Tere siwa kuch aur sochu, acha nahi lagta "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 08, 2008, 02:53:49 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 14, 2008, 04:42:24 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja, Khamoshji aur Noormahalji..
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«Reply #16 on: October 14, 2008, 04:45:26 AM »
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KASH TERA LIKHA KHWAISH HUMNE NA PADA HOTA
AB APNA LIKHA HUMKO ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
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Teh Dil Se Shykriya aapka Sajid Ji...
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«Reply #17 on: October 14, 2008, 04:46:46 AM »
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Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI
KHAWAISH JI...
BY. K.SHAEL

Thanks a lot Shally...
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«Reply #18 on: October 14, 2008, 07:58:47 PM »
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Teri Yaadon mein Kuch Yuh Mashroof Hoon,
Ke Tere Siwa Kuch Aur Sochu, Dil Ko Acha Nahi Lagta

Doston Ki Mehfil Mein Khada hoon,
Par Naa Jaane Kyon Yahan koi Apna nahi lagta...

Keh Gaye Woh Kuch Yuh Ishaaro-Ishaaro mein,
Ke ab uss Baat Ko alfaazo mein Kehna acha nahi lagta...

Har Ek Rishto ko Salaam hai "KHWAISH" ka,
Par naa jaane kyon itni tadap hai Mohabaat mein,
Iss rishte se gehra aur koi rishta nahi lagta....

Mujhe Yakeen hai asaan nahi hai tera mujhse milna,
Par ab tera koi Waada Mujhe Jhoota nahi lagta

Milta hai sukoon is dil koi tere hi Khyaalo se,
Par logon ke beech mein mera yuh Gumsuum sa Ho Jaana acha nahi lagta...

Log kehte hai Mohabbat ka nasha insaan ko deewana kar deta hai,
par na jaane kyon, "KHWAISH" ko ab inn baaton ka Bura nahi lagta



Wah ji wah kaya baat hai.... ek ek line sidha dil se Yaha aa gai hai.. bahoot khoob Khwaish ji!!! bahoot kamal ki kavita ki rachna ki hai apne!!! Dil khush ho gaya!! Good work!!
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«Reply #19 on: January 09, 2009, 06:00:16 AM »
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Wah ji wah kaya baat hai.... ek ek line sidha dil se Yaha aa gai hai.. bahoot khoob Khwaish ji!!! bahoot kamal ki kavita ki rachna ki hai apne!!! Dil khush ho gaya!! Good work!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..
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«Reply #20 on: January 09, 2009, 06:19:33 AM »
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Wow ! its good Khwaish.
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«Reply #21 on: January 24, 2009, 05:02:59 AM »
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Wow ! its good Khwaish.

Thankyou So Much Sophi...
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«Reply #22 on: March 30, 2010, 07:18:38 PM »
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Bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne Khwaish ji... bahut achcha likha hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mohabbat ka nasha hota hi aisa hai ki kuch aur achcha nahi lagta. Aur aapne isko itni khoobsurti se pesh kiya hai ki hum to fida ho gaye. Bahut khoob Khwaish ji. Bahut khoob.


Teri Yaadon mein Kuch Yuh Mashroof Hoon,
Ke Tere Siwa Kuch Aur Sochu, Dil Ko Acha Nahi Lagta

Doston Ki Mehfil Mein Khada hoon,
Par Naa Jaane Kyon Yahan koi Apna nahi lagta...

Keh Gaye Woh Kuch Yuh Ishaaro-Ishaaro mein,
Ke ab uss Baat Ko alfaazo mein Kehna acha nahi lagta...

Har Ek Rishto ko Salaam hai "KHWAISH" ka,
Par naa jaane kyon itni tadap hai Mohabaat mein,
Iss rishte se gehra aur koi rishta nahi lagta....

Mujhe Yakeen hai asaan nahi hai tera mujhse milna,
Par ab tera koi Waada Mujhe Jhoota nahi lagta

Milta hai sukoon is dil koi tere hi Khyaalo se,
Par logon ke beech mein mera yuh Gumsuum sa Ho Jaana acha nahi lagta...

Log kehte hai Mohabbat ka nasha insaan ko deewana kar deta hai,
par na jaane kyon, "KHWAISH" ko ab inn baaton ka Bura nahi lagta

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«Reply #23 on: March 30, 2010, 07:26:08 PM »
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Talat ji,

Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne. Masoom si mohabbat hoti hi kuch aisi hai. Koshish karta hoon kabhi kabhi main bhi likhne ki par kuch khaas nahi likh paata. Kabhi kabhi shabd hi nahi milte kya likhun....

Apnapan tera kahin mujhse mere apno ko na lele,
Saadgi teri kahin mujhse mera imaan to na lele,
Humko to inkaar hai ki hume tujhse mohabbat hai,
Darte hain kahin ye jhoot humse hamari jaan to na lele......

Dil main hai uski hi tasveer, dikhaun kaise
Rooth gaya hai jaane kyun, manaun kaise

Mehfil main bas ek wo hi to apna tha
Khamoshi se uth gaya, ab bulaaun kaise

Wo tarasta hi raha sunne ko koi baat
Nazar se  hoti hai gugtugu, bataaun kaise

Sochti hoon liye haath main mohabbat ka chiragh
Zamaane ki aandhiyon se bachaaun kaise
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«Reply #24 on: September 03, 2010, 06:32:07 PM »
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Bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne Khwaish ji... bahut achcha likha hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mohabbat ka nasha hota hi aisa hai ki kuch aur achcha nahi lagta. Aur aapne isko itni khoobsurti se pesh kiya hai ki hum to fida ho gaye. Bahut khoob Khwaish ji. Bahut khoob.



