sharabee

by NETRAPAL on February 26, 2007, 11:22:34 AM
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mai nahi hoo wo  jo mai tha kabhi
ek kon me padee ek lash hoo abhi
kyo maraa me ye kis ko pata hai?
do ghoot pee thee maine bhee kabhi

hajar saathi bane the mere bhee kabhee
jee rahee hai mare we bhee, abhee
aaj na koi mera hai sab chod gaye hai
jo samjha tha n mai tab wo samjha hoo abhee

do ghoot me iske saroor wo paya tha
aasmaan bhee dartee par nazar ayaa tha
sab taraf khushaalee najar atee thee
hosh ate hee andhera hee najar ayaa tha

insaan se haiwaan ban gayaa hoo mai
jo kal tha wo aaj nahi hoo mai

netra.....
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2007, 05:27:02 PM »
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Good poem and a nice thought tried to expressed in here, I feel its loosing the flow a little in the end but really nice effort.

It can be also be in Tanziyaah Section but fits here too.
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2007, 04:38:33 AM »
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Good poem and a nice thought tried to expressed in here, I feel its loosing the flow a little in the end but really nice effort.

It can be also be in Tanziyaah Section but fits here too.


thanks sir jee,

aapne sahee pakada hai  :lol:  :lol: likhte likhte achanak band karna tha isliye poor likh nahi saka........ye abhee adhooree hai


netra......
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2007, 12:00:04 PM »
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mai nahi hoo wo  jo mai tha kabhi
ek kon me padee ek lash hoo abhi
kyo maraa me ye kis ko pata hai?
do ghoot pee thee maine bhee kabhi

hajar saathi bane the mere bhee kabhee
jee rahee hai mare we bhee, abhee
aaj na koi mera hai sab chod gaye hai
jo samjha tha n mai tab wo samjha hoo abhee

do ghoot me iske saroor wo paya tha
aasmaan bhee dartee par nazar ayaa tha
sab taraf khushaalee najar atee thee
hosh ate hee andhera hee najar ayaa tha

insaan se haiwaan ban gayaa hoo mai
jo kal tha wo aaj nahi hoo mai

netra.....


do ghoot maine jo pee thee kabhi
pal do pal ka mahmaan rah gaya hoo abhi
akela pada hoo krraahto ke beech
yo kon mujhe raha hai kheech
sharaabee haoo mai yahee mera nam hai
bhool gaye sab nam mera jo tha kabhi

shyam hote hee ek aag see dil me lagtee hai
kadam bahakte hai  ek ajeeb see pyas jagtee hai
bhool jata hoo mai sab kuch bas ek hee manji dikthee hai

mai kya tha kya rah gya hoo mai to kya ho gaya hoo
kaha se kaha me pahoonch gayaa hoo
jajjr see kayaa rah gayee hai meri
jiskaa sahara tha kabhi sahara ban gayee hai meri

netra.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2007, 12:24:56 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob likha hai Netra... =D> =D>
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2007, 01:22:32 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob likha hai Netra... =D> =D>


shukrya shikha jeeee..... :razz:  Usual Smile

netra........
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2007, 04:48:00 PM »
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Netra

Too good ! =D>
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2007, 05:09:11 PM »
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Nice one again.. Your style of writing is refreshing ..
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2007, 07:20:01 AM »
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shukriya sabhi ko......

netra........

rah chalte muh fer lete hai
paas tak koi ataa nahi
jinda hai ya mara parvah kisi ko bhe nahi
yahee dasha hotee hai har din mere
chalna chahta hoo pano satth dete nahi
mai sharabee hoo yaro,
thodee see maine pee lee hai abhee
jise chaha tha saath chod gayee hai
chodna chahta ho jise, sath wo chodtee nahi
maine pee thee dil tootaa tha mera bhee kabhi..
aaj tanha hoo sirf ek botal hai saath mere
par kyaa karoo wo bhee kahalee hogayee hai abhee..

