hai dil ko ab bhi ye ummeed-1

by Neel1525 on January 17, 2010, 06:26:22 PM
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hai dil ko ab bhi ye ummeed
ke har subah ki shuruaat,
tumhari baahon se hogi
ke har wasl ki aagaaz,
tumhari shokh nigaahon se hogi
ke phir khilkhilakar
hans uththegi chaandani tumhare chehre par
ke phir machal uththegi rajanigandha,
tumhari zulfon main...
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2010, 06:41:43 PM »
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Bahut achhe Neel ji.
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2010, 07:07:36 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Neel ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2010, 07:53:28 AM »
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Great creation Neel ji,bahut hi khoob.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2010, 03:07:34 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2010, 05:34:10 PM »
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Bahut Khub Likha Hai Neel JI
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