sksaini4
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जो कहना है कह भी दे |
जज़्बातों को छुट्टी दे ||
घुट घुट मरने वाले को |
जा जादू की झप्पी दे ||
अन्दर बच्चा सोता है |
दस्तक हल्की हल्की दे ||
पहले ही दिल टूटा है |
आजा तू भी गाली दे ||
मुझसे तुझको जो भी हैं |
सारे शिकवे कह ही दे ||
दर पर भूखा आया है |
पहले उसको रोटी दे ||
उजरत तो अच्छी पाली |
अब लोगों का बाकी दे ||
दौलत मत दे बच्चों को |
बस तू बातें अच्छी दे ||
डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
Jo kahnaa hai kah bhee de.
jazbaatoN ko chhuttee de.
Ghut ghut marne vale ko.
Jaa jaadoo kee jhappee de.
Andar bachhaa sotaa hai.
Dastak halkee halkee de.
Pahle hee dil tootaa hai.
Aajaa too bhee gaalee de.
Mujhse tujhko jo bhee hain.
Saare shikve kah hee de.
Dar par bhookhaa aayaa hai.
Pahle usko rotee de.
Ujrat to achhee paalee.
Ab logoN kaa baakee de.
Daulat mat de bachhoN ko.
Bas too baateN achhee de.
Dr. Surendra Saini
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Satish Shukla
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2011, 05:13:01 AM » |
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sksaini4 ji,
Waah waah chhoti behr kee ek aur
khoobsoorat ghazal kya kahne..
Dili daad o mubarakbaad qubool
farmaayen.
Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2011, 11:09:48 AM » |
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जो कहना है कह भी दे | जज़्बातों को छुट्टी दे || घुट घुट मरने वाले को | जा जादू की झप्पी दे || अन्दर बच्चा सोता है | दस्तक हल्की हल्की दे || पहले ही दिल टूटा है | आजा तू भी गाली दे ||  मुझसे तुझको जो भी हैं | सारे शिकवे कह ही दे || दर पर भूखा आया है | पहले उसको रोटी दे || उजरत तो अच्छी पाली | अब लोगों का बाकी दे || दौलत मत दे बच्चों को | बस तू बातें अच्छी दे || डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी Bahut khoob saini sahab Daulat mmat de baccho ko... Jo kahnaa hai kah bhee de. jazbaatoN ko chhuttee de. Ghut ghut marne vale ko. Jaa jaadoo kee jhappee de. Andar bachhaa sotaa hai. Dastak halkee halkee de. Pahle hee dil tootaa hai. Aajaa too bhee gaalee de. Mujhse tujhko jo bhee hain. Saare shikve kah hee de. Dar par bhookhaa aayaa hai. Pahle usko rotee de. Ujrat to achhee paalee. Ab logoN kaa baakee de. Daulat mat de bachhoN ko. Bas too baateN achhee de. Dr. Surendra Saini |
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2011, 10:46:14 AM » |
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sksaini4
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2011, 04:47:14 AM » |
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satish ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2011, 04:48:02 AM » |
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sanjeev ji dhanywaad
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2011, 04:48:56 AM » |
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mukesh ji hradya se aabhaar
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2011, 04:50:09 AM » |
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parwaaz ji aap kaa andaaze daad niraalaa hai dil se shukriyaa
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2011, 09:51:53 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2012, 08:49:50 AM » |
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2012, 09:15:52 AM » |
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Hasan saheb shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2012, 09:19:28 AM » |
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Suresh ji shukriya matle ki doosree line men correction hai
use is tarah padhe
Dil ko thodee chhuttee de.
दिल को थोड़ी छुट्टी दे |
Thanks with sorry
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«Reply #13 on: February 17, 2012, 10:38:07 AM » |
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bahut sundar bayan hai.
bahut ache...dhro badhai
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«Reply #14 on: February 17, 2012, 10:46:41 AM » |
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boht khoob saini sir
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