raah e manjil,,,,,ghazal,,jeet jainam saini

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woh sangdil  jab hume chore dur jane lagee,
to raah e manjil  bhee sunsaan lagne lagee,

zindagi kiya ujdee do raaho,n ke bich akar,
yuh hasti bhee apni  shamshaan lagne lagee,

daag laga daman par mohhobat main is kader,
apno ke bich apni zaat badnaam lagne lagee,

aankho,n main aansu liye bulate  rahe usko,
fakt saree khoshishe  naqaam  lange  lagee,

tanha huye  akele  chal  pade  maikhane to,
jag hasaai ki mehfil sar e aam lagne lagee,

ghonghor udasi mayusee bhara mahol jab hua,
tab meri zeest gamon ki gulaam lagne lagee,

saanso,n main ghutan dil bhi dhadkta kaise,
bachi saans  jaise rab ke naam lagne lagee,







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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2015, 12:43:02 PM »
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woh sangdil  jab hume chore dur jane lagee,
to raah e manjil  bhee sunsaan lagne lagee,

zindagi kiya ujdee do raaho,n ke bich akar,
yuh hasti bhee apni  shamshaan lagne lagee,

daag laga daman par mohhobat main is kader,
apno ke bich apni zaat badnaam lagne lagee,

aankho,n main aansu liye bulate  rahe usko,
fakt saree khoshishe  naqaam  lange  lagee,

tanha huye  akele  chal  pade  maikhane to,
jag hasaai ki mehfil sar e aam lagne lagee,

ghonghor udasi mayusee bhara mahol jab hua,
tab meri zeest gamon ki gulaam lagne lagee,

saanso,n main ghutan dil bhi dhadkta kaise,
bachi saans  jaise rab ke naam lagne lagee,










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