@ AAJ EK DAASTAN @

by Matrix Guy on January 13, 2011, 07:10:28 AM
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Hum Aaj Ek Dastaan Sunate He
Dekho Kese Khud Me Zahar Ghulate He happy3 happy3

Karte The Ishq Ek Hasina Se
Ab Use Dekhte Rah Jatee He sad5 sad5

Khud Ko Harpal Rulate He crybaby2 crybaby2
Nindo Me Uthkar Chilaate He He sad11 sad11

Shadi Kar Li Us Ne Kisi Aur Se
Hum Dil Ko Tasalli De Sulate He sleepy2 sleepy2

Socha Jo Hua Use Bhulate He
Usko Ghar Khane Per Bulate He tongue3 tongue3

Ab To Sitam Ki Hud Hi Ho Chuki
Uske Bacche  Jalim Mama Kakhke Bulate He BangHead BangHead BangHead

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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 07:28:29 AM »
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abeeee........ye kya ull jullull likhte rahte ho aap.....

lekin jo bhi likha hai zabardast likha hai....waise kaunse mama ji,,,

zara naam batao .....maamu jaan...

mastam presentation ji ..smileys ka mastam use.....superb..u made me smile againnnn......
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2011, 07:33:12 AM »
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excellent poem Matrix ji
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2

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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 07:37:56 AM »
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hahahaha...
mazaaa aa gaya re janeman.
ye hui na kuch baat
har tadapte dil ki sachhai hai ye to.
hahaha.
""
hhadd tab hua jaata hai
    jab uske bachhe hi maami lai maami lao
kah kar chillate hain
    kaise usko btaye hum aye dost
unki maa jo unki mummy hai
    wo hi badkismati se unki maami bante bante bante rah jaati hai
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 07:40:43 AM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy wave wave wave wave wave wave wave wave wave wave wave
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2011, 09:36:00 AM »
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hahaha.... poor u mg....
waise aapki poem se jyada hasi mujhe wo smiley dekh kar aayi jo aapne use kiye hai....
but poor u.... hahaha....
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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2011, 01:39:12 PM »
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Bhai mast likha hai per aap ek acche shayar ho aur apni likhi post kar ap sunder dhang se yaha post karoge to bahut lagega hume bhi aur sabko bhai aap plz jo likha uski size zara chhoti karo and mast likha hai apne mammu
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2011, 02:06:51 PM »
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mujhe aapse humdardi hai Matrix ji.
aur haan apne bachhon yani ke aapke Haseena ke bachhon ko mana karo kamskam Mamu to na bulaten--Bhaiya thik rahega Usual SmileWinking
mast post hai Sahab
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 08:40:13 AM »
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hmmm sab ke sab dusht aur papi ho aap log........

sabko maja a raha he........sab dil khol ke has lo meri is halat pe.....jab kabhi khud pe gujregi tab pata chalega......

KB ji aap to sabse jayda jalim ho.....mamu nahi bhaiya bole.aacha he ......aur rishi ji ne to registerd mammu bana diya muje.....aur anamika ji ko mera ye dard uljulul laga ...suresh ji taliya baja rahe he aur kash ji ki to hasi hi nahi ruk rahi......priya ji me yaad rakhunga "U POOR mg"  thik he .waqt badelga ji ...has lo duniya walo has lo......ek dear nirala ji ko hi is scaahi ka ehsaas hua he thx bro.....baki sab k sab dusht he...yaad rakhna chun chun ke badla lunga.... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!

 BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 08:51:22 AM »
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hahahhahahahahahhahahahah mazaa aagaya aapki iss haaalat pe rajajaiiiii......
aur bano shareef chandra...yehi hona hai aapka....
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 09:27:58 AM »
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Mtrix ji daro nai na hi dukhi hona--
hum aapke saath hai aapka dukh samjh sakte hai aakhir ek hi kasti pr bethe hai hum.
zaleem duniya has rahi hai Bateesi dikha ke.
humara moka bhi ayega--
hamare Karan-Arjun ayenge jarur ayenge
Jai Maa Kaalee--
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2011, 09:38:18 AM »
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 NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 09:54:22 AM »
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shareefon ko ye duniya jeene nahi deti aaj experience ho gaya.
dekho duniya ko kaise humari shareefiyat me Chida rahe hain sad5
matrix ji aapke Karan-Arjun jo aapko mama kahte hai unko jaldi bada karo--
Thakuron se badla lenge wo:)
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