Taish- humara hai magar fir bhi HUMARA ho nahi pata...!!

by ghayal_shayar on March 10, 2013, 02:12:50 PM
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«Reply #30 on: March 16, 2013, 07:46:30 PM »
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taish bhai , wah wah wah wah wah wah wah aur sirf wah kya baat hai behrmeN likhi gayee is ghazal ke liye meri dili mubarakbaad qubool kareN. aur kya ashaar kaheN haiN har shair ek nagine ki manind jada hai aapne , khas taur se in ash'aar ke liye dil ki gehraiyoN se daaaad qubool kareN.


tumhara naam likhne ki ijazat chin gayi jab se,

jo koi sher likhta hooN to poora ho nahi pata..





dheron daaad aur rau qubool kareN




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ye aansu jo ibadat ki nishaani haiN mere humdum,

main chaahuN bhi jo kaafir ban.na aisa ho nahi pata.

kya baat hai wah wah wah.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



 


aarish bhai aapka shukraguzaar huN ki aapne ise padhne ki jehmiyat uthaayi aur itni tassalli se reply kiya, ye mei khusnaseebi hai ki aapko ye ghazal pasand aayi, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aage v kuch aisa likh paaun jo aapko itna hi bhaaye, bas aap yuNhi humesha saath dete rahiyega aur hausla afzaayi karte rahiye... Usual Smile
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«Reply #31 on: March 16, 2013, 08:06:00 PM »
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Beh'r- 1222 1222 1222 1222


jo tujhse dil laga, ab dil lagana ho nahi pata,
ke vo jaisa bhi kehti hai maiN waisa ho nahi pata..

badi tareef sun kar maiN huN is dar par chala aaya,
fakat itna bata kyuN maiN tumhara ho nahi pata..

tumhara naam likhne ki ijazat chin gayi jab se,
jo koi sher likhta hooN to poora ho nahi pata..

mohabbat dono ko hai par na ik dooje ke ho paye
humara hai magar fir bhi humara ho nahi pata..

talaatum to hazaaroN ishq ki raahoN meN milte haiN,
yahaaN doobe bina koi kinara ho nahi pata..

use mujhse shikayat hai ke chaahat kuch adhoori hai,
main kyun toota hua sa ek sitaara ho nahi pata..

main ro kar bhool jata huN judaayi ke jo hain lamhe,
mohabbat dard hai aisa bhulaana ho nahi pata..

mere maathe pe likh di daastaaneN waqt ne saari,
ke maiN jiska bhi hota hun vo mera ho nahi pata.

kadam aaNkhoN pe padte haiN to aaNkheN bheeg jaati haiN,
meri aankhon ko ulfat ka sahaara ho nahiN pata..

kisi se baat hoti hai to teri baat karta hooN,
jo mujhse jhoothi koi baat karna ho nahi pata..

ye aansu jo ibadat ki nishaani haiN mere humdum,
main chaahuN bhi jo kaafir ban.na aisa ho nahi pata..

gale jab tumse milta huN bada hi chain milta hai,
teri julfoN ke pehlu meN saweraa ho nahi pata..


wah wah bahut khoob..........!
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«Reply #32 on: March 18, 2013, 11:24:50 PM »
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bahut dino baad ek duubi hui ghazal mili padhne ko, mazaa aa gaya, very good, keep it up, bahut shandaar

saaheb bahut dinoN baad aap humari mehfil emN aaye aur itni tareef i, humare liye yahi bahut hai, bas aage v yahi kosish rahegi ki aapko pasand aane laayak likh sakuN, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #33 on: March 19, 2013, 01:39:36 PM »
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सुंदर अति सुंदर अति सुंदर,


shukriya saaheb.....
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«Reply #34 on: March 21, 2013, 02:48:20 AM »
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sir, with a rau i do aapreicate this ghazal

bahayaat saaheb, thanks a tonne for ur appreciation and the rau... Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: March 21, 2013, 03:16:33 AM »
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Waah waah waah waah zabardastttttttttt!! bahut hi khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar, khaastaur pe "talatum" aur "ibadat ki nishani" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye. DheroN daad-o-mubarakbaad aur ek Rau bhi magar baa'd meiN.
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«Reply #36 on: March 22, 2013, 02:17:12 PM »
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wah wah bahut khoob..........!

sheba ji shukraguzaar hun aapka, ki aapne is kosish ko padha aur saraaha, umeed karta hun ki aapka saath aur aapki hausla afzaayi yunhi aage v hume milti rahegi...
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«Reply #37 on: March 22, 2013, 11:35:43 PM »
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Waah waah waah waah zabardastttttttttt!! bahut hi khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar, khaastaur pe "talatum" aur "ibadat ki nishani" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye. DheroN daad-o-mubarakbaad aur ek Rau bhi magar baa'd meiN.

shukriya iftakhar saaheb, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko khayal aur ghazal dono pasand aaye, aur rau ke liye v aapka shukraguzaar huN... Umeed karta huN ki aage v aapka saath yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #38 on: April 30, 2013, 09:45:21 PM »
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Congratulations,

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«Reply #39 on: May 01, 2013, 05:35:26 PM »
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 Bahut umda peshkash hai laakho salaam aapke kalam ke naam

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«Reply #40 on: May 02, 2013, 12:51:59 PM »
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Congratulations,

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thanks a lot Mr Admin, a pleasure indeed to be a part of the newsletter... Hope to keep finding place in it...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: May 03, 2013, 12:59:20 AM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai laakho salaam aapke kalam ke naam

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prem saaheb, is tareef aur hausla afzaayi ke liye tah-e-dil se aapka shukraguzaar huN, umeed karta huN aapka saath hume aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa....
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