Zehr de do mujhe.....

by sidra04 on November 08, 2013, 02:35:54 AM
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Ek choti si ghazal aap sab ke liye...


Aapko, aapkaa banaa deNge,
Ab koyee raasta banaa deNge.

Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge.

Humse aise na aap ab miliye,
Dillagee Khaa-ma-Khaa banaa deNge.

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Hai unhi par ye jaaN fidaa Sidraa,
Zindgee jo sazaa banaa deNge
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Sidra...
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2013, 02:53:06 AM »
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Wahh!! sidra jii kya khoob likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2013, 02:53:15 AM »
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buhat khoob... ithi chhoti beher main likhna buhat dushvaar kaam hay, magar achha nibhaaya hay aap ne...
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2013, 02:53:34 AM »
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Perfect, behr mukammal hai, bahut bahut khoob. Ye sher bahut pasand aaya:

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2013, 02:56:28 AM »
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ek rau ke saath daad haazir hai
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2013, 02:58:26 AM »
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Ek choti si ghazal aap sab ke liye...


Aapko, aapkaa banaa deNge,
Ab koyee raasta banaa deNge.

Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge.

Humse aise na aap ab miliye,
Dillagee Khaa-ma-Khaa banaa deNge.

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Hai unhi par ye jaaN fidaa Sidraa,
Zindgee jo sazaa banaa deNge
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Sidra...


bahut pyara ghazal likha hai aapne sidra jee. bahut daad
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2013, 04:10:26 AM »
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Wahh!! sidra jii kya khoob likha hai aapne..

Thanks Saman..........  khush raho dear

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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2013, 04:55:58 AM »
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buhat khoob... ithi chhoti beher main likhna buhat dushvaar kaam hay, magar achha nibhaaya hay aap ne...

thanks for the like and your views VB.........

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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2013, 07:26:50 AM »
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Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge. icon_scratch

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2013, 08:47:49 AM »
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WWWWWAAAAAHHHHH ........is "chhoti si" ghazal ki wusatein bahaut badi hain Sidra ji .... aap ko beshumaar daad !!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2013, 06:00:30 PM »
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Perfect, behr mukammal hai, bahut bahut khoob. Ye sher bahut pasand aaya:

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.



bahot bahot shukriyaaaa Iftakhar ji.... sher ko pasand karne ke liye khaas shukriyaa... aate raheN

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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2013, 06:57:57 PM »
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Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Bahut khoob Sidra jee
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2013, 07:26:52 PM »
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Sidra ji, Bahut umda ghazal!
khaskar ye dil fareb she'r -

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2013, 08:51:26 PM »
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Ek choti si ghazal aap sab ke liye...


Aapko, aapkaa banaa deNge,
Ab koyee raasta banaa deNge.

Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge.

Humse aise na aap ab miliye,
Dillagee Khaa-ma-Khaa banaa deNge.

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Hai unhi par ye jaaN fidaa Sidraa,
Zindgee jo sazaa banaa deNge
..

Sidra...

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Kya kehne sidra bahut khoooooooooob... badi achchi ghazal se nawaza hai tumne.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2013, 10:41:59 PM »
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ek rau ke saath daad haazir hai

Saini saahab.... aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa. rau ke liye alag se thanksss Usual Smile

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