zara si baat pe yuN ruthna achcha nahiN lagta.............>>>>>>><<<<by Aarish

by Aarish on February 06, 2013, 05:44:45 AM
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Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #15 on: February 06, 2013, 09:35:09 AM »
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Bohat Bohat Aur Bohat Hi Khub Ghazal Rahi!!!!

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«Reply #16 on: February 06, 2013, 11:05:16 AM »
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Aarish bhai, I am just speechless, this is one of my best ghazals I ever read.

Iss ghazal ki koi bhi taa'reef kam hai, Iss ghazal ke 9 she'r ke liye 9 Rau. May God always pour his blessing upon you.



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«Reply #17 on: February 06, 2013, 11:49:46 AM »
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Waaaaaah! Aarish jee ek se badhkar ek sher bahut khoob likha hai aapne. tarif ke liye alfaaz nahi. hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare
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«Reply #18 on: February 06, 2013, 12:27:46 PM »
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Tujhe mehfil me sab dekheN zara achcha nahiN lagta,
Tera tark-e-haya ka faisla achcha nahiN lagta,

allah tauba ye ilzaam to na do ji. main haya ka hamesha khayaal rakhti hoon. chunke tumhaari nazar mein main basi hui hoon isliye kisi aur ko dekh kar mujhe samjh baithe hoge icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Huwey baizaar jo humne kiya izhaar ulfat kaa,
zara si baat pe yuN ruthna achcha nahiN lagta,

baat zara si hogi tumhaare liye mere liye badi baat hai. cake mere liye laaye the aur phir doosron ko khila diya to gussa anaa zaahir hai
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Badi hi berukhi se yuN sar-e-mehfil pukaraa hai,
HumeN lehja tera ye ba khuda achcha nahiN lagta,

ishaara karo to dekhte hi nahin the. to kya karti tumhara naam le kar pukaraa thaa. gaali to nahin di thi phir khafa kyon ho
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Teri aankhoN se peene ki padi aadat mujhe jab se,
Tabhi se bas mujhe ye maikada achcha nahiN lagta,

sharaabi ko kya chahiye sirf nasha . issi liye to maine apne pass se bhaga diya kyon ki nikhattoo ho gaye the tum koi kaam nahin karte the
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Zamane bhar ko aadat ho gayee hai bewafai ki,
Kisi ko bhi yahaN dars-e-wafa achcha nahiN lagta,

mujhe preach mat karo. mujhe khoob pata hai wafa kis se karni chahhiye. main bewafa se wafa nahin karti. modern zamaane ki hoon icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Bana jab az sare nau bijliyaN usne gira daaliN,
Falak ko bhi mera ye ghoNsla achcha nahiN lagta,
ye tumhaare aamaal ki wajh se hua. khuda pe ilzaam to mat lagaao
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Mile sohbat se jinki jhoot, makkari, hasad, dhoka,
Mujhe wo dosti ka silsila achcha nahin lagta,

main ne pahle hi mana kiya tha per meri sunte kahaan the. ab pata chal na
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Muqabil aandhiyoN ke jab kiya roshan bujha dalaa,
HawaooN ko mera jalta diya achcha nahiN lagta,

dear, kabhi aisa muqabla na karo jis mein haar laazim hai. logical aur practical bano to khush raho ge aur doosron ko bhi khushi de sako ge. icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

Chalo "Aarish" mita daleN sabhi ye dooriyaN dil ki,
DiloN ke beech ka ye faasla achcha nahiN lagta..

achi koshish hai.aur acha jazba hai. main bhi saath hoon
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«Reply #19 on: February 06, 2013, 12:53:28 PM »
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wah wah wonderful ghazal.... bahut c daad  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #20 on: February 07, 2013, 03:09:43 AM »
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Aarish bhai jaan maafi chahunga net sahi work nahi krna warna is qalam ki tareef mein dil bht kuch kehna chahta haipar abhi to aapko sirf hamare salutr se kaam chalana padega ..... Kuch ashaar to bde hee umda gajab ke rahe kya kehne ...aap likhte bht kam h par jab qalm chalti hai aapki to bas sab par aapka jaadu chal jaata hai
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saudagar bhai muafi ki zarurat nahi hai aapne ghazal padhi aur pasand kiya bas mehnat wasool ho gayee bohut shukriya aapki mohabbat ke liye
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«Reply #21 on: February 08, 2013, 03:59:46 AM »
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«Reply #22 on: February 08, 2013, 09:28:26 AM »
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«Reply #23 on: February 09, 2013, 04:52:14 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Aarish. Bahut khubsurat , haseen ghazal kahi hai.har sher bahut pyara ,naya andaz liye aur aap ki umr ke ehsasaat ki tarjumani karte hue.Jitni tareef karun kam hai.Mujhe yaqeen hai ki aap mein shairy ki bazm pe chha jaane ki puri salahiyat hai.khuda aapko mazeed nawaze.Amin
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«Reply #24 on: February 11, 2013, 02:17:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob , Aarish. Bahut khubsurat , haseen ghazal kahi hai.har sher bahut pyara ,naya andaz liye aur aap ki umr ke ehsasaat ki tarjumani karte hue.Jitni tareef karun kam hai.Mujhe yaqeen hai ki aap mein shairy ki bazm pe chha jaane ki puri salahiyat hai.khuda aapko mazeed nawaze.Amin

Bohut shukriya sir is itni mohabbat aur duaoN ke Liye khuda kare ki Umr Bhar yuNhi Likhata RahuN aur aap YuNhi mujhe apni duaoN se nawazte raheN aur meri rehnumaEe karte RaheN..


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«Reply #25 on: November 26, 2013, 10:51:56 PM »
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