Yeh aag, jo, seeney mein lagee hai: nayee hai yeh!

by abdbundeli on September 08, 2008, 11:38:54 AM
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Yeh dard, jo, seeney mein uthaa hai, nayaa hai yeh!
Yeh aag, jo, seeney mein lagee hai: nayee hai yeh!
Jab sey huye ho door nazar sey, meyrey mahboob!
Beynoor aankh, kooz-see pathraa gayee hai yeh!!

                                   - abd bundeli

 
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2009, 01:25:11 AM »
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Wah Abd ji very beautiful creation,kamaal ka likha aapne. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:keep it up.
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2009, 12:26:33 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 07, 2009, 01:25:11 AM
Wah Abd ji very beautiful creation,kamaal ka likha aapne. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:keep it up.
Thanks Madhu ji!
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2009, 02:44:50 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 08, 2008, 11:38:54 AM
Yeh dard, jo, seeney mein uthaa hai, nayaa hai yeh!
Yeh aag, jo, seeney mein lagee hai: nayee hai yeh!
Jab sey huye ho door nazar sey, meyrey mahboob!
Beynoor aankh, kooz-see pathraa gayee hai yeh!!

                                   - abd bundeli

Wah.....Uncle ji bahut acche  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2009, 02:45:56 PM »
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Mandir tumhare pyar ka dil mein bana liya
Jab chaha apni lagan ka deepak jala liya
Sooni padi muddat se thi basti mere dil ki
Tum aa gaye toh tumne apna ghar bana liya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2009, 03:07:42 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 02:44:50 PM
Wah.....Uncle ji bahut acche  Thumbs UP
Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 02:45:56 PM

Mandir tumhare pyar ka dil mein bana liya
Jab chaha apni lagan ka deepak jala liya
Sooni padi muddat se thi basti mere dil ki
Tum aa gaye toh tumne apna ghar bana liya.. Usual Smile


Thanks a lot Roja ji! Aur, bahut hi khoob!

Mandir hai yah pyaar kaa,
Priya, priyatamaa sameyt!
Dweyt pratishhthit hai yahaan;
Yahaan naheen adweyt!!

             - 'Ramwatiya'
         
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2009, 03:15:16 PM »
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Thanks a lot Roja ji! Aur, bahut hi khoob!

Mandir hai yah pyaar kaa,
Priya, priyatamaa sameyt!
Dweyt pratishhthit hai yahaan;
Yahaan naheen adweyt!!

             - 'Ramwatiya'


Thanks and here ....reply....  Usual Smile

Hai ishq ebadat isse samja na zamana
Vehmo-gumane-akkal ne sab kuch gava liya

Phool khushi se aaj samate nahi rakeeb
Dera "Roja" ne teri gali se uta liya

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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2009, 04:13:44 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 03:15:16 PM

Thanks and here ....reply....  Usual Smile


Hai ishq ebadat isse samja na zamana
Vehmo-guman-e-akal ne sab kuch gava diya

Phooley khushi se aaj samate nahin rakeeb
"Roja" ne dera  teri gali se utha liya
 tongue3


Nice one Roja!

Itney mein haar jaaougey, us ko patah na thaa;
Warnah salaam leykey chalaa aataa bey-sharam!
Woh, woh hai, khushee sey bhi naheen phooltaa hai jo;
Phir us ko kyaa sataayengey duniyaa key hijra-o-gam!!

                                       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2009, 04:22:07 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 07, 2009, 04:13:44 PM

Nice one Roja!

Itney mein haar jaaougey, us ko patah na thaa;
Warnah salaam leykey chalaa aataa bey-sharam!
Woh, woh hai, khushee sey bhi naheen phooltaa hai jo;
Phir us ko kyaa sataayengey duniyaa key hijra-o-gam!!

                                       - abd bundeli

Thank you uncle ji and Nice lines again...
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2009, 04:24:55 PM »
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Apne hamare meherba.n honge Na hum pe kyu?
Humne toh dushmanon ko bhi apna bana liya
Ahle-wafa  ke darmiyan jagde nahi hote
Chale apni-apni raah aur manzil ko paa liya..
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2009, 07:55:23 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 04:22:07 PM
Thank you uncle ji and Nice lines again...
Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 04:24:55 PM

Apne hamare meherba.n honge Na hum pe kyu?
Humne toh dushmanon ko bhi apna bana liya
Ahl-e-wafa ke darmiyan jhagde nahin hote
Bas raah Chale apni, au' manzil ko paa liya..


Thanks Roja! Bahut khoob!

Un kee nazar halaal hai sharmaayegee kabhee!
Jhagrhey ki koyi baat nahin aayegee kabhee!
Chaltee raheygee raah, khatm ho safar, na ho;
Rooh-e-rawaan ko, rooh wo bulaayegee kabhee!!

                         - abd bundeli
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