Wo Bik Chuki Thee........Eik guriyaah ki kahani ........ !!!

by Talat on April 06, 2008, 11:14:02 AM
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Jis factory men usko banaya gaya tha wahan yun to buahat piyaree piyaree guriyan bantee heen magar us factory ke malik ne usko khaas tavajuh de ke banwaya tha

bauhat haseen to nahi thee vo magar ajub kashish thee rakhee thee us men uske malik ne

jaise he vo tayaar ho ke saj sanwar ke dukaan pe rakhe gayee sabhi dumbakhud reh gaye ...Aate jate hur khareedaar ki nigah ushee pe jamee reh jatee mgar uski qeemat itni thee ke koi khareedaar usko khareedne ke sakat na rakhta tha bas dekh ke khush ho ke agaye barh jata tha aur vo guriya muntazir rehtee ke kaun kab usko yahan se is dukaan se apne ghar le jaye ga .

Yunhee shab o roz guzarte rahe , yunhee vo sab ki manzoor e nazar banee rahee.

Tab eik roz eik ameer khareedaar aya dukaan pe , uske ajub lafzon men jadu tha ajub charb zabani thee jis se us ne us guriya ke maalik ko aisa sheeshe men utara ke malik ne us khareedaar ke hathon one paune damon men us guiriya ko bech dala ....

Jaise hee narm o mulayam guriya us nayae malik ke hathon men ayee vo seham ke reh gayee

kitna sakht tha uske hathon ka lams kaise jakara tha us ne us nazuk see guriya ko ke uska sans hee ruk gaya , uski nigaah men faqat guriya ke haseen jism ki sakht uske jamaiy zebi thee ...buahat khush kisi faateh kee tarha us guriya ko vo mazbootee se apne hath men thaam ke ghar le aya aur eik jagha saja dya

Hur anae janae wala mehmaan usko sarhaata aur malik daad samaita magar eik baar ghar men sajanae ke baad us ne kabhi palat ke ye na dekha ke guriya ka khayal rakhe uski dekhbhal kare uski sajavat ko barqarar rakhe

Jab bhi koi naya mehmaan ata usko saja bana ke eik showpiece kee tarha saamnae laa ke rakha jata aur sb ke janae ke baad usko phir andhere kone men dhakel diya jata

Dheere dhere waqt ki dhool uske wajud pe jamtee gayee ,,vo purane hotee gayee ,toootee gaye bikhartee gayee,chehre ke naqoosh bigarte gaye maskh hote gaye ,ander he ander tanha hotee gayee .

Khalikhali ankhon se vo atae jatae apne malik ko dekhtee ke shayed uski nigah kabhi us pe pare kabhi to vo pass aye kabhi to usko piyar se choay kabhi to usko sajayae phir sanware kabhi to usko koi aisa lamha de jis se vo phir khil jayae mehak jyaae

Wo sochte rehtee ke jab uske malik ko uska jism itna pasand uski banwat sajwat itni pasand to phir akhir vo us se piyar kyun nahi karta

Is sawal ka javab usko kaheen na mil saka

phir us ne soch liya ke shayed aisa hee hota ho ga

Waqt yunhee guzarta gaya vo meli hote gayee purani hot e gaye aur wo vaqt bhi aya jab uske agayae dosree guriyon k a zikr hone laga uske malik ko us men naqs dikhne lage , dosree guriyon se uska muqabla kiya janae laga

chupchaap hur zulm sehtee ho waqt guzartee rahe ke uske bas men kuch na tha.......

 "vo to bik chukee thee aur bazaar men bikne wale cheezain kabhi apni marzi ki malik nahi hoteen vo apne khareedaar ke reham o karam pe jeetee hein aur unhee ke hukum se qabr kee tareekee men gum ho jatee hein "

Dhool men atee apni tanhayee mein simti vo sehma sa dil lye khali ankhon ko jhapkatee zamanae ke badalte rang dekh rahe the ke achanak VO uski zindagi men chala aya

Dur se US NE us guriya ko dekha uar nazeek aaya ......guriya dar gayee ke uska ye toota phoota vajud ye purana sa libaas ye maskh sa chehra ye nidhaal sa badan kaheen us nayae dekhne wale ko mayous na kar de magar najane kaisa tha vo meharbaan ke ushee toote phoote huliye men us guriya ko buahat ehtiyaat se nazakat se pyar se halke se dhere se muskura ke uthaya apne seene se lagaya aur der tak usko apne pass liye betha raha

us guriya ke bikhrae baal sanware uske wajud se dhool jhaaree uske libas ko durust kiya uske cherhe ko apne hathon se dhere dhere pyar kiya

kuch is ada se choa us ne guriya ko ke vo damakne lagee phir se chamakne lagee ......janae kya tha uske lams men uski ankkhon men ke vo sab dukh dard sab gham bhool gayee , jee gayee........

