Tere siwa kuch aur sochu, acha nahi lagta "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 08, 2008, 02:53:49 PM
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Teri Yaadon mein Kuch Yuh Mashroof Hoon,
Ke Tere Siwa Kuch Aur Sochu, Dil Ko Acha Nahi Lagta

Doston Ki Mehfil Mein Khada Hoon...!!!
Par Naa Jaane Kyon Yahan koi Apna Nahi lagta...

Keh Gaye Woh Kuch Yuh Ishaaro-Ishaaro mein..!!!
Ke ab uss Baat Ko alfaazo mein Kehna acha nahi lagta...

Har Ek Rishte ko Salaam hai Mera.
Par naa jaane kyon itni tadap hai Mohabaat mein,
Iss rishte se gehra aur koi rishta nahi lagta....

Mujhe Yakeen hai asaan nahi hai tera mujhse milna,
Par ab tera koi Waada Mujhe Jhoota nahi lagta

Milta hai sukoon is dil koi tere hi Khyaalo se,
Par logon ke beech mein mera yuh Gumsuum sa Ho Jaana acha nahi lagta...

Log kehte hai Mohabbat ka nasha insaan ko deewana kar deta hai,
par na jaane kyon, "KHWAISH" ko ab inn baaton ka Bura nahi lagta
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2008, 02:56:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob likha hai Khwaish ji aapne.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2008, 03:08:08 PM »
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Bohot khoob Khwaish Applause Applause Applause

Dil main hai uski hi tasveer, dikhaun kaise
Rooth gaya hai jaane kyun, manaun kaise

Mehfil main bas ek wo hi to apna tha
Khamoshi se uth gaya, ab bulaaun kaise

Wo tarasta hi raha sunne ko koi baat
Nazar se  hoti hai gugtugu, bataaun kaise

Sochti hoon liye haath main mohabbat ka chiragh
Zamaane ki aandhiyon se bachaaun kaise
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2008, 03:56:29 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai khwaish ji aapne.. Applause 


Bohat khoob Celmira sis achcha likha hai aapne.. Applause 
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2008, 04:07:10 PM »
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bouth khoob very very nice
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2008, 04:07:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob khwaish ji and Celmira
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2008, 06:01:18 PM »
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 Applause very nice lines..grt
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2008, 08:27:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob likha hai Khwaish ji aapne.. Thumbs UP


Thankyou so much mahiya..it feel's really good  to get an appreciation from a good poetess like you..thankyou
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2008, 08:40:27 PM »
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Bohot khoob Khwaish Applause Applause Applause

Dil main hai uski hi tasveer, dikhaun kaise
Rooth gaya hai jaane kyun, manaun kaise

Mehfil main bas ek wo hi to apna tha
Khamoshi se uth gaya, ab bulaaun kaise

Wo tarasta hi raha sunne ko koi baat
Nazar se  hoti hai gugtugu, bataaun kaise

Sochti hoon liye haath main mohabbat ka chiragh
Zamaane ki aandhiyon se bachaaun kaise

 Applause Applause Applause  Bahut Bahut Khoob Celmira..bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai

aur bahut bahut shukriya aapne padha aur saraha... notworthy
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2008, 01:13:19 PM »
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Thanks Honey, Roja and Khwaish Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2008, 01:33:28 PM »
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KASH TERA LIKHA KHWAISH HUMNE NA PADA HOTA
AB APNA LIKHA HUMKO ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
  BangHead

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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2008, 01:38:43 PM »
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Bohot khoob Khwaish Applause Applause Applause

Dil main hai uski hi tasveer, dikhaun kaise
Rooth gaya hai jaane kyun, manaun kaise

Mehfil main bas ek wo hi to apna tha
Khamoshi se uth gaya, ab bulaaun kaise

Wo tarasta hi raha sunne ko koi baat
Nazar se  hoti hai gugtugu, bataaun kaise

Sochti hoon liye haath main mohabbat ka chiragh
Zamaane ki aandhiyon se bachaaun kaise
ITNA UCHA HAIN MEYAAR TERI SHAYRI KA
TERI TAREEF ME ALFAZ MAIN SAJAOO KAISE

                          -SG-
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2008, 06:40:02 AM »
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 Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI
KHAWAISH JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2008, 09:49:43 AM »
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Shukriya Sajid Ji
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2008, 04:40:33 AM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai khwaish ji aapne.. Applause 


Bohat khoob Celmira sis achcha likha hai aapne.. Applause 


thankyou so much Honeyrose.
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