"tumhe parishaa.n daikh kar"

by aaina on August 08, 2009, 10:44:56 PM
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tumhe parishaan daikh kar khud pareeshaan hone laga
jin par mujko qaaboo tha wo ab osaan khone laga

mere tarkash mein jitne they wo saab meine rok liye
tere naino ke teero.n se apne dil ko chubhone laga

teri yaad jo aati hai peham mujhko sataati hai
chupke chupke apni yaade.n mein tumjhme samone laga

wo tera mujhse milna aur phir milte hi rehna
wo saare dhaage mein apni, saaso.n mein pirone laga

daikh qasam hai tujhko aisa na tadpa mujhko
raat ka aakhri peher hua hai, daikh abhi se sone laga

mujhko yaqeen hai mein apne aap pe qaaboo rakhta hu.n
ye to bas aise hi jaane, kyu.n ye palke.n bhigone laga

har rehguzar ki mazail ho aisa to zaroori nahi hai
koi kinaara kahin pe jaake khud ko bhi to duboone laga[/size][/color]
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2009, 10:49:54 PM »
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Masha Allah bohat khub likha hai aap ne bohat hi acha  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2009, 03:52:32 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 08, 2009, 10:44:56 PM
tumhe parishaan daikh kar khud pareeshaan hone laga
jin par mujko qaaboo tha wo ab osaan khone laga

mere tarkash mein jitne they wo saab meine rok liye
tere naino ke teero.n se apne dil ko chubhone laga

teri yaad jo aati hai peham mujhko sataati hai
chupke chupke apni yaade.n mein tumjhme samone laga

wo tera mujhse milna aur phir milte hi rehna
wo saare dhaage mein apni, saaso.n mein pirone laga

daikh qasam hai tujhko aisa na tadpa mujhko
raat ka aakhri peher hua hai, daikh abhi se sone laga

mujhko yaqeen hai mein apne aap pe qaaboo rakhta hu.n
ye to bas aise hi jaane, kyu.n ye palke.n bhigone laga

har rehguzar ki mazail ho aisa to zaroori nahi hai
koi kinaara kahin pe jaake khud ko bhi to duboone laga[/size][/color]

Wah wah Bahut bahut accha Gazal aapne likha hai Aslam ji.. Daad hazir hai ji kabul farmayiyega zarur  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2009, 07:05:49 AM »
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Behad khoobsurat gazal likhi hia aapne aslam ji...

Ekdam dilko chhugayi Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2009, 07:19:54 AM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji,very beautiful gazal,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2009, 08:09:47 AM »
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Dil chune wale jazbaat hain.

Bohot khoob Aaina Ji.
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2009, 04:51:54 PM »
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Waah Aslam ji Kya kamaal ka likhte ho.. bahoot bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2009, 11:43:33 AM »
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Bohot dard hai aapki iss ghazal main Aslam Ji.. Allah aap ko humesha khush rakhe, ameen.
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2009, 12:42:39 PM »
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Bahut Acche Aaina Ji ... daad qabool KareN.

Lagaa Kar Vo Namak ZakhooN Par Mere
Mujhe Keta Hai Ke Acchi Davaa Hai
Ucchalo Mat Isse Tum Yun Hawaa Mein
Kabhi Yeh Dil Tha Ab "Aaina" Hai !!


Regards,

HT
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2009, 03:48:29 PM »
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Quote from: khushi4pari on August 08, 2009, 10:49:54 PM
Masha Allah bohat khub likha hai aap ne bohat hi acha  Applause Applause Applause Applause

thnxxxxxx so much pari
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2009, 03:50:25 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 09, 2009, 03:52:32 AM
Wah wah Bahut bahut accha Gazal aapne likha hai Aslam ji.. Daad hazir hai ji kabul farmayiyega zarur  Usual Smile

aapki daad sar aankho par dear thnxxx so much
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2009, 03:51:09 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai aaina ji bahoot khoob... bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2009, 03:52:07 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on August 09, 2009, 07:05:49 AM
Behad khoobsurat gazal likhi hia aapne aslam ji...

Ekdam dilko chhugayi Usual Smile

bhut bhut shukriya angel, abhi dil ke qareeb kisi na aane do....lol
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«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2009, 03:53:04 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 09, 2009, 07:19:54 AM
Wah wah Aslam ji,very beautiful gazal,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thnxxx so much madhu ji thnxx for ur appriciation
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«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2009, 03:54:03 PM »
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Quote from: Shayara on August 09, 2009, 08:09:47 AM
Dil chune wale jazbaat hain.

Bohot khoob Aaina Ji.

izzat afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya shayara ji
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