Taish- ik marasim ke TUKDE numaayaN hue haiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 26, 2013, 06:02:21 PM
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Beh'r likh raha hun taaki confusions na hoN, dono interchangable beh'reN hain...

Beh'r-2122 / 1122 / 1122 / 22
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ik marasim* ke jo tukde yuN numayaaN# hue haiN,
jaane kyun aaj bhi vo itne pareshaaN hue haiN...

*Relation, #Clear, distinct.

bheed ki harkaton se ab ye pata chalta hai,
jinhe bandar kaha tha kal vahi insaaN hue haiN...

hai khushi ab aa nahi paati meri zindagi meN,
jo mere jism ke ye zakhm hi darbaaN hue haiN...

ab kisi ki bhi mohabbat pe yakeeN mujhko nahiN,
haadse itne yahaaN ishq ke dauraaN hue haiN...

saamne dard hi koi tere aata hai nahi,
zakhm-e-ulfat bhi tujhe dekh ke pinhaN* hue haiN...

*Hide.

tere aane se maiN kaafir ho gaya hooN yuN sanam,
sharm se bhaari farishtoN ke yuN mizshgaaN* hue haiN...

*Eyelashes.

saare mahaul meN khusboo jo hai yun phail gayi,
shahr jinme tu raha aaj gulistaaN hue haiN...

'taish' kab tak yun hansi me tu chupaayegaa ghum,
jugnuoN se ye tere ashq farozaaN* hue haiN...

*Luminous.
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2013, 06:23:31 PM »
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hai khushi ab aa nahi paati meri zindagi meN,
jo mere jism ke ye zakhm hi darbaaN hue haiN

waah waah taish ji kya khoob likha hai,
daad in ashaar per khaas.
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2013, 06:29:39 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 26, 2013, 06:02:21 PM
Beh'r likh raha hun taaki confusions na hoN, dono interchangable beh'reN hain...

Beh'r-2122 / 1122 / 1122 / 22
      2122 / 1122 / 1122 / 112

ik marasim* ke jo tukde yuN numayaaN# hue haiN,
jaane kyun aaj bhi vo itne pareshaaN hue haiN...

*Relation, #Clear, distinct.

bheed ki harkaton se ab ye pata chalta hai,
jinhe bandar kaha tha kal vahi insaaN hue haiN...

hai khushi ab aa nahi paati meri zindagi meN,
jo mere jism ke ye zakhm hi darbaaN hue haiN...

ab kisi ki bhi mohabbat pe yakeeN mujhko nahiN,
haadse itne yahaaN ishq ke dauraaN hue haiN...

saamne dard bhi koi tere aata hai nahi,
zakhm-e-ulfat bhi tujhe dekh ke pinhaN* hue haiN...

*Hide.

tere aane se maiN kaafir ho gaya hooN yuN sanam,
sharm se bhaari farishtoN ke yuN mizshgaaN* hue haiN...

*Eyelashes.

saare mahaul meN khusboo jo hai yun phail gayi,
shahr jinme tu raha aaj gulistaaN hue haiN...

'taish' kab tak yun hansi me tu chupaayegaa ghum,
jugnuoN me ye tere ashq farozaaN* hue haiN...

*Luminous.
waah taish bahut sunder likhane lage ho bhut umda, kamaal aise hi chand choone ki tayaari mein lage raho  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2013, 08:38:25 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Taish ji,
Bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne.Matla behad pasand aaya.Appko dili mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2013, 10:13:11 PM »
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'taish' kab tak yun hansi me tu chupaayegaa ghum,
jugnuoN se ye tere ashq farozaaN* hue haiN...

Wah janaab dil khush ho gaya aapke kalaam par aane se... Yu hi padhne ka mauka dete rahe...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,

Abrar.
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2013, 11:07:30 PM »
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laajawaab ,...behtereen ghazal ,........bohat c daad,...........
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2013, 02:28:38 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on May 26, 2013, 06:23:31 PM
hai khushi ab aa nahi paati meri zindagi meN,
jo mere jism ke ye zakhm hi darbaaN hue haiN

waah waah taish ji kya khoob likha hai,
daad in ashaar per khaas.
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janaab sahal saaheb, daad ka shukriya, jaan kar khushi hui ki vo aashaar aapko pasand aaye, umeed karta hun aage bhi aapko pasand aane laayak kuch likhta rahun...
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2013, 01:03:20 PM »
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Quote from: rashmisangeeta on May 26, 2013, 06:29:39 PM
waah taish bahut sunder likhane lage ho bhut umda, kamaal aise hi chand choone ki tayaari mein lage raho  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya rashmi ji, meri khushkismati ki aapko aisa laga, umeed karta huN aapka saath aur aashirwaad yuNhi saath rahe... waise iraada chaand ke paar jaane ka hai, use sirf choo ke hume kahaaN kush haasil hoga... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2013, 01:35:14 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 26, 2013, 08:38:25 PM
Wah,Wah,Wah Taish ji,
Bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne.Matla behad pasand aaya.Appko dili mubarakbaad.

shukriya sudhir ji, ye humari khushnaseebi ki aapki matla pasand aaya, umeed yahi karta huN ki aage bhi aapka saath hume isi qadar milta rahegaaa...
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2013, 02:04:48 PM »
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waah waah waah. taish ji. badi khoobsurat kalaam hai. kya khayalaath hai. aur yeh do sher bahut pyaare hai. jo mere dil ko choo gaye.

hai khushi ab aa nahi paati meri zindagi meN,
jo mere jism ke ye zakhm hi darbaaN hue haiN


saamne dard bhi koi tere aata hai nahi,
zakhm-e-ulfat bhi tujhe dekh ke pinhaN* hue haiN...
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2013, 03:12:58 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on May 26, 2013, 11:07:30 PM
laajawaab ,...behtereen ghazal ,........bohat c daad,...........

laaiba ji bahut bahut shukriya ye taareef bakshne ke liye, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath deti raheN...!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2013, 08:06:03 PM »
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Awesome Taish ji... bahut bahut khoob.. damdaar.. asardaar.. dhero daad.. Usual Smile Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2013, 08:53:29 PM »
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Waaahhh bahaut hi acchha likha hai Taish ji .... Apke aur bhi qalaam ke muntazir rahenge ... Dheron daad !!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2013, 10:37:47 AM »
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Quote from: mohdabrar on May 26, 2013, 10:13:11 PM
Wah janaab dil khush ho gaya aapke kalaam par aane se... Yu hi padhne ka mauka dete rahe...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,

Abrar.

are janab ye aapki meharbani ki aapne itni izzat bakshi, waise aapko auroN se to jyada hi mauka milta hai Winking, bas yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte rahiye huzoor, aur hum bhi likhne ki kosish jaari rakheNge...
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waah waah waah. taish ji. badi khoobsurat kalaam hai. kya khayalaath hai. aur yeh do sher bahut pyaare hai. jo mere dil ko choo gaye.

hai khushi ab aa nahi paati meri zindagi meN,
jo mere jism ke ye zakhm hi darbaaN hue haiN


saamne dard bhi koi tere aata hai nahi,
zakhm-e-ulfat bhi tujhe dekh ke pinhaN* hue haiN...




aqsh ji jaan kar khushi hui ki ye sher aapke dil ko choo sake aage  bhi ye kosish qaayam rahegi, umeed karta hun aapka saath bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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