Nazar se Nazar ki

by ParwaaZ on August 05, 2010, 02:23:53 AM
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Nazar se nazar ki baate ho rahi hai
Zamee se falak ki baate ho rahi hai

Kaha zindagi ne socho jo na socha
Amal se ajal ki baate ho rahi hai

Kya tum ho sachche ya mai hi farebi
Fareb-e asal ki baate ho rahi hai

Wo Parwaaz kaise uude hai.n dekho
Khata pinjre ki baate ho rahi hai

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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 12:42:00 AM »
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Nazar se nazar ki baate ho rahi hai
Zamee se falak ki baate ho rahi hai

Kaha zindagi ne socho jo na socha
Amal se ajal ki baate ho rahi hai

Kya tum ho sachche ya mai hi farebi
Fareb-e asal ki baate ho rahi hai

Wo Parwaaz kaise uude hai.n dekho
Khata pinjre ki baate ho rahi hai


Very Impressive...Parwaaz Sahab ! Bahut Sacche ehsaas ! very nice creation.... dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 01:24:15 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
tere mere sath ki baatein ho rahi hain
zindagi ki suagaton ki batein ho rahi hain

duniya me jo aake khele bhi nahin
dekho unke janeki baatein ho rahi hai

ankahi kahaniyan sunati hain yahan raatein
dekho subah k aane ki batein ho rahi hai

main kya kahun parwaz ji ab aapse
k har taraf aapke kalam ki baatein ho rahi hain...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2010, 03:45:18 AM »
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Naresh Jee AadaaB

Khaakh ahsaasoN ki tarif wa hounsla afzai ke liye hum tahe dil se mamnoon hai...

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez....
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2010, 04:00:36 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
tere mere sath ki baatein ho rahi hain
zindagi ki suagaton ki batein ho rahi hain

duniya me jo aake khele bhi nahin
dekho unke janeki baatein ho rahi hai

ankahi kahaniyan sunati hain yahan raatein
dekho subah k aane ki batein ho rahi hai

main kya kahun parwaz ji ab aapse
k har taraf aapke kalam ki baatein ho rahi hain...!!!
Kasak Jee Thanks for nice compliment...
Aapne bhi behad khoob likha hai tecnique per dhayaan dijiye....
Hume ummid hai aap behad khoob kalaam likheNgi..

humari tazaa kalaam ke chand ashaar pesh kar rahe hai..
ummid hai pasand aayenge.....


ZubaaN jo na kah sake woh alfaaz kaise kahuN
Dil kii gehraiyoN se jude wo raaz kaise kahuN

Ta-umar rishtaa apna raha hai na-kaamiyoN se
Jaankar bhi hume khud pe hai naaz kaise kahuN

Jhute hi sahiN yeh, khawaab to mere apne haiN
Khayali bandishoN me huN ParwaaZ kaise kahuN
          
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2010, 01:57:00 AM »
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Bohat Achche Parwaaz Ji,.
And Anamika Ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2010, 03:19:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob Parwaaz Ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2010, 03:20:08 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
tere mere sath ki baatein ho rahi hain
zindagi ki suagaton ki batein ho rahi hain

duniya me jo aake khele bhi nahin
dekho unke janeki baatein ho rahi hai

ankahi kahaniyan sunati hain yahan raatein
dekho subah k aane ki batein ho rahi hai

main kya kahun parwaz ji ab aapse
k har taraf aapke kalam ki baatein ho rahi hain...!!!

Very good response Anamika Ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2010, 04:40:22 PM »
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mast he jii..

wo to chilman ne dhak liya unke rukhsaar ko,
warna "Abhi" yunhi nazro se nazron ki baat ho rahi thi~
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2011, 06:15:26 PM »
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Nazar se nazar ki baate ho rahi hai
Zamee se falak ki baate ho rahi hai

Kaha zindagi ne socho jo na socha
Amal se ajal ki baate ho rahi hai

Kya tum ho sachche ya mai hi farebi
Fareb-e asal ki baate ho rahi hai

Wo Parwaaz kaise uude hai.n dekho
Khata pinjre ki baate ho rahi hai



bahut khoob parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2011, 06:52:44 PM »
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boht khoob parwaz ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2011, 04:19:23 PM »
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Kasak Jee Thanks for nice compliment...
Aapne bhi behad khoob likha hai tecnique per dhayaan dijiye....
Hume ummid hai aap behad khoob kalaam likheNgi..

humari tazaa kalaam ke chand ashaar pesh kar rahe hai..
ummid hai pasand aayenge.....


ZubaaN jo na kah sake woh alfaaz kaise kahuN
Dil kii gehraiyoN se jude wo raaz kaise kahuN

Ta-umar rishtaa apna raha hai na-kaamiyoN se
Jaankar bhi hume khud pe hai naaz kaise kahuN

Jhute hi sahiN yeh, khawaab to mere apne haiN
Khayali bandishoN me huN ParwaaZ kaise kahuN
         



bahut khub parwaaz ji
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