sar pe teri yaadon ka baadal to hai( taasir siddiqui..8th june'10)

by Taasir siddiqui on June 08, 2010, 03:24:15 PM
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Yun  to tanha hun magar phir bhi tanha nahin;
Tere saath guzaare hue woh pal to hai;

Dil ko behlaane ko koi teri tasvir na sahi,
Tere husn pe likhi hui meri ghazal to hai;

main gham ko apne seene  se lagaa leta hun,
Yeh soch kar mera phi koi paagal to hai;

Kitni dhoop hai zindagi ki viraan raahon me,
Shukr  teri  yaadon ka sar pe baadal to hai;

Mere chehre par udaasi  adhuri hai to kya,
Meri aankh ka har aansu mukammal to hai;

Maine yeh soch kar apne qaatil ko baksh diya,
Hisaab ke waste qayaamat ka kal to hai;



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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2010, 03:59:13 PM »
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Wah wah wah,bahut pasand aayi aapke gazal Taadir ji,great creation.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2010, 05:36:13 PM »
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wahhhhhh taasir bhai bahot khoob ,,khass kar yeh ashaar to bahut pasand aae daad qubool karein janab ,,wah

Dil ko behlaane ko koi teri tasvir na sahi,
Tere husn pe likhi hui meri ghazal to hai;

Kitni dhoop hai zindagi ki viraan raahon me,
Shukr  teri  yaadon ka sar pe baadal to hai;

Mere chehre par udaasi  adhuri hai to kya,
Meri aankh ka har aansu mukammal to hai;




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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2010, 05:59:21 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Taasir Bhai..

Bhaut Hi khoobsurat jazbaaton Ko pesh kiya haia apne iss ghazal Mein

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2010, 09:04:06 PM »
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    Taasir ji bahut achha likha hai aapne. hello2 hello2
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2010, 01:30:31 PM »
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Mr Taasir Siddiqui Saheb! Adaab!
Aap ki tehreer achchhi hai, masq-e-sukhan jaari rakheN.

Yun  to tanha hun magar phir bhi tanha nahin;
Tere saath guzaare hue woh pal to hai;

Dil ko behlaane ko koi teri tasvir na sahi,
Tere husn pe likhi hui meri ghazal to hai;

main gham ko apne seene  se lagaa leta hun,
Yeh soch kar mera phi koi paagal to hai;

Kitni dhoop hai zindagi ki viraan raahon me,
Shukr  teri  yaadon ka sar pe baadal to hai;

Mere chehre par udaasi  adhuri hai to kya,
Meri aankh ka har aansu mukammal to hai;

Maine yeh soch kar apne qaatil ko baksh diya,
Hisaab ke waste qayaamat ka kal to hai;




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