UMMEED PE DUNIYA KAYAM HAI (PART-1)

by mohsin akhter on September 02, 2010, 11:27:59 AM
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DOSTO MOHSIN KA SALAM KUBOOL KARE

BAHUT DINO BAAD AYA HOON AUR KUCH ESA LIKH RAHA HOON JO SAYAD AAPKI ZINDAGI SE BHI GUZRA HO YE EK KAHANI BAAP BETE KI HAI JO KIS TARAH EK DOOSRE KO POORA KARTE HAI IS AUR BAHUT KUCH LIKHA HAI MAGAR ABHI ISKA PAHLA BHAG PESH KAR RAHA HOON UMMEED KARTA HOON AAP LOGO KO BAHUT PASAND AAYEGA TO PESHE KHIDMAT HAI

UMMEED PE DUNIYA KAYAM HAI

BACHPAN SE TERI UMMEED PER BADTA RAHA
MAIN BHI TERI UMMEED PER KHARA UTARTA RAHA

BACHPAN KI UMMEED
TUJHE GODI MAIN GHUMANA
KHANDHE MAIN BITHAKAR
BAZARO MAIN LE JANA

PHIR BADI UMMEED
MUJHE KHILONE DILANA
TERI MUSKAAN KE LIYE
KHILONO KA DHER LAGANA

PHIR BADI UMMEED
MUJHE MELA GHUMANA
TERI KHUSHI KE LIYE
ROZ TUJHE LEKAR JANA

TERI UMR KE SATH
TERI UMMEEDO KA DAYRA
BHI BADTA GAYA
TERI UMMEEDO KO
POORA KARNE KE LIYE
MERA HOSLA BHI BADTA GAYA

SCHOOL MAIN TERI
UMMEED KI CYCLE LENI HAI
MAINE BADA DIYA APNE
KAAM KA WAQT
KI TUJHE IS MAHEENE CYCLE DENI HAI

HER CHAHAT KO
POORA HOTE DEKHKAR
TERI UMMEEDO KA
SAFAR PARWAN CHADTA GAYA
TERI UMMEEDO PER
KHARA UTARNE KE LIYE
MERA JUNUN BHI HAD PAAR KARTA GAYA


TO BE CONTD………………………
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2010, 11:31:46 AM »
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bahot hi umda likha he mohsin ji,
aap ki agli post ka intezar rahega...


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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2010, 11:58:20 AM »
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Aapne Rozaana Zindagi se juudi Baatein ki hai Iss Kalaam mein,Bahut Khoob Mohsin Bhai,main Bhi Aage Zaroor padhna Chahunga..

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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2010, 12:13:34 PM »
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dil k bht kareeb hai mere aapki ye nzm mohsin ji.....

second part jald post kijiye.....
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2010, 09:00:17 PM »
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Allah aapki ummidoN ko puraa karta raheN....

aur aap aise hi likhate raheN.....
Humare zaheN meiN bhi ek sher ghum gaya...
Jo aik zaif baap ka dard kah raha hai.....
Aap dil se naa laga lijiyega..         




Har baat meri mante the ab mantaa kouN hai
MaiN zaeef ho gaya ab meri suntaa kouN hai

Kitne hi dinoN se sajde meiN pada huN Khuda
Zarraa dekh to low key yeh bandaa kouN hai
     


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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 02:45:01 AM »
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Extract from life... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mohsin ji.. bahut bahut khoob.. sach ke bilkul aas paas ya kahen poora poora sach hi hai.... intezaar rahega is kahaani ke agle hisse ka besabri se.... jald post kijiye...

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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2010, 05:21:37 AM »
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bahot hi umda likha he mohsin ji,
aap ki agli post ka intezar rahega...


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sukriya janab

jald hi iska agla part post karoonga
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2010, 05:23:27 AM »
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Aapne Rozaana Zindagi se juudi Baatein ki hai Iss Kalaam mein,Bahut Khoob Mohsin Bhai,main Bhi Aage Zaroor padhna Chahunga..

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aapko pasand aana hi bahut badi baat hai humare liye kosis karenge aage bhi aapko bahut kuch khoobsurat padhne ko milega
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2010, 05:24:43 AM »
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dil k bht kareeb hai mere aapki ye nzm mohsin ji.....

second part jald post kijiye.....

sukriya kasak ji
bahut hi jald post karoonga
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2010, 05:26:01 AM »
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Allah aapki ummidoN ko puraa karta raheN....

aur aap aise hi likhate raheN.....
Humare zaheN meiN bhi ek sher ghum gaya...
Jo aik zaif baap ka dard kah raha hai.....
Aap dil se naa laga lijiyega..         




Har baat meri mante the ab mantaa kouN hai
MaiN zaeef ho gaya ab meri suntaa kouN hai

Kitne hi dinoN se sajde meiN pada huN Khuda
Zarraa dekh to low key yeh bandaa kouN hai
     




BAHUT BAHUT SUKRIYA PARWAZ JI

AAPKA SHER BEHAD UMDA THA
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2010, 05:27:42 AM »
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Extract from life... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mohsin ji.. bahut bahut khoob.. sach ke bilkul aas paas ya kahen poora poora sach hi hai.... intezaar rahega is kahaani ke agle hisse ka besabri se.... jald post kijiye...

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AAPKO PASAND ANA HUMARE LIYE BAHUT KHUSHI KI BAAT HAI
KAHANI KA AGLA HISSA AAPKO JAROOR PADHNE KO MILEGA
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