Dard hotaa hai jigar mein, to kabhi seeney mein!

by abdbundeli on August 06, 2008, 03:32:33 AM
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 Dard hotaa hai jigar mein, to kabhi seeney mein!
 Lag rahaa mujhko, ki, kuchh hogaa is maheeney mein!!
 Pee chukaa hoon; suroor hai naheen, khumaaree hai!
 Mujhko lagtaa hai, farq aa gayaa hai jeeney mein!!


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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 04:57:09 AM »
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Peete peete mile hai jo aalaam,
De diya jigar ko bhi abhaam,
Maye ne kuchh kar diya aisa kaam,
Chain gaya sukoon bhi hua haraam,
Socho na chhodi to kya hoga anjaam,
Ab jo hua so hua karo thoda aaram. -


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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 09:28:54 AM »
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syednaami ji,
Your 'didactics' are welcome: my dear friend!
The 'wine' I drink, is a purely mental 'drink'!
Otherwise, I drink just water: that too boiled;
This 'wine' of mine is harmless, being in 'ink'!
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2008, 04:43:51 PM »
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Jee hamen gyan hai Abddundeli janab.  -

Buddhimaan tum anubhaav bhi tere, -
Murkh man mera samvaad kya jaane, -
Madira maansik ki hetu kyun vyath, -
Lekhani ho ya vastav Rab hi jaane. -


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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2008, 04:46:34 PM »
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Kya baat hai... Bahut hi khoob... Applause
Excellent work Abd ji and Syed ji..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2008, 05:55:35 PM »
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Meyrey  Pyaarey Dosto!

 'Madiraa, madiraa hai; madhu, madhu hai, meyrey bhaayee!
 'May' to, kewal 'symbol' hai, 'bhakti', ya ki, 'love' kaa!!
 'Saaqee' hai, 'madhyam', beech 'bhakt' key 'bhagwan' key;
 Woh, 'guru' hai 'maykash' kaa, 'pratnidhi' hai,'keshav' kaa!
 Ham ko 'yathaarth' mein jee, 'shrudhaamrut' peenaa hai:
 Mujh ko sharaab  sey nafrat hai, 'shabd' sey naheen!
 Peenaa, par khud ko zaahid batlaanaa 'agh' hai!
 Jeewan bhar 'na peeney' ki 'shikshaayen' deen hain:
 Mein, 'sachmuch' ka zaahid hoon; rindee 'drama' hai!

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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2008, 01:50:20 AM »
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nice work Abd ji and Sayednaami
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«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2008, 02:49:32 AM »
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KUCH SUNA NAHI SIRF LAFZ PEENA SAMAJ ME AAYA
KHUDA KHUSH RAKHE TUM SABKO GHAYEL THODI MAY AUR PEE AAYA
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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2008, 06:49:02 AM »
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Shukriyah Pooja ji!
sajid_ghayel ji!
Peetaa hoon subah-shaam, raat-din mahaz sharaab!
Koshish to yahee rahtee hai, aaye na nazar aab!
Sotaa hoon to peetaa hoon khwaab mein sanam key saath;
Woh saath agar ho na, to, ho jaataa hoon beytaab!!

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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2009, 01:00:27 AM »
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Bahur Shukriya Muhtarma Mahiya aur Muhtarma Pooja...
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2009, 12:08:51 PM »
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Kya baat hai... Bahut hi khoob... Applause
Excellent work Abd ji and Syed ji..  Thumbs UP
Thanks Shikha12 ji!
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2009, 06:52:35 AM »
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Wah Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,Syednaami ji aur Sajid ji ne, icon_thumleft
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2009, 05:55:32 PM »
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Wah Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,Syednaami ji aur Sajid ji ne, icon_thumleft
very nice and beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Madhu ji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2009, 09:57:53 PM »
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Nice lines Uncle ji and Syed ji  Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2009, 09:59:14 PM »
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'Dard hotaa hai jigar mein, to kabhi seeney mein!
 Lag rahaa mujhko, ki, kuchh hogaa is maheeney mein!!
 Pee chukaa hoon; suroor hai naheen, khumaaree hai!
 Mujhko lagtaa hai, farq aa gayaa hai jeeney mein!!
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Bin piye ek nasha-sa rehta hai
Jismein masti ka dariya behta hai
Besada-si pukar hai dil ki
Kaun sunta hai kya ye kehta hai
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