Taish- naam meN mera NAAM rakhte haiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on July 22, 2013, 07:28:20 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 23, 2013, 12:27:15 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob Taish ji....!!!
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«Reply #16 on: July 23, 2013, 12:43:24 AM »
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naam meN mera naam rakhte haiN,
ishq mujhse tamaam rakhte hain...

sach me kya.... tab to apna no nahi lagega sad5

unke lab khusbu ke hain saudagar,
lafzoN meN vo kimaam rakhte hain...

uuufffffffffff......... so romantic....  love4 love4 love4

jo tamancha, churi, kataari rakheN,
ab vahi muNh meN raam rakhte haiN...

waahhhhhhhhhhh kya tanz hai janaab bht khuubbb  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

humko khudgarz kehti hai duniya,
kaam se bas jo kaam rakhte haiN...

aajkal ka yahi chalan hai kya kiya jaaye....  sad11 sad11 sad11

ab mohabbat humare bas ki nahi,
vo bahut ooNcha daam rakhte haiN...

ufffffffff ek aur teer.... mastam mast   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

har jagah bewafa kahe tu hume,
hum bhi khabreN tamaam rakhte haiN...

kya baat hai ji aap to pakke jasoos ho.. mast sher simply superbbbb  Applause Applause

dekhte ladkiyoN ko log yuN yahaaN,
ke nazar meN hazaam rakhte haiN...

just awesome... hakikat ki bayani behad alag andaaz me  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

roti, kapda, makaan chaahiye bas,
chaahateN hum bhi aam rakhte hain...

bas itna sa khwaab hai.... ye song yaad aagaya ye padhkar... good 1 again  icon_thumleft

zindagi meN hai koi ab na raha,
aaine ka salaam rakhte hain...

mastttttttttttttt..... Applause Applause Applause

paani ko kya pata nahiN tha 'taish',
hum vahaaN chaar dhaam rakhte haiN...

 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

Maqta Uttrakhand ko dedicated hai...


fultoo fataakkk chumeshwari gazal taish ji.... yunhi likhte rahiye aur khudko aur apne khyalon ki rawani ko aur tez dhaar dijiye... aapki adaygee kamaal hai...
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«Reply #17 on: July 23, 2013, 01:48:00 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Taish bhaaii bahut i umdaah ghazal kahi hai aapne
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«Reply #18 on: July 23, 2013, 02:34:52 AM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaah, bahut khoob, bahut hi umda Bhushan jee, laajawaab, maza aa gaya padh ke. 2nd, 4th, 7th, 8th sher bahut pasand aaye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #19 on: July 23, 2013, 04:31:45 AM »
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behad umdaa ar lajawaab ghazal se nawaza h bazm ko aapne Taish ji
itni gehraai hai ghazal me aapki bas kho se gye hum

dher saari daad aur duayen aapko
khush rahie

shukriya

saaheb aapki duaayeN mere sar, aur aapki izzat afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 23, 2013, 10:22:37 AM »
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wonderful

saini sir thanks a tonne... Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: July 23, 2013, 07:21:13 PM »
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wah wah and also thanks for dedicating lines to my native place Uttrakhand Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower

Sir thank for the appreciation, and it was my pleasure that i cud write 2 lines for the current scenarion of the place... Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: July 23, 2013, 07:33:50 PM »
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bar bar jitne jyada click kar sakun utne hie click karna chahun salut icon par...... zabardast lajawab bemisaal aapke bhi fan hone lage hai hum hasan sir aur saini sir khawahish ji ki tarah......once again salut u sir...
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«Reply #23 on: July 23, 2013, 11:58:01 PM »
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bahut khubsurat kalaam se nawaza hai taish saheb.dheron daad aur mubarakbad

hasan sir, aapse hausla afzaayi paa kar dil ko bahut chain milta hai, badi tasalli hui ye jaan kar ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, umeed karta huN aapka saath aur aashirwaad aage v yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #24 on: July 24, 2013, 05:20:51 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Hmmmmmmmmmm ek aur dhamaka taishji. waah waah kya kehne bahut hi umdaaaaa kalaaaaaaam se nawaza hai aapne. mujhe toh ek saal bhi poore nahi hue. mashaallah aapne 8 saal poore kiye. phir toh aap humse bahut senior ho gaye. isiliye toh kehti hoon aapke kalaamon se bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai. ab toh yakeen ho gaya hoga na aapko.
aaj ki ghazal mein kuch sher bahut achche hai. waise har sher mein alag baat hai par yeh sher dil ke qareeb rahe.

