Shikayaton Se Yahan Kuch Bhi Nahi Haasil "Khwaish"

by khwaish on January 04, 2012, 09:52:08 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 05, 2012, 10:01:39 AM »
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no words--
just awsome
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«Reply #16 on: January 07, 2012, 04:47:19 PM »
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Pehli do lines, woh ashaar aur yeh do lines:
"Taqdir ke haathon yahan kaun majboor nahin,
Bas yu na mil ke tu mujse ab bhi khafa ho jaise"
bahaut shandaar lagi..
Yeh shaer toh mano jaise koi mujse keh raha hoo..
Uss shaks ki zubani kehdi..
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Behad umda kalam..
Likhte rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!


Aapka Bahutttttttttt bahuttttttttttt Shukriya mere Dost...

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«Reply #17 on: January 11, 2012, 01:25:35 PM »
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Khwaish Bhai Behad Lajawab Gazal Pesh Ki Hai aapne.. Jiske Maayane Humen ek Sadesh dete Hain.. Jawab Nahi Bhai.. Har ek lafz Bahut khubsoorati se sajaaya hai... Applause Applause

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Aap Ka Bahuttttttttttttt Bahutttttttt Shukriya
Vikas Ji..Aapko Yoindia mein Dekhkar Behad Khushi Hoti hai..

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«Reply #18 on: August 17, 2012, 05:59:20 PM »
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oye Hoye Kya baat hai .. Itna khumar , itni mohabbat .. Kya baat hai.. bahoot bahoot Khoobsoorat ghazal likhi hai Usual Smile

Nysha





Thankyou Sooooooo Much Nysha...

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