Thankyou Soooooooooooo Much Kapilji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: September 04, 2010, 04:49:00 AM »
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Teri Yaadon mein Kuch Yuh Mashroof Hoon,
Ke Tere Siwa Kuch Aur Sochu, Dil Ko Acha Nahi Lagta

Doston Ki Mehfil Mein Khada hoon,
Par Naa Jaane Kyon Yahan koi Apna nahi lagta...

Keh Gaye Woh Kuch Yuh Ishaaro-Ishaaro mein,
Ke ab uss Baat Ko alfaazo mein Kehna acha nahi lagta...

Har Ek Rishto ko Salaam hai "KHWAISH" ka,
Par naa jaane kyon itni tadap hai Mohabaat mein,
Iss rishte se gehra aur koi rishta nahi lagta....

Mujhe Yakeen hai asaan nahi hai tera mujhse milna,
Par ab tera koi Waada Mujhe Jhoota nahi lagta

Milta hai sukoon is dil koi tere hi Khyaalo se,
Par logon ke beech mein mera yuh Gumsuum sa Ho Jaana acha nahi lagta...

Log kehte hai Mohabbat ka nasha insaan ko deewana kar deta hai,
par na jaane kyon, "KHWAISH" ko ab inn baaton ka Bura nahi lagta


bht hi dilkash peshkash hai ye aapki khwaish ji...
har sher apne aap me best ji...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
par kuch shikayetein karen hum aapse....lijiye suniye....

Tu kisi aur ko dekhe ,muskuraye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta
Dil k dard kisi aur ko sunaye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Tere kareeb aane k liye taras rahi hun main kabse aur
Tu jab auron ko kareeb laye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Maana k hai tere kai chahne wale ee mere sanam
Lekin tu kisi aur ko chahe ye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Dekhna meri aur bhari mehfil me chupke se aur nazar fer lena
Tera mujhse yun nigahein churana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Har dard ki parwaah nahin karti main mere sanam lekin
Tera kisi aur ki gazal gungunana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Mana k bht buri hun main nahin salika mujhe jeene ka
Lekin tera mujhe yun palkon pe bithake nazron se girana
Mujhe achcha nahin lagta…..


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«Reply #26 on: September 04, 2010, 01:07:42 PM »
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Sabse Pahle To Mafi Chahta Hun Khwaish Bhai Ki
Mere Nazar Badi Derr Ke Baad Padi...
Aur Bhai Kya Khub Mehakta Hua Kalaam Nazar Kiya Hai Aapne
Har Lafz Muhabbat Ke Nashe Mein Dooba Hua Sa Laga...

Bahut Khub Bhai Mere...


Khush Rahiye...


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Bahut Bahut Shukriya majid Bhai..Apane apna waqt diya humein aur kya chaahiye..
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«Reply #27 on: September 04, 2010, 02:25:39 PM »
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Teri Yaadon mein Kuch Yuh Mashroof Hoon,
Ke Tere Siwa Kuch Aur Sochu, Dil Ko Acha Nahi Lagta

Doston Ki Mehfil Mein Khada hoon,
Par Naa Jaane Kyon Yahan koi Apna nahi lagta...

Keh Gaye Woh Kuch Yuh Ishaaro-Ishaaro mein,
Ke ab uss Baat Ko alfaazo mein Kehna acha nahi lagta...

Har Ek Rishto ko Salaam hai "KHWAISH" ka,
Par naa jaane kyon itni tadap hai Mohabaat mein,
Iss rishte se gehra aur koi rishta nahi lagta....

Mujhe Yakeen hai asaan nahi hai tera mujhse milna,
Par ab tera koi Waada Mujhe Jhoota nahi lagta

Milta hai sukoon is dil koi tere hi Khyaalo se,
Par logon ke beech mein mera yuh Gumsuum sa Ho Jaana acha nahi lagta...

Log kehte hai Mohabbat ka nasha insaan ko deewana kar deta hai,
par na jaane kyon, "KHWAISH" ko ab inn baaton ka Bura nahi lagta




Khwaish sahab bhoot khoob........daad qubool keejiye apni is achi takhleeq ke liyN



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«Reply #28 on: September 04, 2010, 02:30:07 PM »
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Bohot khoob Khwaish Applause Applause Applause

Dil main hai uski hi tasveer, dikhaun kaise
Rooth gaya hai jaane kyun, manaun kaise

Mehfil main bas ek wo hi to apna tha
Khamoshi se uth gaya, ab bulaaun kaise

Wo tarasta hi raha sunne ko koi baat
Nazar se  hoti hai gugtugu, bataaun kaise

Sochti hoon liye haath main mohabbat ka chiragh
Zamaane ki aandhiyon se bachaaun kaise


Hamesha hi ki tarhaN bhut khoob, isse pehle nazar nahi padi thi is ghazal par bhut khoob...........daad hazir hai qbool keejiye




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