Taish- marasim EHTIYAATAN torr dena chaahta hooN maiN...!!

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Ek baar fir haazir hun bazm meN ek ghazal le kar, umeed karta huN ki jyada niraash na karun...



Hume jo dard deta tha, vo kehta hai dawaa hoon main,
Chubhota tha mujhe jo kya use ab chubh raha hoon main..

Ye naubat kal jo aayegi to sharmindaa na ho jaayeN,
Marasim ehtiyaatan torr dena chaahta hooN main..

KahaaN ko chal pada hooN main liye roothi hui kismat,
Meri manjil kahaan par thi, kahaan ko chal pada huN maiN..

Teri dehleez per aankhon ke ye roshan diye rakh kar..
Akela andhiyaara dhoondta jo fir raha hoon maiN..

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN..

Vo kehte hain ke milta hai jo bhi kismat se milta hai,
main kismat hi badal dunga ke khud ka khud khuda hooN maiN..

Mujhe ab taish ulfat ki riyaayat chaahiye tumse,
Main chilla chilla ke kehta hun, ke ik bewafa hoon main..
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2013, 04:27:11 AM »
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bahut bahut khoobsoorat ek rau bhee
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2013, 04:31:14 AM »
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Ek baar fir haazir hun bazm meN ek ghazal le kar, umeed karta huN ki jyada niraash na karun...



Hume jo dard deta tha, vo kehta hai dawaa hoon main,
Chubhota tha mujhe jo kya use ab chubh raha hoon main..

Ye naubat kal jo aayegi to sharmindaa na ho jaayeN,
Marasim ehtiyaatan torr dena chaahta hooN main..

KahaaN ko chal pada hooN main liye roothi hui kismat,
Meri manjil kahaan par thi, kahaan ko chal pada huN maiN..

Teri dehleez per aankhon ke ye roshan diye rakh kar..
Akela andhiyaara dhoondta jo fir raha hoon maiN..

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN..

Vo kehte hain ke milta hai jo bhi kismat se milta hai,
main kismat hi badal dunga ke khud ka khud khuda hooN maiN..

Mujhe ab taish ulfat ki riyaayat chaahiye tumse,
Main chilla chilla ke kehta hun, ke ik bewafa hoon main..



Bahut Bahut Khooob Taish Ji...

Teri dehleez per aankhon ke ye roshan diye rakh kar..
Akela andhiyaara dhoondta jo fir raha hoon maiN..

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN..

 Waaaaah waaaaaaah Waaaaaah...

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"Main Kismat Hi badal Dunga Ke Khud Ka Khud Khuda Hoon Main" Hmmmmm.. Hausla zaroori Hai Par Shayad Khud Ko yeh Darja De Dena Galat... Agar Meri baat Aapko galat lage To Muaafi chaunga.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2013, 05:12:59 AM »
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behtareen gajal.. Sir!
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2013, 05:23:21 AM »
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KahaaN ko chal pada hooN main liye roothi hui kismat,
Meri manjil kahaan par thi, kahaan ko chal pada huN maiN..

Vo kehte hain ke milta hai jo bhi kismat se milta hai,
main kismat hi badal dunga ke khud ka khud khuda hooN maiN..

Wah wah wah..bahut ravaan ghazal pesh kee hai..
vaise to sabhee ashaar behad khoob hai par..maqta aur upar likhe do ashaar..javaab nahee.
dil khush ho gaya..

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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2013, 07:40:34 AM »
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bahut bahut khoobsoorat ek rau bhee

thanks for the compliment and rau sir...
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2013, 07:47:10 AM »
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behad khubsurat taish ji.. dheron mubarakbaad aapko.. Usual Smile plus ek rau.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2013, 08:05:55 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2013, 08:27:15 AM »
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Ek baar fir haazir hun bazm meN ek ghazal le kar, umeed karta huN ki jyada niraash na karun...



Hume jo dard deta tha, vo kehta hai dawaa hoon main,
Chubhota tha mujhe jo kya use ab chubh raha hoon main..

Ye naubat kal jo aayegi to sharmindaa na ho jaayeN,
Marasim ehtiyaatan torr dena chaahta hooN main..

