Taish- bachi-khuchi TAMEEZ dhundta hooN maiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on June 08, 2013, 01:58:00 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 16, 2013, 01:11:31 AM »
diye mujhe haiN ishq me sanam ne tohfe bahut,
nishaaN haiN jinpe khooN ke vo kameez dhoNta hooN maiN...

bahut mila hun in adab ke logoN se janaab maiN,
hai 'taish' naam ka jo badtameez dhundta hooN maiN...

uffffffffff kya mast gazal kahi hai taish...... sachhiiiiii maza aagaya padhkar sply ye do sher to bas  chha gaye ........
aaj se tumhara naam badtameez taish hi rakh dete hain kyun chalega naa... Huh?

anamika ji pehle to shukriya is ghazal ki tareef ke liye, aur waise aapka diya ye naam chalegaa nahin daudegaa ji, so do use it freely... tongue3 Winking
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #31 on: June 16, 2013, 01:14:29 AM »
Taish ji[/color] ,
is Ghazal ki jitni tareef kii jaye woh kam hain .
   
                       Hats off to you! To YOU SIR !

arghya ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya is izzat afzaayi ke liye, bas aage bhi aap humara saath yunhi nibhaate rahiyegaa...
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #32 on: June 16, 2013, 01:15:26 AM »
wah kaya baat hai....bahoot khoob likha....

poooja ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karti raheN...!! Usual Smile
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suman59
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«Reply #33 on: December 15, 2013, 04:17:02 PM »
Bahut waqt baad ek din meN do ghazaleN likh paya huN, ya sach kahuN to beh'r seekhne ke baad shaayad pehle mauka hai ki ek din meN do ghazaleN likhi haiN, pata nahiN kaisi bani hai, par umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga aap sabhi ko...!!



khudaayi me bachi khuchi tameez dhundta hooN maiN,
jo aadmi ko aadmi ajeez dhuNdta hooN maiN...

ke baat meri saari maan.ni pade jo jeest ko,
to zindagi ke naam ki kaneez dhundta hooN maiN...

diye mujhe haiN ishq me sanam ne tohfe bahut,
nishaaN haiN jinpe khooN ke vo kameez dhoNta hooN maiN...

kabhi maiN bhi to unhe jaanuN jinhe sajde haiN kiye,
bataaye jo khuda vahi rameez* dhundta hooN maiN...

*learned

bahut mila hun in adab ke logoN se janaab maiN,
hai 'taish' naam ka jo badtameez dhundta hooN maiN...

Wah wah bahut umda ghazal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
taish je aapko bahut daad
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