Kis ney, maasoom ko sataayaa hai?

by abdbundeli on August 06, 2008, 12:39:55 PM
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abdbundeli
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'Aaj toofaan idhar aayaa hai;
 Kyoun ki, bulbul ney ghar banaayaa hai!

 Deykhiye to, gubaar mein kyaa hai?
 Tinkaa-tinkaa gayaa urhaayaa hai!

 Yeh tifl-e-barq, lahak, kyoun chup hai?
 Kis ney, maasoom ko sataayaa hai?

 Ye karhaa rukh, ba-zor naaraazee:
 Kis ney, kis sey fareib khaayaa hai?'

                       - abd bundeli
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Kanta
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2008, 02:00:41 AM »
very nice abd muje tumhara poetry mein shabd toda mushkil laga.
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2008, 02:15:35 AM »
'Aaj toofaan idhar aayaa hai;
 Kyoun ki, bulbul ney ghar banaayaa hai!

 Deykhiye to, gubaar mein kyaa hai?
 Tinkaa-tinkaa gayaa urhaayaa hai!

 Yeh tifl-e-barq, lahak, kyoun chup hai?
 Kis ney, maasoom ko sataayaa hai?

 Ye karhaa rukh, ba-zor naaraazee:
 Kis ney, kis sey fareib khaayaa hai?'

                       - abd bundeli


Aapki shayari ne sada,
Humara dil lubhaya hai !!

Bohot Khoob Abd Ji Applause
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Muhammed
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2008, 11:02:20 AM »
abd babu k Kadardaan badhne lage hai
aajkal kalaam hi kuch aisa likte hai ye janaab...
aub Main To shayar nahi be-zabaa'n hoon ki kuch shayrana andaaz se reply de sakoo'n.
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2008, 12:50:50 PM »
Muhammed sa'b,
Even if you're not a poet, it hardly matters, as you are a literary critic. But, dear friend, a literary critic should not be biased or didactic, but an independent thinker/evaluator with his own independent and objective opinion. Your comments are quite attractive; but you often find a lot of pleasure in dragging religion into pure literature, which, I strongly feel, should be avoided in such literary forums as YoIndia/Shayariadab! No?
                                              - abd bundeli 
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