Taish- bachi-khuchi TAMEEZ dhundta hooN maiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on June 08, 2013, 01:58:00 AM
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Bahut waqt baad ek din meN do ghazaleN likh paya huN, ya sach kahuN to beh'r seekhne ke baad shaayad pehle mauka hai ki ek din meN do ghazaleN likhi haiN, pata nahiN kaisi bani hai, par umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga aap sabhi ko...!!



khudaayi me bachi khuchi tameez dhundta hooN maiN,
jo aadmi ko aadmi ajeez dhuNdta hooN maiN...

ke baat meri saari maan.ni pade jo jeest ko,
to zindagi ke naam ki kaneez dhundta hooN maiN...

diye mujhe haiN ishq me sanam ne tohfe bahut,
nishaaN haiN jinpe khooN ke vo kameez dhoNta hooN maiN...

kabhi maiN bhi to unhe jaanuN jinhe sajde haiN kiye,
bataaye jo khuda vahi rameez* dhundta hooN maiN...

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bahut mila hun in adab ke logoN se janaab maiN,
hai 'taish' naam ka jo badtameez dhundta hooN maiN...
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2013, 02:04:53 AM »
Bahut waqt baad ek din meN do ghazaleN likh paya huN, ya sach kahuN to beh'r seekhne ke baad shaayad pehle mauka hai ki ek din meN do ghazaleN likhi haiN, pata nahiN kaisi bani hai, par umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga aap sabhi ko...!!



khudaayi me bachi khuchi tameez dhundta hooN maiN,
jo aadmi ko aadmi ajeez dhuNdta hooN maiN...

ke baat meri saari maan.ni pade jo jeest ko,
to zindagi ke naam ki kaneez dhundta hooN maiN...

diye mujhe haiN ishq me sanam ne tohfe bahut,
nishaaN haiN jinpe khooN ke vo kameez dhoNta hooN maiN...

kabhi maiN bhi to unhe jaanuN jinhe sajde haiN kiye,
bataaye jo khuda vahi rameez* dhundta hooN maiN...

*learned

bahut mila hun in adab ke logoN se janaab maiN,
hai 'taish' naam ka jo badtameez dhundta hooN maiN...
Bahut Khoob..........
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2013, 02:58:44 AM »
Bahut waqt baad ek din meN do ghazaleN likh paya huN, ya sach kahuN to beh'r seekhne ke baad shaayad pehle mauka hai ki ek din meN do ghazaleN likhi haiN, pata nahiN kaisi bani hai, par umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga aap sabhi ko...!!



khudaayi me bachi khuchi tameez dhundta hooN maiN,
jo aadmi ko aadmi ajeez dhuNdta hooN maiN...

ke baat meri saari maan.ni pade jo jeest ko,
to zindagi ke naam ki kaneez dhundta hooN maiN...

diye mujhe haiN ishq me sanam ne tohfe bahut,
nishaaN haiN jinpe khooN ke vo kameez dhoNta hooN maiN...

kabhi maiN bhi to unhe jaanuN jinhe sajde haiN kiye,
bataaye jo khuda vahi rameez* dhundta hooN maiN...

*learned

bahut mila hun in adab ke logoN se janaab maiN,
hai 'taish' naam ka jo badtameez dhundta hooN maiN... Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


bahut khoob taish....!
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2013, 05:58:55 AM »
waah! bahut khoob! daad!

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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2013, 08:42:46 AM »
Bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2013, 09:43:39 AM »
to theek hai ham se bhee doosraa rau qubool karo miyaan
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2013, 12:12:13 PM »
Bahut Khoob..........

shukriya mohtarma ise pasand karne ke liye...
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2013, 12:35:39 PM »
waah waah taish ji.. kamaal kar diya.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2013, 01:32:54 PM »
Good one Taish jee
Par jyada aur jaldi likhna hamara target naheen ho na chaahiye.
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2013, 02:23:59 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2013, 04:47:58 PM »
Waah kya baat hai Taish bhai ... Barha rawaan aur zinda kalaam hai ... Path kar bahaut anand aaya... Dheron daad !!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2013, 05:02:19 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Taish Bhai,
Bahut umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne.
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2013, 07:19:17 PM »
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har baar ki tarah bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi taishji. hazaron dili daad is khoobsurat peshkash par.
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2013, 02:08:44 AM »

bahut khoob taish....!


sheba ji bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2013, 03:50:01 PM »
waah! bahut khoob! daad!

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aapki daad humare sar aankhon pe kaash saaheb, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...!!
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