Kis ney, maasoom ko sataayaa hai?

'Aaj toofaan idhar aayaa hai;
 Kyoun ki, bulbul ney ghar banaayaa hai!

 Deykhiye to, gubaar mein kyaa hai?
 Tinkaa-tinkaa gayaa urhaayaa hai!

 Yeh tifl-e-barq, lahak, kyoun chup hai?
 Kis ney, maasoom ko sataayaa hai?

 Ye karhaa rukh, ba-zor naaraazee:
 Kis ney, kis sey fareib khaayaa hai?'

                       - abd bundeli

Aapki shayari ne sada,
Humara dil lubhaya hai !!

Bohot Khoob Abd Ji

Muhammed sa'b,
Even if you're not a poet, it hardly matters, as you are a literary critic. But, dear friend, a literary critic should not be biased or didactic, but an independent thinker/evaluator with his own independent and objective opinion. Your comments are quite attractive; but you often find a lot of pleasure in dragging religion into pure literature, which, I strongly feel, should be avoided in such literary forums as YoIndia/Shayariadab! No?
                                              - abd bundeli