TAR-BATAR UMMEED........................saru.....................133

by SURESH SANGWAN on November 12, 2014, 10:51:05 AM
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मंज़िल  कोई  और मुझे  बताये  ही क्यूँ
यहाँ  बुलाकर  वाइज़  को लाये  ही क्यूँ

तुम ही वक़्त थे न हम ही थे रास्ता कोई
जाना  था  जब छोड़कर तो आये ही क्यूँ

की  तर-बतर उम्मीद  मगर बरसे  वो नहीं
काले बादल नील- गगन पर  छाये ही क्यूँ

है जगह दिल में बहुत और जिगर मज़बूत भी
वर्ना  दर्द  यहाँ  आके  चैन  पाये  ही क्यूँ

हटा  सको  गर  राह  के  पत्थर  हटा दो
ठोकर  फिर  कोई  मुसाफिर  खाये ही क्यूँ

हैं  रोशनी  में  इस पर  खड़े  होने  वाले
तक़दीर  में  ज़मीं के  सिर्फ़  साये ही क्यूँ

हासिल नहीं कुछ  भी हुआ  अब सोचती है
'सरु' ने  वो  गीत  पुराने  गाये ही क्यूँ




Manzil koi aur mujhe bataaye hi kyun
Yahan bulakar wize ko laaye hi kyun

Tum hi waqt the na ham hi the rasta koi
Jana tha jab  chodkar to aaye hi kyun

Ki tar batar ummeed magar barse vo nahin
Kale baadal neel gagan par chhaye hi kyun

Hai jagha dil mein bahut aur jigar mazboot bhi
Verna dard yahan aake chein paaye hi kyun

Hata sako gar raah ke patthar hataa do
Thokar fir koi musafir khaaye hi kyun

Hain roshni mein is par khade hone wale
Taqdeer mein zameen ke sirf saaye hi kyun

Haasil nahin kuch bhi hua ab sochti hai
‘saru’ ne vo geet purane gaaye hi kyun
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2014, 11:42:41 AM »
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bahut bahut khub saruji.... kamal ka kalaam kaha hai.........
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........mann ji.

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bahut bahut khub saruji.... kamal ka kalaam kaha hai.........
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«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2014, 02:55:12 PM »
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bahut sunder waah waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2014, 03:07:30 PM »
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मंज़िल  कोई  और मुझे  बताये  ही क्यूँ
यहाँ  बुलाकर  वाइज़  को लाये  ही क्यूँ

तुम ही वक़्त थे न हम ही थे रास्ता कोई
जाना  था  जब छोड़कर तो आये ही क्यूँ

की  तर-बतर उम्मीद  मगर बरसे  वो नहीं
काले बादल नील- गगन पर  छाये ही क्यूँ

है जगह दिल में बहुत और जिगर मज़बूत भी
वर्ना  दर्द  यहाँ  आके  चैन  पाये  ही क्यूँ

हटा  सको  गर  राह  के  पत्थर  हटा दो
ठोकर  फिर  कोई  मुसाफिर  खाये ही क्यूँ

हैं  रोशनी  में  इस पर  खड़े  होने  वाले
तक़दीर  में  ज़मीं के  सिर्फ़  साये ही क्यूँ

हासिल नहीं कुछ  भी हुआ  अब सोचती है
'सरु' ने  वो  गीत  पुराने  गाये ही क्यूँ




Manzil koi aur mujhe bataaye hi kyun
Yahan bulakar wize ko laaye hi kyun

Tum hi waqt the na ham hi the rasta koi
Jana tha jab  chodkar to aaye hi kyun

Ki tar batar ummeed magar barse vo nahin
Kale baadal neel gagan par chhaye hi kyun

Hai jagha dil mein bahut aur jigar mazboot bhi
Verna dard yahan aake chein paaye hi kyun

Hata sako gar raah ke patthar hataa do
Thokar fir koi musafir khaaye hi kyun

Hain roshni mein is par khade hone wale
Taqdeer mein zameen ke sirf saaye hi kyun

Haasil nahin kuch bhi hua ab sochti hoon
‘saru’ ne vo geet purane gaaye hi kyun






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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2014, 06:02:25 AM »
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wah aur waaaah bhooot khooob
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thanks Ravi ji
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thaaaanks Rajan kondal ji
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waaah waaaah
bahut sunder peshkash hui hai Saru ji
Kya baat..
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