To: Shiv Kumar Batalvi

by dalwara1 on May 06, 2009, 10:58:45 AM
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Shiv Nu

Jionde nu jinna na puchhya mare baad butt banhaande
Teree samaadhee te tere dushmanh vi shardhaanjali phull charhaande

Vik gya jis jahaan vich tera saaraa ghar baar
Jeehde kaaranh teinu zindagi 'te rihaa na koee itbaar
Us jahaan de lok teryaan gazalaan mehfilaan vich gaande

Tere ishaq da jinaa veryaan ne bahut mazaak udaayaa
Tere dubb maran laee jinna gamaan da samundar patvaayaa
Uh teryaan khaali botlaan nu aapnhe teerthaan 'te sajaande

Yakeen kareen sache dostaa tere rahaan 'te chaldaa rahaangaa
Toree si jihrhee larhee tun geetaan naal bhardaa rahaanga
Sooli tang denh meinu vi jihrhe tere kaatil akhwaande

Lekhak: Kaka Gill
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 11:51:32 AM »
Shiv Nu

Jionde nu jinna na puchhya mare baad butt banhaande
Teree samaadhee te tere dushmanh vi shardhaanjali phull charhaande

Vik gya jis jahaan vich tera saaraa ghar baar
Jeehde kaaranh teinu zindagi 'te rihaa na koee itbaar
Us jahaan de lok teryaan gazalaan mehfilaan vich gaande

Tere ishaq da jinaa veryaan ne bahut mazaak udaayaa
Tere dubb maran laee jinna gamaan da samundar patvaayaa
Uh teryaan khaali botlaan nu aapnhe teerthaan 'te sajaande

Yakeen kareen sache dostaa tere rahaan 'te chaldaa rahaangaa
Toree si jihrhee larhee tun geetaan naal bhardaa rahaanga
Sooli tang denh meinu vi jihrhe tere kaatil akhwaande

Lekhak: Kaka Gill

Wah Wah Wah Wah Kaka Gill Ji da koi jawab nahi,

Har waar di tarah iss waar wi ki khoob likhya hai,

Thanx for sharing with us Dalwara Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2009, 11:09:31 AM »
Thanks Shally for liking Kaka's ghazal.

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