yunhee der tak vo usko pyar karta raha janae kya dikha usko us guriya mein

vo guriya der tak yehe sochtee rahe heraan heraan yehee sochtee rahe bas ke ita sara vaala akhir kya tha acha us mein ke vo yun usko piyar dene ruk gaya

vo meharbaan to itna dilnasheen tha ke jis nayee naveli guriya pe hath rakhta vo guriya sar jhukayae uske hukum ke tabaiy ho jatee magar janae kyun us ajnabi meharbaan ne us guriya ko apne dil men basa lya

Taader us ko sanwarta raha pyar karta raha , guriya ka dil dhree dhere dharakne laga vo sans lene lagee

kuch der aise hee betahasha pyar de ke us ne phir guriya ko ushee show case men rakha aur chala gaya

guriya ro paree

usko pukartee reh gayee magar vo phir na aya

magr kuch din baad vo laut ke aya

phir ushe tarha us guriya ko pas kiya dil ke nazdeek bitha ke pyar karta raha guriya phir hansne lage muskuranae lagee ke phir khawb toota phir us meharbaa n ke janae ka waqt ho gaya

yun baar baar bicharte rahe baar baar vo jeetee rahe martee rahee

Hur lamha us guriya ko apne is meharbaan ka intazar rehne laga

Vo meharbaan jo aisa maseeha tha jis ke lams ne us ka hur ghaou bhar dya uski beemaar javani ko shifa dee

Vo aata apnee guriya ko seene se lagata ankhain band kar ke beth jaata phir usko koi hosh he na rehta ke vo kis jahaan men hei


Na kabhi apne liye kuch chahata na kuch mangta na guriya se koi farmaish karta

vo bas guriya ki khushi chahta tha uski nayee zindagi chahta tha


Eik din vo jaa raha tha ke guriya betahasha ro paree

apne maseeha ko apne meharbaan ko rokna chaha

vo maseeha palat ke aya

guriya ko seene se lagaya

aur kaha

"mein to nahi ruk sakta magar tumhen apne sath le ja sakta hon , tum bass eik baar ishara kar do is zindaan se mein tumhen azaad kara ke le jaoun ga eik nayee dunia dikhaoun ga do jahaan ki khushiyaan tumhare anchal men daal don ga tum bass eik baar kaho aur men zyada der na lagoaun ga phir tumhen sath le janae men , kisii se na daro ........mein apni dunia men jitne log hie sab se baghawat kar ke tumhen utha ke le jaoun ga kisi ki parwah na karo bas tum eik baar tayaar ho jaou "

Chupchaap

saakit

vo guriya

........................................peeche hat gayee

kya kehtee ke


"vo to bik chukee thee aur bazaar men bikne wale cheezain kabhi apni marzi ki malik nahi hoteen vo apne khareedaar ke reham o karam pe jeetee hein aur unhee ke hukum se qabr kee tareekee men gum ho jatee hein ................................................. ........................."


By Maham Azmi
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2008, 10:11:26 AM »
Bahut apni si kahaani hai..
Ek gudiyaa ki jabaani hai..

Bazaar mein bikne waali cheezon ki kimat, dhan-daulat se, lagaayi to kya lagaayi... Ashkon se tolon isko, to samjhoge.. Yeh to anmol hai, inka koi mol nahin hota...

Don't want to say this here... But this story brought tears to my eyes...
Its so real, so perfect.. so touching..

Thanks for sharing this with us.. Celmira..
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2008, 10:50:14 AM »

Wakayi bahut achhi story hai, kya hua agar mujhe kaafi ssare words samajh nahi aaye to.. tongue3
Really nice sharing Cellu..
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2008, 11:31:04 AM »
Thank You so much Shikha and Jags....I am happy atleast someone read it and understood its really deep meaning. Thanks a lot friends Usual Smile


P.S. Ye Cellu kaun hai tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2008, 11:51:34 AM »

Tum ho aur kaun hai.. Sirf cell likhta to ajeeb sa lagta na.... tongue3
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2008, 01:19:04 PM »
Hey bhaggu  DOH
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2008, 02:09:31 PM »
nice sharing celmira
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2008, 07:20:33 PM »
Thanks Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2008, 07:24:42 PM »
Waah Talat..bahoot khoob...ise paRh ker mujhe apni kahaniyaaN yaad aa gayiii....bahoot hi emitions diye haiN tumne...bahoot khoob...daad kabool FarmayeiN.janaab raat ki raani ji.... happy3...

harash
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2008, 07:41:57 PM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Harash...lekin maine sirf share kiya hai, iski creator main nahin Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2008, 07:48:30 PM »
you are always welcome talat.....
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2008, 06:12:20 PM »
beautiful sharing celmira!!! Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2008, 06:42:41 PM »
Jee bilkul ek ranj-o-gham ka toofan hai iss kahani men.
Azmi Saahib ki takhleeq kaafi gahrai tak paivast hoti maloom hoi.

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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2008, 11:29:07 AM »
Thanks a lot Khwaish and Syednaami.
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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2008, 05:36:04 PM »
You are Welcome... always thanks
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