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Teri ek jalak dekhne k liye kitni tarasti hu me,,
Girti hu, fisalti hu na jane kitni chhote khati hu me,,
Tu he kisi or ki jindgi phir Q
roj usi raste se gujarti hu me,,,
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2017, 07:34:03 AM »
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Teri ek jalak dekhne k liye kitni tarasti hu me,,
Girti hu, fisalti hu na jane kitni chhote khati hu me,,
Tu he kisi or ki jindgi phir Q
roj usi raste se gujarti hu me,,,

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Niru Jee apne roman urdu mein spellings theek keejiye, woh tabhi ho saktaa hai agar unhein theek se bol sakte hain.Yeh waqt ke saath theek ho saktaa hai agar aap doosron ko parhte rahein aur comment karte rahein to.

Teri ek jhalak dekhne ke liye kitni tarasti hoon main
Girti hoon fisalti hoon naa jaane kitni chotein khaati hoon main
Tu hai kisi aur kee jindagi phir kyun
Roj ussi raaste se guzarti hoon main
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2017, 02:44:56 AM »
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thanks for your advice,, i try my best
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