<>*Mujhe achcha nahin lagta*<>

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<>*Mujhe achcha nahin lagta*<>

Tu kisi aur ko dekhe ,muskuraye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta
Dil k dard kisi aur ko sunaye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Tere kareeb aane k liye taras rahi hun main kabse aur
Tu jab auron ko kareeb laye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Maana k hai tere kai chahne wale ee mere sanam
Lekin tu kisi aur ka dil behlaye ye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Dekhna meri aur bhari mehfil me chupke se aur nazar fer lena
Tu mujhse yun nigahein churaye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Har dard ki parwaah nahin karti main mere sanam lekin
Tu kisi aur ki gazal gungunaye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Mana k bht buri hun main, nahin salika mujhe jeene ka
Lekin tu mujhe yun palkon pe bithake nazron se giraye
Mujhe achcha nahin lagta…..


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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 05:36:58 AM »
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<>*Mujhe achcha nahin lagta*<>

Tu kisi aur ko dekhe ,muskuraye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta
Dil k dard kisi aur ko sunaye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Tere kareeb aane k liye taras rahi hun main kabse aur
Tu jab auron ko kareeb laye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Maana k hai tere kai chahne wale ee mere sanam
Lekin tu kisi aur ko chahe ye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Dekhna meri aur bhari mehfil me chupke se aur nazar fer lena
Tera mujhse yun nigahein churana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Har dard ki parwaah nahin karti main mere sanam lekin
Tera kisi aur ki gazal gungunana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Mana k bht buri hun main nahin salika mujhe jeene ka
Lekin tera mujhe yun palkon pe bithake nazron se girana
Mujhe achcha nahin lagta…..



very very nice shikayat kasak di ki...!
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2010, 07:04:25 AM »
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are yaar bahut badhiya he~

chalo me koshish karta hu shayad aapko achha lage~

kisiko dekhta hun to tum rooth jate ho
meri nazar ki khata nahi ye tumhare dil ki baichaini he
meri nigaah me koi bhi ho ye yakiin rakhna
meri saans me naam tumhara or tumhari hi khoon me rawaaani he~
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 07:08:53 AM »
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mastam reply ji....

jante hain hum k tum sirf hamare ho
lekin iss maasum dil ka main kya karun
nahin seh sakta ye tumhari thodisi bhi duri
ye meri baat na samjhe to main kya karun....
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 07:20:27 AM »
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sorry anuji aaj koi mere toote sheeshe par pair rakh gaya isiliye shayad lines ki feel maintain nahi rakh pauga~


dil to bas masum hi hota he'
tabhi to toot jata he tukdo me'
dooriyan banti nahi khtam hone ko'
chhod jati he bas ansoo ankhon me~

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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 07:24:16 AM »
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kya hua abhi...saddy kyun..?

bht pyara likha hai tumne...
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 09:30:54 AM »
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too good, dhamakedar, Awesome.........

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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2010, 12:31:27 PM »
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Socha tha ke tumhe bhool jaaunga rafta-rafta
Par tere bina jeena mujhe Achha Nahi Lagta !!

Shikaayat bhi mujhe tum se bahut dair nahi rehti
Apna ye naaraaj hona bhee Achha Nahi Lagta !!

Hawa b gujjre tujhe chhoo kar,sahan nahi mujh ko
Kare koi tumse gustakhee, Achha Nahi Lagta !!

Tumhaari  zulf bikhaar jaaye,kaajal utar jaaye
Kasam tumhaari mujhe, Achha Nahi Lagta !!



<>*Mujhe achcha nahin lagta*<>

Tu kisi aur ko dekhe ,muskuraye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta
Dil k dard kisi aur ko sunaye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Tere kareeb aane k liye taras rahi hun main kabse aur
Tu jab auron ko kareeb laye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Maana k hai tere kai chahne wale ee mere sanam
Lekin tu kisi aur ko chahe ye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Dekhna meri aur bhari mehfil me chupke se aur nazar fer lena
Tera mujhse yun nigahein churana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Har dard ki parwaah nahin karti main mere sanam lekin
Tera kisi aur ki gazal gungunana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Mana k bht buri hun main nahin salika mujhe jeene ka
Lekin tera mujhe yun palkon pe bithake nazron se girana
Mujhe achcha nahin lagta…..


