UMMEED PE DUNIYA KAYAM HAI PART-II

by mohsin akhter on September 04, 2010, 05:23:39 AM
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AAP SAB KE BEHAD PYAAR KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT SUKRIYA UMMEED PE DUNIYA KAYAM HAI KA DOOSRA BHAG POST KER RAHA HOON.


ABHI TO TERI UMR KO
6 SAAL HI HUYE THE
TUJHE PANE KE LIYE
MANNATO  ME KITNE
SAAL GUJRE THE

AB TERI HAR BAAT
SAR ANKHO PE RAKHTE HAI
APNI ZINDAGI MAIN KARKE KAMI
TERE HAR ARMAAN POORA KARTE HAI

PHIR BADI UMMEED
MUJHE KHUD AGE BADNE DE
KADAM NANHE HI SAHI
MAGAR MUJHE CHALNE DE
DIL TO NAHI THA
MAGAR TERI UMMEED THI
APNI CHAHAT SE JYADA
TERI UMMEEDE AZIZ THI

DIN KE DHARATAL PER
RAAT KE ANDHERE MAIN
UMMEEDO KA SAFAR BADTA GAYA
TU MERA LAKHTE ZIGAR THA
TERE LIYE MAIN KHUD KO BADALTA GAYA

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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 05:43:28 AM »
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AAP SAB KE BEHAD PYAAR KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT SUKRIYA UMMEED PE DUNIYA KAYAM HAI KA DOOSRA BHAG POST KER RAHA HOON.


ABHI TO TERI UMR KO
6 SAAL HI HUYE THE
TUJHE PANE KE LIYE
MANNATO  ME KITNE
SAAL GUJRE THE

AB TERI HAR BAAT
SAR ANKHO PE RAKHTE HAI
APNI ZINDAGI MAIN KARKE KAMI
TERE HAR ARMAAN POORA KARTE HAI

PHIR BADI UMMEED
MUJHE KHUD AGE BADNE DE
KADAM NANHE HI SAHI
MAGAR MUJHE CHALNE DE
DIL TO NAHI THA
MAGAR TERI UMMEED THI
APNI CHAHAT SE JYADA
TERI UMMEEDE AZIZ THI

DIN KE DHARATAL PER
RAAT KE ANDHERE MAIN
UMMEEDO KA SAFAR BADTA GAYA
TU MERA LAKHTE ZIGAR THA
TERE LIYE MAIN KHUD KO BADALTA GAYA



good work...acha ehsaas hai
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2010, 07:07:55 AM »
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sukriya seba ji aapne ummeed pe duniya kayam hai ka part 1 pada ya nahi kyonki ye kahani uske bina adhuri hai
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 07:23:55 AM »
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nice one ....bahut achha likha h apne~
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 07:30:02 AM »
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wowwwwwww......age kya hua mohsinji
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 10:41:35 AM »
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nice one ....bahut achha likha h apne~

sukriya abhi ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 10:44:19 AM »
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wowwwwwww......age kya hua mohsinji

anu ji befikr rahiye bina poori kahani bataye nahi jaunga
ummeed karta hoon jis tarah jis hisse ko bhi logo ka responce mil raha hai usi tarah age ki kahani bhi logo ko deewana bana degi

aapki duao ka muntzir
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2010, 06:55:31 PM »
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Janab Mohsin sahab aadaab.....

Kia janab puri hi kar dete kalaam ko..... Chaliye hum bhi ummid karte hai ke aage ka safar se achcah guzara ho... aur khoob rang bekhere hoNge aapke ladle ne....

Allah Aapko aur aapke ladle ko khush rakhe aameen..         

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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2010, 07:09:13 PM »
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Bhut hi sunder byan kiya hai aapne ........... Ap ke har ek word main sachai hai & evrybody acn connect that.

Very very gud!!!!!!!!!!!!

AAP SAB KE BEHAD PYAAR KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT SUKRIYA UMMEED PE DUNIYA KAYAM HAI KA DOOSRA BHAG POST KER RAHA HOON.


ABHI TO TERI UMR KO
6 SAAL HI HUYE THE
TUJHE PANE KE LIYE
MANNATO  ME KITNE
SAAL GUJRE THE

AB TERI HAR BAAT
SAR ANKHO PE RAKHTE HAI
APNI ZINDAGI MAIN KARKE KAMI
TERE HAR ARMAAN POORA KARTE HAI

PHIR BADI UMMEED
MUJHE KHUD AGE BADNE DE
KADAM NANHE HI SAHI
MAGAR MUJHE CHALNE DE
DIL TO NAHI THA
MAGAR TERI UMMEED THI
APNI CHAHAT SE JYADA
TERI UMMEEDE AZIZ THI

DIN KE DHARATAL PER
RAAT KE ANDHERE MAIN
UMMEEDO KA SAFAR BADTA GAYA
TU MERA LAKHTE ZIGAR THA
TERE LIYE MAIN KHUD KO BADALTA GAYA


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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2010, 03:04:21 AM »
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bahut khoob Mohsin ji... kahani ko aage badhaayen.. humein intezar hai...~!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2010, 12:11:03 PM »
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bahut khoob mohsin ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2010, 06:53:36 AM »
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aap sab logo ko bahut bahut sukriya is kahani ko itna pasand karne ka.

is kahani ka teesra bhag jald hi post karoonga aur ummeed karta hoon ye bhi aap logo ko bahut pasand aayega

aapki duayon ka mutzir
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