netra.......
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2007, 01:01:57 PM »
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shant saa jamee ye kon hai leta hua
bilkh rahe hai log sare aisa yaha kya hua
safed se kapde me lipta ye kon hai leta hua
ye lash hai, ye kyo or kaise hua

kal tak jo jinda tha aaj lash ban gaya hai
pareevar ka sahara ye kyon ujjad gaya hai
ye ek maa ke kaleje ka tukdaa kaise bichad  gaya hai

ye bhee kabhee jawan tha parvir kee an tha
insaan tha kabhe janwar ban gaya tha
lash ban jayega kya isko ye pata tha

ye ab pta chal hai ye kyo mara hai abhee
isne bhee yaro do ghoot pee thee kabee
isne bhee yaro do ghoot pee thee kabhee...
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2007, 11:22:35 AM »
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ghar bika, bikga vyapaar meraa
chin gaya sb kuch ek pal me mera
fakeer ban bangyaa hoo ek hee pal me
chand lamho me sansaar ujjad gaya mera..

saha ab jataa nahee, kaha kuch jata nahi
kaise mai rah paaoonga ab is dunaiya me
wo jalim chodne  ke bad bhee chutti nahi

kadwe swaad me kay hai n jan payaa hooo
bottale andaaj ko kya koyee samj payaa hai
arr mai to kya hoo rajpat tak kisi ke bache nahi

tangae hall hoo me har tarf se lachaar hoo
billakh rahe naddan mai bebas kuch kar saktaa nahi

sab kuch tha mera mai bhee abaad tha kahee
kya karoo yaro do ghoot maine bhee pee the kabhee.....

netra....
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2007, 12:04:42 PM »
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HAM BHEE SITAMGAR THE KABHEE JAMANE KE
SAATH PAL PARBAR ME WO CHOD GAYE MERA
KASOOR MERA THA N THA KASOOR OONKA YARO
DO GHOOT ME SAB KUCH LUT GYA HAI MERA

NETRA..... sad5
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«Reply #12 on: March 10, 2007, 12:13:46 PM »
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HAM BHEE SITAMGAR THE KABHEE JAMANE KE
SAATH PAL PARBAR ME WO CHOD GAYE MERA
KASOOR MERA THA N THA KASOOR OONKA YARO
DO GHOOT ME SAB KUCH LUT GYA HAI MERA

NETRA..... sad5


JAMANE SE ANJAAN THA MAI JAMNA THA MUJHSE BHEE
AAJ JAN GYA HOO SAB, JANGAYE HAI SAB MUJHE BHEE
SAB JAGAH EK HEE  NAM HAI WO DEKHO EK OR SHARABEE

AAJ HAR GALI KEE DIWARE PAHCHANTEE HAI HAME
HAR PAL HAR GHADEE WHEE SAHARAA HAI MERA
SHARABIYO KA YE HEE TO EKSAHARA HAI
LALKHADATE HEE THAM LETEE HAI HAME

NETRA...
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«Reply #13 on: March 15, 2007, 09:15:03 AM »
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ham bhee kabhee sahara the jinnke
jo aaj besahara hue baite hai
umeed ham se kya rakhenge wo yaro
ham to khood chalte hai dagmgate kadmo se ....

netra..
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«Reply #14 on: March 17, 2007, 04:25:38 AM »
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DO GAJ KAFAN ME LIPTA PADA HAI
                    BILKTHE PARIWAR SE GHIRAA HUA
                    SHAMSHAAN JANE KEE TAYAAREE HAI
                    GAM HEE GAM HAI RONA HEE RONA HAI
                     CHOTE CHOTE MATAM BANATE BACHE
                     SHAYAD SAHARA INKA CHIN GAYAA HAI
                     SOONEE ANKHO SE TAKTA EK BOODHA
                     AASMAAN KO TAKTA HOOA NAM ANKHO SE
                     KYA HOGA AB .., YE KAISE HO GYA HAI
                     KYA YAHEE HOTA HAI DO GHOOT PEEN KE BAD
                     DUNIYA PEETEE HAI OR PEEKAR BHEE JETEE HAI
                     MARAA TO YE HEE, SIRF DO GHOOT PEENE KE BAD..
                     PEENE KEE AADT NHEE THEE DHOKE SYE PILIYEE THEE
                     JO PEETE THE JEE RHE HAI KANDHA USE DE RAHE HAI
                     KYO MAR GYAA WO IS JAHAR KO PEEN KE BAD
                   
                     
                 

NETRA....
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