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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2010, 12:54:48 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

bahut bahut Khoob Anuji..Lajawaab

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Bhari mehfil mein Mujhko Tujhsa Koi sacha nahi Lagta
Tu ek pal ke liye bhi meri nazron se door ho, Acha Nahi lagta...

Zindagi Ke iss raah mein, Eh Mere Humdum Hum Milenge Zaroor!!!!
Iske Ilaawa Main Kuch Aur Sochu, Acha Nahi lagta...

Dil Ki baatein Zubaan par Aa Jaaye To Kuch Araam Mile
Kuch Baaton ko Dil Hi Dil mein Daba Dena Acha Nahi lagta...

jab kisi Ki baatein kisi Ki yaadein, jeene Ki Wajeh Ban jaati hai
Tab Usse Ek pal Ke Liye Bhi Door Rehna Acha Nahi lagta..

"Khwaish" Apna Haal-e-dil lafzon mein Keh deta Hai
Par Agar lafzon Ko Bhi naa Samjha Jaaye To Acha nahi lagta...

Log Kehte Hai Khwaab Woh dekho
Jo Haqeeqat Ke rang mein Dhal Sake!!!
"Khwaish" kehta Hai Khwaab Zaroor dekho
Koi Gham nahi Agar Woh Haqeeqat Ke rang mein Naa Dhal sake!!!

Sirf kisi Ko paana Hi Mohabbat Nahi!!!
Mohabbat mein paane-Khone Ka Sauda Acha nahi lagta....
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2010, 01:02:20 PM »
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Anamika-di.. icon_king icon_queen....
Apki itnee achhe poem par bhee....
Taali na bajaaun tou mujhe achha nahi lagta.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

<>*Mujhe achcha nahin lagta*<>

Tu kisi aur ko dekhe ,muskuraye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta
Dil k dard kisi aur ko sunaye Mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Tere kareeb aane k liye taras rahi hun main kabse aur
Tu jab auron ko kareeb laye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Maana k hai tere kai chahne wale ee mere sanam
Lekin tu kisi aur ko chahe ye mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Dekhna meri aur bhari mehfil me chupke se aur nazar fer lena
Tera mujhse yun nigahein churana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Har dard ki parwaah nahin karti main mere sanam lekin
Tera kisi aur ki gazal gungunana mujhe achcha nahin lagta

Mana k bht buri hun main nahin salika mujhe jeene ka
Lekin tera mujhe yun palkon pe bithake nazron se girana
Mujhe achcha nahin lagta…..


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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2010, 02:35:48 PM »
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Socha tha ke tumhe bhool jaaunga rafta-rafta
Par tere bina jeena mujhe Achha Nahi Lagta !!

Shikaayat bhi mujhe tum se bahut dair nahi rehti
Apna ye naaraaj hona bhee Achha Nahi Lagta !!

Hawa b gujjre tujhe chhoo kar,sahan nahi mujh ko
Kare koi tumse gustakhee, Achha Nahi Lagta !!

Tumhaari  zulf bikhaar jaaye,kaajal utar jaaye
Kasam tumhaari mujhe, Achha Nahi Lagta !!




mastam reply and poem anaam....bht khubbb
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2010, 02:36:49 PM »
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Anamika-di.. icon_king icon_queen....
Apki itnee achhe poem par bhee....
Taali na bajaaun tou mujhe achha nahi lagta.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


shaitaan ladki ab to ye raja rani har jagah mat rakh...

thnkuuuu teri ittttiiiiii sari taaliyon k liye
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2010, 02:38:27 PM »
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too good, dhamakedar, Awesome.........

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thnx alot thk ji......
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2010, 02:39:01 PM »
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very very nice shikayat kasak di ki...!

thnx sheeba ji for ur comment
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2010, 02:40:35 PM »
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khwaish ji aapki poem k liye kya kahun....dil khush khush ho gaya ye apdhke..thnx alotttttttttt ji for this wonderful reply......
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