Teri Shahar Shahar me Shohrat hai, Meri Gaanv Gaanv Rusvaayi Hai.......

by vipul kumar on April 30, 2011, 10:53:28 PM
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Main Raato.n ka Banjara hu, Tu Niindo.n ki Shaidaayi Hai.....
Teri Shahar Shahar me Shohrat hai, Meri Gaanv Gaanv Rusvaayi Hai.......

Tere Lafz Duao.n jaise hai,
Meri Ghazale.n Gaali Deti hai,
Tu Gosha Gosha Mahfil hai, Mera Harf Harf Tanhaayi Hai......
[Gosha=Piece; Harf=Word]

Mera Ishq Junu.n Hai Wahshat Hai,
Tera Khwab Khushi hai Chaahat hai,
Mere Paanv ki ziinat chhale hai, Tere Paanv Ka Rang Hinaayi Hai......
[Ziinat=Decoration/Beauty]

Mere ghar ka Soona Aangan hai,
Teri chhat pe Barasta saawan hai,
Main Posh_Maagh ki jhulsahat, Tu Faagun ki Angdaayi Hai.......

Tere Sir pe Dupatta Resham ka,
Mere sir par Dhool ki chaadar hai,
Tera khwab wisaal ka Bistar hai, Meri qismat Yaar Judaayi Hai.......

Tu Jis bhi Cheez pe Haath rakhe,
Wo Tera Zevar Ban Jaaye,
Hamne Amma Ki Baali Bhi Kal Girvi Par Rakhwaayi Hai.......

Ae Mahlo.n Ki Shahzaadi Kaho, Is Haal Me Kya Rah Paaogi?
Ye Ranz-o-Alam, Ye Dard-o-Ghum, Ye Soz-o-Sitam Sah Paaogi??

Ab Aise Me apna Rishta,
Na jud Bhi Saka To Behtar Hai,
Jab Mil Na Sake Chaahat YaaRa, To Kho Dena Daanayi Hai......
Haa.n Maan bhi ja Ae Dil usko, Ab Kho Dena Daanayi Hai........!!
[Daanayi=Wisdom]
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2011, 04:57:50 AM »
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Vipulji,Ehsasaat ki khoobsoorat Tarjumani...Mubarak Ho.  FHSiddiqui
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2011, 06:38:17 AM »
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very good...v v gd....v v v gd...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2011, 07:56:45 AM »
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kalaam par tawajjo farmane ka aur waqt dene ka bahut bahut shukriya FHSiddhiki ji aur satish ji....        sath dete rahiyega.. khush rahiye. aabad rahiye.......
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2011, 09:38:14 AM »
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wah. Kya likha hai aapne vipul ji. Zabardast
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2011, 10:20:56 AM »
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vipul sir……
aapki iss taza ghazal ke b kya kahne…
kasam se behtareen ghazal hai…

aapko salaam hai ji…
aate rahiye…

aapki ghazlen ek alg sa sufiyana sukoon deti hain ji…
aate rahiye ji
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2011, 10:33:16 AM »
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vipul sir……
aapki iss taza ghazal ke b kya kahne…
kasam se behtareen ghazal hai…

aapko salaam hai ji…
aate rahiye…

aapki ghazlen ek alg sa sufiyana sukoon deti hain ji…
aate rahiye ji
khus rahiye
sukriya

sahi jaariya hai bhai tu kya taareef ki golian daag riya hai....samajh aave hai tere ko vipul bhai ne likha kya hai.jaraaa manne bhi padh ke sunawe ga kya?Huh?Huh?
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2011, 11:03:03 AM »
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shukriya Imdad ji. aapki daad ke liye aur mujhe waqt dene ke liye shukriya... aate rahiye. khush rahiye..
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2011, 11:12:04 AM »
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vipul sir……
aapki iss taza ghazal ke b kya kahne…
kasam se behtareen ghazal hai…

aapko salaam hai ji…
aate rahiye…

aapki ghazlen ek alg sa sufiyana sukoon deti hain ji…
aate rahiye ji
khus rahiye
sukriya
₯ killbill ji. bahut bahut shukriya is safar me sath dene ke liye.. ye to aap sab ka pyar hai. aapko sukun milta hai to mera likhne ka maqsad pura h6 jata hai. khushm rahiye. aate rahiye.
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2011, 11:13:10 AM »
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iss ghazal ko padh ke feel kar bhaya…
tharo smjh me bhi aawega…
ab mhara jaan lewega ka bhaya…
mumse mamu bana riya tu!
sahi jaariya hai bhai tu kya taareef ki golian daag riya hai....samajh aave hai tere ko vipul bhai ne likha kya hai.jaraaa manne bhi padh ke sunawe ga kya?Huh?Huh?
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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2011, 11:18:58 AM »
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vipul sir……
aapki iss taza ghazal ke b kya kahne…
kasam se behtareen ghazal hai…

aapko salaam hai ji…
aate rahiye…

aapki ghazlen ek alg sa sufiyana sukoon deti hain ji…
aate rahiye ji
khus rahiye
sukriya
₯ killbill ji. bahut bahut shukriya is safar me sath dene ke liye.. ye to aap sab ka pyar hai. aapko sukun milta hai to mera likhne ka maqsad pura h6 jata hai. khushm rahiye. aate rahiye.
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«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2011, 11:47:50 AM »
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    Wah Janab bahut bemisaal
    kalaam se nawaja hai aapne.
    Tabiyat khush hogayi. Ye hi
    silsila jari rakhiyega. Shukriya. 
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2011, 06:22:05 PM »
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Janaab Vipul Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia kahne janab waah behad umdaa nazm se bazm ko
nawaaza hai aapne.... ahsaasat ki khushbu ko lafzi
phooloN se sawaarne ka hunar aap meiN behad khoob hai

Is umdaa kalaam par dil se daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile
Khuda aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhshe... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye..
Bazm meiN aate rahiye.. Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          

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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2011, 07:17:23 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya R.M. Dixit ji. aapki tabiyat khush hui ho to hamae bhi khushi hoti hai.... khush rahe.n.... g
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2011, 07:20:51 PM »
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shukriya shihab ji...  lafzo ki jadugari ko samajhne wale bhi chahiye... warna ye sab bekar hai. aap sab ka shukriya ki aapne mujhe samjha..... khush rahe.n....  duao.n ke sath......:d
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