shiddat-e-gham badhta hai to khuda khuda karte hain

by nazar ghouri on September 12, 2009, 10:44:47 AM
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shiddat-e-gham badhta hai to khuda khuda karte hain..!
aah!yeh kis moad per aa ke hum wafa karte hain.......!

zakhm auraoun se kab kahaan mila karte hain..........!
aaray!apne hi apnaon se yahaan, dagha karte hain.....!

ho na jaae phir se koi naya ehsaan mujhe par.........!
yehi soch kar dooor se salaam du'a karte hain........!

yahaan! haya ki hifazat tum pe laazim hai warna......!
log to  chhoti si baat ka bhi tamasha karte hain.....!

ab riyakaari ka chalan aam hota jaa raha hai.........!
chalo 'nazar',is beemari ki kuch dawa karte hain......!

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Shayaries_King
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2009, 10:48:40 AM »
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Great Job Nice Lines  Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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nazar ghouri
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2009, 10:57:42 AM »
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Great Job Nice Lines  Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
thanks ,,this is my third ghazal which i wrote for yoindia,,dear i really dn't knw wht actually ghazal requires ,, but i have penned ,,the thoughts which came in my way. if there is any correction is required plz assist me ,, thanks
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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2009, 01:30:14 AM »
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shiddat-e-gham badhta hai to khuda khuda karte hain,,
aah!yeh kis moad per aa ke hum wafa karte hain,,,,,,,

zakhm auraoun se kab kahaan mila karte hain ,,,,,,,,,
aaray!apne hi apnaon se yahaan, dagha karte hain,,,,,

ho na jaae phir se koi naya ehsaan mujhe par,,,,,,,,,
yehi soch kar dooor se salaam du'a karte hain,,,,,,,,

yahaan! haya ki hifazat tum pe laazim hai warna,,,,,,
log to  chhoti si baat ka bhi tamasha karte hain,,,,,

ab riyakaari ka chalan aam hota jaa raha hai,,,,,,,,,
chalo 'nazar',is beemari ki kuch dawa karte hain,,,,,


bhut khoob nazar sahab keep writing
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2009, 04:47:20 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Nazar Ji... Keep writing....
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2009, 12:12:35 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Nazar Ji...welcome to Yoindia
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2009, 08:01:34 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai, ek ek line kmaal ki likhi hai apne Nazar ji!!
Yoindia mai apka sawagat hai!!!
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