Taish- naam meN mera NAAM rakhte haiN...!!

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Abhi do din pehle hiN yahaaN mujhe 8 saal poore hue haiN, to haazir huN Ek aur ghazal ke saath bazm meN, ummeed hai aap apni raaye se jarur nawaazeNge...


naam meN mera naam rakhte haiN,
ishq mujhse tamaam rakhte hain...

unke lab khusbu ke hain saudagar,
lafzoN meN vo kimaam rakhte hain...

jo tamancha, churi, kataari rakheN,
ab vahi muNh meN raam rakhte haiN...

humko khudgarz kehti hai duniya,
kaam se bas jo kaam rakhte haiN...

ab mohabbat humare bas ki nahi,
vo bahut ooNcha daam rakhte haiN...

har jagah bewafa kahe tu hume,
hum bhi khabreN tamaam rakhte haiN...

dekhte ladkiyoN ko log yuN yahaaN,
ke nazar meN hazaam rakhte haiN...

roti, kapda, makaan chaahiye bas,
chaahateN hum bhi aam rakhte hain...

zindagi meN hai koi ab na raha,
aaine ka salaam rakhte hain...

paani ko kya pata nahiN tha 'taish',
hum vahaaN chaar dhaam rakhte haiN...

Maqta Uttrakhand ko dedicated hai...
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2013, 07:47:26 AM »
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Bhut Bhut Bhut Khobsoroot hai Taish bhai!!!!!.......Har ek Sher Kuch Na kuch Khass Khata hai....Yu hI Likhte Rahyie.....
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2013, 08:04:08 AM »
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So Nice.
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2013, 08:23:16 AM »
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Bhut Bhut Bhut Khobsoroot hai Taish bhai!!!!!.......Har ek Sher Kuch Na kuch Khass Khata hai....Yu hI Likhte Rahyie.....

pawan bhai is tareef aur izzat afzaayi ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukraguzaar hun, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2013, 08:34:03 AM »
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Abhi do din pehle hiN yahaaN mujhe 8 saal poore hue haiN, to haazir huN Ek aur ghazal ke saath bazm meN, ummeed hai aap apni raaye se jarur nawaazeNge...


naam meN mera naam rakhte haiN,
ishq humse tamaam rakhte hain...

unke lab khusbu ke hain saudagar,
lafzoN meN vo kimaam rakhte hain...

jo tamancha, churi, kataari rakheN,
ab vahi muNh meN raam rakhte haiN...

humko khudgarz kehti hai duniya,
kaam se bas jo kaam rakhte haiN...

ab mohabbat humare bas ki nahi,
vo bahut ooNcha daam rakhte haiN...

har jagah bewafa kahe tu hume,
hum bhi khabreN tamaam rakhte haiN...

dekhte ladkiyoN ko log yuN yahaaN,
ke nazar meN hazaam rakhte haiN...

roti, kapda, makaan chaahiye bas,
chaahateN hum bhi aam rakhte hain...

zindagi meN hai koi ab na raha,
aaine ka salaam rakhte hain...

paani ko kya pata nahiN tha 'taish',
hum vahaaN chaar dhaam rakhte haiN...

Maqta Uttrakhand ko dedicated hai...

i extend big hand being your presence and services with YOINDIA this much of years and my wishes to continue in similar passions years by years and your children to be a part of our YOINDIA in future. and you poem is nice taish....! hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2013, 08:41:17 AM »
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Abhi do din pehle hiN yahaaN mujhe 8 saal poore hue haiN, to haazir huN Ek aur ghazal ke saath bazm meN, ummeed hai aap apni raaye se jarur nawaazeNge...


naam meN mera naam rakhte haiN,
ishq humse tamaam rakhte hain...

unke lab khusbu ke hain saudagar,
lafzoN meN vo kimaam rakhte hain...

jo tamancha, churi, kataari rakheN,
ab vahi muNh meN raam rakhte haiN...

humko khudgarz kehti hai duniya,
kaam se bas jo kaam rakhte haiN...

ab mohabbat humare bas ki nahi,
vo bahut ooNcha daam rakhte haiN...

har jagah bewafa kahe tu hume,
hum bhi khabreN tamaam rakhte haiN...

dekhte ladkiyoN ko log yuN yahaaN,
ke nazar meN hazaam rakhte haiN...

roti, kapda, makaan chaahiye bas,
chaahateN hum bhi aam rakhte hain...

zindagi meN hai koi ab na raha,
aaine ka salaam rakhte hain...


Bahut Khub Taish Saheb
Ye Ashaar Bahut Pasand Aaye
Dili Dad Kabul Farmaaye Janaab


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


shihab
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2013, 09:00:12 AM »
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i extend big hand being your presence and services with YOINDIA this much of years and my wishes to continue in similar passions years by years and your children to be a part of our YOINDIA in future. and you poem is nice taish....! hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2

mohtarma abhi tak to shaadi bhi nahin hui aur aap haiN ki, bachhon ko bhi yahaaN ye shayri ki buri aadat lagaane pe tuli hui haiN... are shaadi hon bachhe hon fi socheNge, abhi to bharosha nahin hai... waise itni jaldi hume budha karne ki taiyaar hai aapki... tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2013, 09:08:28 AM »
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behad umdaa ar lajawaab ghazal se nawaza h bazm ko aapne Taish ji
itni gehraai hai ghazal me aapki bas kho se gye hum

dher saari daad aur duayen aapko
khush rahie

shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2013, 02:13:39 PM »
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wonderful
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2013, 03:11:36 PM »
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wah wah and also thanks for dedicating lines to my native place Uttrakhand Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: July 22, 2013, 05:25:55 PM »
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So Nice.

thanks mate...
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«Reply #11 on: July 22, 2013, 07:22:58 PM »
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bahut khubsurat kalaam se nawaza hai taish saheb.dheron daad aur mubarakbad
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«Reply #12 on: July 22, 2013, 09:22:53 PM »
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Hmmmmmmmmmm ek aur dhamaka taishji. waah waah kya kehne bahut hi umdaaaaa kalaaaaaaam se nawaza hai aapne. mujhe toh ek saal bhi poore nahi hue. mashaallah aapne 8 saal poore kiye. phir toh aap humse bahut senior ho gaye. isiliye toh kehti hoon aapke kalaamon se bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai. ab toh yakeen ho gaya hoga na aapko.
aaj ki ghazal mein kuch sher bahut achche hai. waise har sher mein alag baat hai par yeh sher dil ke qareeb rahe.

jo tamancha, churi, kataari rakheN,
ab vahi muNh meN raam rakhte haiN...

humko khudgarz kehti hai duniya,
kaam se bas jo kaam rakhte haiN...

ab mohabbat humare bas ki nahi,
vo bahut ooNcha daam rakhte haiN...

dekhte ladkiyoN ko log yuN yahaaN,
ke nazar meN hazaam rakhte haiN.
Kitna sach kaha hai aapne.

hazaron dili daad ji is khoobsurat kalaam par. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: July 22, 2013, 11:07:03 PM »
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Bahut Khub Taish Saheb
Ye Ashaar Bahut Pasand Aaye
Dili Dad Kabul Farmaaye Janaab


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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aapki daad humare sar aaNkhoN pe saaheb, jan kar khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi....
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2013, 11:37:09 PM »
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Bahot khooob - waaaah waaah waaah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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