jo tamancha, churi, kataari rakheN,
ab vahi muNh meN raam rakhte haiN...

humko khudgarz kehti hai duniya,
kaam se bas jo kaam rakhte haiN...

ab mohabbat humare bas ki nahi,
vo bahut ooNcha daam rakhte haiN...

dekhte ladkiyoN ko log yuN yahaaN,
ke nazar meN hazaam rakhte haiN.
Kitna sach kaha hai aapne.

hazaron dili daad ji is khoobsurat kalaam par. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

are aqsh ji umar meN to chota hin hun aapse, aur dekhiye itna waqt hone ke baawjood aap jyada reputated haiN, to fir hisaab se aap senior haiN, aur seekhna to aisi cheez hai jo hum sab ek doosre se karte hain, seekhne ka process life long hai, kabhi khatm nahiN hota, waise aapne jo pyar diya uskeliye aapka shukraguzaar huN, umeed karta hun aapka saath aur aapki hausla afzaayi hume aage bhi yuNhi milti rahegi...
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«Reply #25 on: July 24, 2013, 08:22:22 PM »
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wah wah dhero daad
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«Reply #26 on: July 25, 2013, 05:25:40 AM »
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Bahot khooob - waaaah waaah waaah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

iqtedar saaheb shukriya, bas aage bhi yuNhi saath aur pyar dete rahiye....!!
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«Reply #27 on: July 25, 2013, 03:24:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob Taish ji....!!!


hriday saaheb tareef aur saath ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!!
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«Reply #28 on: July 25, 2013, 10:28:48 PM »
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naam meN mera naam rakhte haiN,
ishq mujhse tamaam rakhte hain...

sach me kya.... tab to apna no nahi lagega sad5

unke lab khusbu ke hain saudagar,
lafzoN meN vo kimaam rakhte hain...

uuufffffffffff......... so romantic....  love4 love4 love4

jo tamancha, churi, kataari rakheN,
ab vahi muNh meN raam rakhte haiN...

waahhhhhhhhhhh kya tanz hai janaab bht khuubbb  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

humko khudgarz kehti hai duniya,
kaam se bas jo kaam rakhte haiN...

aajkal ka yahi chalan hai kya kiya jaaye....  sad11 sad11 sad11

ab mohabbat humare bas ki nahi,
vo bahut ooNcha daam rakhte haiN...

ufffffffff ek aur teer.... mastam mast   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

har jagah bewafa kahe tu hume,
hum bhi khabreN tamaam rakhte haiN...

kya baat hai ji aap to pakke jasoos ho.. mast sher simply superbbbb  Applause Applause

dekhte ladkiyoN ko log yuN yahaaN,
ke nazar meN hazaam rakhte haiN...

just awesome... hakikat ki bayani behad alag andaaz me  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

roti, kapda, makaan chaahiye bas,
chaahateN hum bhi aam rakhte hain...

bas itna sa khwaab hai.... ye song yaad aagaya ye padhkar... good 1 again  icon_thumleft

zindagi meN hai koi ab na raha,
aaine ka salaam rakhte hain...

mastttttttttttttt..... Applause Applause Applause

paani ko kya pata nahiN tha 'taish',
hum vahaaN chaar dhaam rakhte haiN...

 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

Maqta Uttrakhand ko dedicated hai...


fultoo fataakkk chumeshwari gazal taish ji.... yunhi likhte rahiye aur khudko aur apne khyalon ki rawani ko aur tez dhaar dijiye... aapki adaygee kamaal hai...


is lambe chaude reply ka shukriya mohtarma, umeed karta huN ki aapka saath aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaaa...
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«Reply #29 on: July 26, 2013, 10:08:56 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Taish bhaaii bahut i umdaah ghazal kahi hai aapne

abhi saaheb pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya saaheb....
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