Reetey huye lamhoun kaa sataayaa hun, saaqiyah!

by abdbundeli on March 10, 2013, 01:21:33 PM
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Reetey huye lamhoun kaa sataayaa hun, saaqiyah!
Fir anjuman mein lout key aayaa hun, saaqiyah!

Kyaa zeyhn mein utraa hai, ki, mushtaaq hai dil bhee?
Beetey dinon ki yaad kaa saayaa hun, saaqiyah!

Lagtaa hai, fir wafaa-ae-yaar abra baneygee;
Aatash-bjaan hun, kiskaa jalaayaa hun? Saaqiyah!

Wo apnee beywafaaiyon kaa jikra kyaa kareyn,
Jin key fareyb-e-wasl kaa khaayaa hun, saaqiyah!

Kousar key aab-e-khaas ki pahichaan dey bataa:
Sang zaahidi jama’at ko laayaa hun, saaqiyah!

Pahichaantaa hun jam-o-khum ko, yaaki fir tujhey:
Aab-e-tarab mein teyraa dubaayaa hun, saaqiyah!

Dhhaltee hai shaam, kiskaa intizaar main karuun?
Zeyhn-o-jigar mein tuu hi samaayaa hai, saaqiyah!

Mujh sey hi mukhaatib nahin meyrey tasawwuraat;
Baahoun mein kis ‘abd’ ka jhulaayaa hun? Saaqiyah!

              - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2013, 02:57:20 PM »
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waah waah waah waha kyaaa kehne Abd ji, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne, aapke lekhni ka mazaa ki kuch aur hai, padhke alag hi aanand aataa hai... !!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2013, 03:42:31 PM »
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Bhut Khoob..............
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2013, 04:28:57 PM »
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Awesome creation. abd bundeli ji aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2013, 05:51:39 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2013, 05:53:59 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 10, 2013, 02:57:20 PM
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waah waah waah waha kyaaa kehne Abd ji, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne, aapke lekhni ka mazaa ki kuch aur hai, padhke alag hi aanand aataa hai... !!!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'Hriday' ji! Aapki duaa hai!
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 10, 2013, 03:42:31 PM
Bhut Khoob..............

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Ravi ji!
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Quote from: aqsh on March 10, 2013, 04:28:57 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Awesome creation. abd bundeli ji aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Aqsh ji! I'm grateful for the comments!
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Quote from: nandbahu on March 10, 2013, 05:51:39 PM
wah wah

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Excellant  Thumbs UP bahut c daad
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Quote from: suman59 on March 10, 2013, 06:02:24 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Excellant  Thumbs UP bahut c daad

Loads of thanks!
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