KahaaN ko chal pada hooN main liye roothi hui kismat,
Meri manjil kahaan par thi, kahaan ko chal pada huN maiN..

Teri dehleez per aankhon ke ye roshan diye rakh kar..
Akela andhiyaara dhoondta jo fir raha hoon maiN..

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN..

Vo kehte hain ke milta hai jo bhi kismat se milta hai,
main kismat hi badal dunga ke khud ka khud khuda hooN maiN..

Mujhe ab taish ulfat ki riyaayat chaahiye tumse,
Main chilla chilla ke kehta hun, ke ik bewafa hoon main..



wah wah wah taish ek rau deti hoon...........!
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2013, 09:00:22 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kya kahne, janab bade hi gehre gote lagaa rahe haiN aap.. yaqeenan behad khooba aur umdaa gazal kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile
Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye..,
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2013, 09:34:02 AM »
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Waah waah waah Bhusan jee, bahut hi umda ghazal kahi hai aapne, bahut pasand aayi, iss she'r ke liye khususann daad aur ek Rau bhi qubool kareiN meri taraf se:

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2013, 10:54:30 AM »
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Ek baar fir haazir hun bazm meN ek ghazal le kar, umeed karta huN ki jyada niraash na karun...



Hume jo dard deta tha, vo kehta hai dawaa hoon main,
Chubhota tha mujhe jo kya use ab chubh raha hoon main..

Ye naubat kal jo aayegi to sharmindaa na ho jaayeN,
Marasim ehtiyaatan torr dena chaahta hooN main..

KahaaN ko chal pada hooN main liye roothi hui kismat,
Meri manjil kahaan par thi, kahaan ko chal pada huN maiN..

Teri dehleez per aankhon ke ye roshan diye rakh kar..
Akela andhiyaara dhoondta jo fir raha hoon maiN..

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN..

Vo kehte hain ke milta hai jo bhi kismat se milta hai,
main kismat hi badal dunga ke khud ka khud khuda hooN maiN..

Mujhe ab taish ulfat ki riyaayat chaahiye tumse,
Main chilla chilla ke kehta hun, ke ik bewafa hoon main..





Waaaaaah waaaaaaaaah Buht umda jnab,,,, dheroon daaad
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2013, 08:21:36 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Taish Ji...

Teri dehleez per aankhon ke ye roshan diye rakh kar..
Akela andhiyaara dhoondta jo fir raha hoon maiN..

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN..

 Waaaaah waaaaaaah Waaaaaah...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"Main Kismat Hi badal Dunga Ke Khud Ka Khud Khuda Hoon Main" Hmmmmm.. Hausla zaroori Hai Par Shayad Khud Ko yeh Darja De Dena Galat... Agar Meri baat Aapko galat lage To Muaafi chaunga.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


pehle to shukriya khwaish saahab, is nacheez ki kosish ko saraahne ke liye...

Main aapki baat se sehmat hun ki khud ko hum khuda ka darja nahiN de sakte, par neki se hum apni kismat jaroor badal sakte haiN, aur maine bas vahi kehne ki kosish ki hai, ab agar isse aapki kisi bhi bhaavna ko thes pahuNchi ho to maiN uske liye maafi ka talabgaar huN...
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2013, 04:47:58 AM »
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behtareen gajal.. Sir!

daad aur hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya champak ji....
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«Reply #14 on: April 10, 2013, 07:42:31 AM »
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KahaaN ko chal pada hooN main liye roothi hui kismat,
Meri manjil kahaan par thi, kahaan ko chal pada huN maiN..

Vo kehte hain ke milta hai jo bhi kismat se milta hai,
main kismat hi badal dunga ke khud ka khud khuda hooN maiN..

Wah wah wah..bahut ravaan ghazal pesh kee hai..
vaise to sabhee ashaar behad khoob hai par..maqta aur upar likhe do ashaar..javaab nahee.
dil khush ho gaya..




mukesh saaheb aapki taaref ka shukraguzaar huN, ahcha lagta hai jab aap jaise aala log tareef arte haiN, umeed karta hun aage bhi aapko niraash nahiN karuNga, bas aage bhi yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN... Usual Smile
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