Tum ney bahut diyaa hai mujhey koyee shak naheen!

by abdbundeli on September 27, 2008, 03:26:07 AM
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Mein, rind-e-balaanosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!
Fir bhi, mujhey hai hosh naheen? Jaantey ho tum!

Peetaa hoon baarhaa wahee jo talkh-e-barq ho!
Mein shakhs khudfarosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!

Tum ney bahut diyaa hai mujhey koyee shak naheen!
Ehsaan faramosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!!

Gaaney ko, beykhudee mein gaa chukaa hoon mein gazal;
Baaqee, magar, wo josh naheen: jaantey ho tum!!

Zaahid ko hai haraam; 'Abd' ko halaal hai:
Yeh may hai! Aab-e-nosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!

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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2008, 04:06:45 AM »
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Beautiful Ghazal Abd Ji Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2008, 08:37:15 AM »
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kya baaaat hain logho ki raat nashili hoti hain aapne to meri subah nashili kardi maza aa gaya
Mein, rind-e-balaanosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!
Fir bhi, mujhey hai hosh naheen? Jaantey ho tum!

Peetaa hoon baarhaa wahee jo talkh-e-barq ho!
Mein shakhs khudfarosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!

Tum ney bahut diyaa hai mujhey koyee shak naheen!
Ehsaan faramosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!!

Gaaney ko, beykhudee mein gaa chukaa hoon mein gazal;
Baaqee, magar, wo josh naheen: jaantey ho tum!!

Zaahid ko hai haraam; 'Abd' ko halaal hai:
Yeh may hai! Aab-e-nosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!

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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2008, 10:52:54 AM »
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Celmira ji / sajid_ghayel ji,
Kyaa baat hai, ki, baad-e-sahar hai yeh kahaan kee:,
Jis ney, dil-o-jigar mein gulshan khilaa diye hain!
Bulbul bhi gaa uthhee hai, chahkee hain fir fazaayen;
Sur, mil rahey suron sey, ghungharoo hilaa diye hain!!

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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2008, 02:16:38 PM »
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Waah...very innocent and beautiful lines Abd Ji !!
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2008, 03:14:29 PM »
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Celmira ji,
     Shukriyaa!
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2010, 11:08:28 PM »
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Mein, rind-e-balaanosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!
Fir bhi, mujhey hai hosh naheen? Jaantey ho tum!

Peetaa hoon baarhaa wahee jo talkh-e-barq ho!
Mein shakhs khudfarosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!

Tum ney bahut diyaa hai mujhey koyee shak naheen!
Ehsaan faramosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!!

Gaaney ko, beykhudee mein gaa chukaa hoon mein gazal;
Baaqee, magar, wo josh naheen: jaantey ho tum!!

Zaahid ko hai haraam; 'Abd' ko halaal hai:
Yeh may hai! Aab-e-nosh naheen: jaantey ho tum!

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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2010, 09:35:06 PM »
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Thanks a lot, 'malli' ji!

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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2010, 09:09:26 AM »
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Hamare humsafar aankhon mein kuch manzer uta laye
Magar hum chalte-chalte raah ke pattar uta laye

Gaye jab aaine ke samne to hass ke vo bola
Priye, tum apni gardan per ye kiska ser uta laye

Hume to doobkar bi kuch na mil paya samandar se
Magar kuch log sahil tak gaye gauher uta laye..
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2010, 11:48:58 AM »
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Hamare hamsafar aankhon mein kuch manzar utha laye
Magar ham chalte-chalte raah ke patthar utha laye

Gaye jab aaine ke samne to hans ke vo bola
Priye, tum apni gardan par ye kiska sar utha laye

Hame to doobkar bhi kuch na mil paya samandar se
Magar kuch log sahil tak gaye, gauhar utha laye..


Sundar hai, 'malli'! Bahut hi khoob!

Yahee to zindagee hai: ham hameen sey oob jaatey hain!
Safeeney kuchh, kinaarey tak pahunch kar doob jaatey hain!
Zarooree hai, magar fir bhi, bahar key paar tak kheynaa;
Jahaan koyee pahunch paataa naheen, mahboob jaatey hain!!

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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2010, 10:02:27 PM »
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Sundar hai, 'malli'! Bahut hi khoob!

Yahee to zindagee hai: ham hameen sey oob jaatey hain!
Safeeney kuchh, kinaarey tak pahunch kar doob jaatey hain!
Zarooree hai, magar fir bhi, bahar key paar tak kheynaa;
Jahaan koyee pahunch paataa naheen, mahboob jaatey hain!!

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Raahon mein kante hai, Phool nahi
Humne kanton ko bi narmi se chua hai lekin
Log, phool sa mera dil ko masalna bhoola nahi
Mai tumse dhur hu, dil se nahi
Khwaab mein ho magar haqiqatme tera saat nahi
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2010, 05:37:25 PM »
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Raahon mein kante hai, Phool nahi
Humne kanton ko bi narmi se chua hai lekin
Log, phool sa mera dil ko masalna bhoola nahi
Mai tumse dhur hu, dil se nahi
Khwaab mein ho magar haqiqatme tera saat nahi


Chalo achchhaa hai: kaheen par to saath-saath hain ham!
Yeh qaraabat bhi to meyrey liye naheen hai kam!
Guzar rahey hain lamhey: mein bhi guzarney ko huun;
Isey raham kaho uskaa, ki, kaho isko sitam!!

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Bahut bahut khoob ABD ji
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Bahut bahut khoob ABD ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 30, 2012, 02:09:10 PM »
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Hamare humsafar aankhon mein kuch manzer uta laye
Magar hum chalte-chalte raah ke pattar uta laye

Gaye jab aaine ke samne to hass ke vo bola
Priye, tum apni gardan per ye kiska ser uta laye

Hume to doobkar bi kuch na mil paya samandar se
Magar kuch log sahil tak gaye gauher uta laye..

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