ABB NA BACHCHE KI JAAN LE SAAQI ......... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: April 11, 2012, 05:50:06 AM »
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wah waaah wah waah
mastam mastttttttttttt ghazal
sarfira  ji , bahuuutttttttt   shukriya . khush  rahiye , Hasan
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«Reply #16 on: April 11, 2012, 09:07:59 AM »
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waah waah bahi ji kamaal kar diyaa aapne bakre kee raan waah kyaa qaafiyaa maaraa hai bahut bahutttttttttttttdaad mubaarak ho aur haan holydays men ghar par comp kaanet slow hai baar bar kattaa hai so rarely hee post kar paataa hoon workingdays men esee koi problam naheen hotee aapke liye duaa kartaa hoon ki aap faaq kee bulandiyon par jaaye
Bahut  bahut   shukriya , Saini  saheb . 
Aap  sahi  farma  rahe  hain  net  ki  diqqat
aaye  din  rahti  hai.
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«Reply #17 on: April 11, 2012, 09:48:19 AM »
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QALB , SAHAB , BAHUT  SHUKRIYA .
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«Reply #18 on: April 11, 2012, 04:10:53 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... achchi mazahiyaa kalaam kahi hai
aapne... khoob khayaal rahe aur andaaz e bayaaN bhi khoob
raha... Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Parwaaz  saheb , tah e dil  se  shukriya
ada  karta  hoon. khush  rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #19 on: April 11, 2012, 04:54:31 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Bahut khoob kaha hai Saaqi radif par
waah..waah

"mujhhko tauba pe aitbaar naheeN
 too mera imtehaan ley saaqi....kya kahne"

Is umda post par dili mubaarak baad kubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
Satish  ji , Hausla  afzai  ke  liye 
bahut  bahut  shukriya . Hasan
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«Reply #20 on: April 12, 2012, 05:30:06 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaah rindnama -3 Applause Applause
Bahut  shukriya , adil bechain saheb
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«Reply #21 on: April 12, 2012, 09:17:48 AM »
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waaaah waaah hasanjii....bahut badiya...bahut khoob...clappings:)
Shukriya , Dolly  ji.
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«Reply #22 on: April 12, 2012, 09:42:25 AM »
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Kah   raha   hooN   jo   maan  lay  Saaqi ,
Abb  na   Bachche  ki   jaan   lay  Saaqi

MaiN  na   peene  ki   thhaan  looN  Saaqi ,
Tuu   pilaane   ki    thhaan   lay   Saaqi

Mujh  ko  tauba   peh   aitbaar   naheeN ,
Tuu   mera   Imtehaan   lay   Saaqi

Padte  haiN   roz - roz   chhaape   yahaaN ,
Aur   koi   Dukaan   lay   Saaqi

Chhipkali   gir  gaee   hai   Saaghar  meiN ,
Abb   to   thhodi  si   chhaan   lay   Saaqi

Eik   boti   meiN   tera   kya   ho gaa ,
Poori   Bakre   ki   Raan   lay   Saaqi

Dekh   sar   chadh  ke   bolti  hai  Sharaab ,
Tuu   bhi   oonchi   udaan   lay   Saaqi

Muft   halkaan   ho   raha   hai  'Hasan' ,
Abb   na   aur   usski   jaan   lay   Saaqi


it seems you have researched  a lot on this issue and impact. how funny and very brillent composition.
 hats off
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«Reply #23 on: April 12, 2012, 01:17:50 PM »
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Bahut Khoob hasan Sir

Kah   raha   hooN   jo   maan  lay  Saaqi ,
Abb  na   Bachche  ki   jaan   lay  Saaqi

MaiN  na   peene  ki   thhaan  looN  Saaqi ,
Tuu   pilaane   ki    thhaan   lay   Saaqi

Mujh  ko  tauba   peh   aitbaar   naheeN ,
Tuu   mera   Imtehaan   lay   Saaqi

Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya  ,  MKV  ji . khush   rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #24 on: April 12, 2012, 03:54:31 PM »
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Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
behtreen janab...dad hazir hai  Usual Smile
BEKARAR  JI , HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA . HASAN
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«Reply #25 on: April 12, 2012, 04:05:25 PM »
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bahut khoob hasan sahab...
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«Reply #26 on: April 12, 2012, 06:29:02 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
HRIDAY  JI  , THANKSSSSSS  !!!
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«Reply #27 on: April 14, 2012, 01:38:59 PM »
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hasan sahab mere comments ka please kabhi buna mat maan naa. mein ek ek sher enjoy karti hoon aur uss sher ko apna samajh kar use jawaab deti hoon. mujhe
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«Reply #28 on: April 14, 2012, 05:10:15 PM »
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waaah bahut khub..

 Applause Applause Applause
MANN JI , THANXXXXXXXXX.
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«Reply #29 on: April 15, 2012, 08:54:34 AM »
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it seems you have researched  a lot on this issue and impact. how funny and very brillent composition.
 hats off
It's  my  favourite  theme . It  provides
large  scope  for   my  favourite  romantic
and  funny  poetry  .  Thanks  for  nice comment.
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