Wafa mehaz ek tijarath ek karobar raha........................Aqsh..

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Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha ashkbaar raha

Unki khwahish, unke khwaboN ko, apna jaan kar chale
Lutakar saara qarar dil har lamha bas beqaraar raha

Wafa ko nibhaate hue mita daala, hamne apna wajood tak
Par unke liye toh wafa mehaz, ek tijarath ek karobaar raha

Benoor si is zindagi meiN, na toh dhoop hai na hi koi saaya
hijr ke mausam mein dil shab e tanhai mein giraftaar raha

Zaalim ke har sitam se, is qadar muhabbat hui hai “Aqsh” ko
Ke yeh dil ab toh har ghadi, unke fareb ka hi talabgaar raha..
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2014, 01:44:38 PM »
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Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha akshbaar raha

Unki khwahish, unke khwaboN ko, apna jaan kar chale
Phir bhi darmiyaaN hamesha hi, faasloN ka deewar raha

Wafa ko nibhaate hue mita daala, hamne apna wajood tak
Par unke liye toh wafa mehaz, ek tijarath ek karobaar raha

Benoor si is zindagi meiN, na toh dhoop hai na hi koi saaya
Yeh kaisa mausam aaya ki, na khizaaN raha na bahaar raha

Zaalim ke har sitam se, is qadar muhabbat hui hai “Aqsh” ko
Ke yeh dil ab toh har ghadi, unke fareb ka hi talabgaar raha..

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqsh ji,Bahut hi khoobsurat alfaazon se sanwaara hai aapne is ghazal ko.Aapkee ye ghazal dil ko chhoo gayee.Waqai behad achhi ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really nice and heart touching. Aik RAU ke saath meri dili daad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2014, 02:17:52 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2014, 02:33:31 PM »
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Aqsh saheba . Bahut achhe ashaar hain . Khas taur se matla mein abr aur ashk  ki misaalein bahut achhi hai. Dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2014, 03:09:43 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on April 16, 2014, 12:41:48 PM
Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha akshbaar raha

Unki khwahish, unke khwaboN ko, apna jaan kar chale
Phir bhi darmiyaaN hamesha hi, faasloN ka deewar raha

Wafa ko nibhaate hue mita daala, hamne apna wajood tak
Par unke liye toh wafa mehaz, ek tijarath ek karobaar raha

Benoor si is zindagi meiN, na toh dhoop hai na hi koi saaya
Yeh kaisa mausam aaya ki, na khizaaN raha na bahaar raha

Zaalim ke har sitam se, is qadar muhabbat hui hai “Aqsh” ko
Ke yeh dil ab toh har ghadi, unke fareb ka hi talabgaar raha..



laajawaab ghazal rahi aqsh g , aapke andaaz se thoda hutt ke rhi ye ghazal , mgr bohat khoob rahi , bharpoor daad her sher ke liye,...........
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2014, 04:01:31 PM »
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Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha akshbaar raha

WAAH BOHUT HI ACHHI GHAZAL RAHI AQSH JEE.

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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2014, 04:45:14 PM »
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waaah waaah waah waah bahuuuuut khboob baajee bahut achcha likhaa hai
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2014, 05:44:54 PM »
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Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha akshbaar raha

Unki khwahish, unke khwaboN ko, apna jaan kar chale
Phir bhi darmiyaaN hamesha hi, faasloN ka deewar raha

Wafa ko nibhaate hue mita daala, hamne apna wajood tak
Par unke liye toh wafa mehaz, ek tijarath ek karobaar raha

Benoor si is zindagi meiN, na toh dhoop hai na hi koi saaya
Yeh kaisa mausam aaya ki, na khizaaN raha na bahaar raha---RAHEE Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Zaalim ke har sitam se, is qadar muhabbat hui hai “Aqsh” ko
Ke yeh dil ab toh har ghadi, unke fareb ka hi talabgaar raha..




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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2014, 06:16:39 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....

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bahut khoooooooooooob aqsh ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2014, 08:17:04 PM »
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Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha akshbaar raha

Unki khwahish, unke khwaboN ko, apna jaan kar chale
Phir bhi darmiyaaN hamesha hi, faasloN ka deewar raha

Wafa ko nibhaate hue mita daala, hamne apna wajood tak
Par unke liye toh wafa mehaz, ek tijarath ek karobaar raha

Benoor si is zindagi meiN, na toh dhoop hai na hi koi saaya
Yeh kaisa mausam aaya ki, na khizaaN raha na bahaar raha

Zaalim ke har sitam se, is qadar muhabbat hui hai “Aqsh” ko
Ke yeh dil ab toh har ghadi, unke fareb ka hi talabgaar raha..





Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooooooooooob Aqsh ji..

Dil Ko Chuute Hue Jazbaat...Umda Bayaani...Bahutttttttt Acche

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«Reply #11 on: April 16, 2014, 10:53:32 PM »
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Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha akshbaar raha
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Unki khwahish, unke khwaboN ko, apna jaan kar chale
Phir bhi darmiyaaN hamesha hi, faasloN ka deewar raha
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Wafa ko nibhaate hue mita daala, hamne apna wajood tak
Par unke liye toh wafa mehaz, ek tijarath ek karobaar raha
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Benoor si is zindagi meiN, na toh dhoop hai na hi koi saaya
Yeh kaisa mausam aaya ki, na khizaaN raha na bahaar raha
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Zaalim ke har sitam se, is qadar muhabbat hui hai “Aqsh” ko
Ke yeh dil ab toh har ghadi, unke fareb ka hi talabgaar raha..\
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wah wah wah bohut bohut umda wahhhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #12 on: April 17, 2014, 12:55:23 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on April 16, 2014, 12:41:48 PM
Na unpar aitbaar raha, na ashkoN par ikhtiyaar raha
Dil bankar misaal e abr, har ek lamha akshbaar raha

Unki khwahish, unke khwaboN ko, apna jaan kar chale
Phir bhi darmiyaaN hamesha hi, faasloN ka deewar raha

Wafa ko nibhaate hue mita daala, hamne apna wajood tak
Par unke liye toh wafa mehaz, ek tijarath ek karobaar raha

Benoor si is zindagi meiN, na toh dhoop hai na hi koi saaya
Yeh kaisa mausam aaya ki, na khizaaN raha na bahaar raha

Zaalim ke har sitam se, is qadar muhabbat hui hai “Aqsh” ko
Ke yeh dil ab toh har ghadi, unke fareb ka hi talabgaar raha..



Wow.!! So nice,accept one RAU
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«Reply #13 on: April 17, 2014, 05:36:53 AM »
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waah bahut khoob Aqsh jee.
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«Reply #14 on: April 17, 2014, 04:47:05 PM »
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