaNd ashaaroN meiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad laa jawaab rahe..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tah e dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN aap jab kalaam kah raheN hai to use hindi aur roman do
hissoN meiN aik hi kalaam meiN pesh kijiye par.. puri kalaam
Roman meiN fir Hindi meiN pesh kijiye jisse padhne meiN gadbad
nahi hoNgi aur kalaam ki khubsurati nikhar kar aayeNgi.. Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2011, 01:50:30 PM »
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Raqeeb saheb,ghazal padhi,tabeeat khush ho gai.Kya khoobsurat ash'aaar hain.2nd sher mein zulfon ki naqaab ka tasawwur ghazab ka hai.Aur maqta...waah waah ! waqai aap jaise raqeeb mileiN to 100 habeeb qurbaan...HASAN
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2011, 03:21:57 PM »
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satish shukla ji bahut khoob farmaya hai aapne.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
yun hi likhte rahen.
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2011, 05:21:20 PM »
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 :clap:Behtariin Ghazal kahi hai shukla ji...Har sher kabil-e-daad hai...

Neeraj
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2011, 09:35:15 PM »
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Behad umda ghazal kahi hai apne Satish jee..
Bas yunhi ek se ek kalam sunate rahiye..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2011, 03:21:44 AM »
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wah wah Satish Ji Bahut Khoob Gazal

Har Sher Bahut Hi Umda Likha HAi

Dil Se Daad
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2011, 05:28:50 AM »
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khamosh_aawaaz ji,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya...

Aapka sher bhi achchha hai maahaul ko
khushgawaar kaise banaya jaaye is par
manan karne ki zarrorat hai..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 

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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2011, 10:40:31 AM »
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ParwaaZ Sahab,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawaab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya..

Aapne jo shaswara diya hai us par gaur kar
raha hoon kuchh aur sujhaav bhi hai sochata
hoon sab ek saath ho jaaye.

Aglee post men kaafee kuch sambhav hai
aapki baat bhi aa jaaye.

Ek baar fir se shukriya.

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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2011, 12:19:58 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Aap jaise logon kee pratikriya padhne
ke baad ek naya josh aur utsaah sa paida
hota hai dil men.

Hausala aafzai ka fir se shukriya.

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Sureseh Ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawab
dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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Neeraj Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya, aage bhi sneh
banaye rakhen.

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Rahim Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

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«Reply #14 on: September 23, 2011, 10:47:20 AM »
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aapki sharaarat bhi aapki inaayat hai
jo bhi hai mere dilbar aapki mohabbat hai
आपकी शरारत भी आपकी इनायत है
जो भी है मेरे दिलबर आपकी मुहब्बत है
 
ye siyaah zulfeN hee ik niqaab hai tera
ye jo rukh se hat jaayeN, sab kaheN "qayaamat hai"
ये सियाह ज़ुल्फ़ें ही इक निक़ाब है तेरा
ये जो रुख़ से हट जाएँ, सब कहें, "क़यामत है"

jo likha hai qismat meN bas wahee ata hoga
fir bhi aapko is se, us se kyoN shikaayat hai 
जो लिखा है क़िस्मत में बस वही अता होगा
फिर भी आपको इससे, उससे क्यों शिकायत है

maut ik haqeeqat hai par mere watan waalo
jo watan ki khaatir ho aaisee maut nemat hai
मौत इक हक़ीक़त है पर मेरे वतन वालो
जो वतन की ख़ातिर हो ऐसी मौत नेमत है

naam meN hai kya rakhkha sab habeeb haiN be-hubb
maiN "Raqeeb" hooN beshak par kahaaN raqaabat hai
नाम में है क्या रक्खा सब हबीब हैं बेहुब्ब
मैं 'रक़ीब' हूँ बेशक पर कहाँ रक़ाबत है
                               
                           Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



Bahut Bahut Khoob Satishji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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