ABB NA BACHCHE KI JAAN LE SAAQI ......... HASAN

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Kah   raha   hooN   jo   maan  lay  Saaqi ,
Abb  na   Bachche  ki   jaan   lay  Saaqi

MaiN  na   peene  ki   thhaan  looN  Saaqi ,
Tuu   pilaane   ki    thhaan   lay   Saaqi

Mujh  ko  tauba   peh   aitbaar   naheeN ,
Tuu   mera   Imtehaan   lay   Saaqi

Padte  haiN   roz - roz   chhaape   yahaaN ,
Aur   koi   Dukaan   lay   Saaqi

Chhipkali   gir  gaee   hai   Saaghar  meiN ,
Abb   to   thhodi  si   chhaan   lay   Saaqi

Eik   boti   meiN   tera   kya   ho gaa ,
Poori   Bakre   ki   Raan   lay   Saaqi

Dekh   sar   chadh  ke   bolti  hai  Sharaab ,
Tuu   bhi   oonchi   udaan   lay   Saaqi

Muft   halkaan   ho   raha   hai  'Hasan' ,
Abb   na   aur   usski   jaan   lay   Saaqi
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2012, 06:06:56 AM »
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wah waaah wah waah
mastam mastttttttttttt ghazal
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2012, 06:07:17 AM »
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wah waaah wah waah
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2012, 06:11:25 AM »
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wah waaah wah waah
mastam mastttttttttttt ghazal
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2012, 06:19:12 AM »
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waah waah bahi ji kamaal kar diyaa aapne bakre kee raan waah kyaa qaafiyaa maaraa hai bahut bahutttttttttttttdaad mubaarak ho aur haan holydays men ghar par comp kaanet slow hai baar bar kattaa hai so rarely hee post kar paataa hoon workingdays men esee koi problam naheen hotee aapke liye duaa kartaa hoon ki aap faaq kee bulandiyon par jaaye
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2012, 08:34:22 AM »
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Kah   raha   hooN   jo   maan  lay  Saaqi ,
Abb  na   Bachche  ki   jaan   lay  Saaqi

MaiN  na   peene  ki   thhaan  looN  Saaqi ,
Tuu   pilaane   ki    thhaan   lay   Saaqi

Mujh  ko  tauba   peh   aitbaar   naheeN ,
Tuu   mera   Imtehaan   lay   Saaqi

Padte  haiN   roz - roz   chhaape   yahaaN ,
Aur   koi   Dukaan   lay   Saaqi

Chhipkali   gir  gaee   hai   Saaghar  meiN ,
Abb   to   thhodi  si   chhaan   lay   Saaqi

Eik   boti   meiN   tera   kya   ho gaa ,
Poori   Bakre   ki   Raan   lay   Saaqi

Dekh   sar   chadh  ke   bolti  hai  Sharaab ,
Tuu   bhi   oonchi   udaan   lay   Saaqi

Muft   halkaan   ho   raha   hai  'Hasan' ,
Abb   na   aur   usski   jaan   lay   Saaqi


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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2012, 09:03:17 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab... achchi mazahiyaa kalaam kahi hai
aapne... khoob khayaal rahe aur andaaz e bayaaN bhi khoob
raha... Usual Smile


Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2012, 10:57:07 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Bahut khoob kaha hai Saaqi radif par
waah..waah

"mujhhko tauba pe aitbaar naheeN
 too mera imtehaan ley saaqi....kya kahne"

Is umda post par dili mubaarak baad kubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2012, 12:37:06 PM »
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Kah   raha   hooN   jo   maan  lay  Saaqi ,
Abb  na   Bachche  ki   jaan   lay  Saaqi

MaiN  na   peene  ki   thhaan  looN  Saaqi ,
Tuu   pilaane   ki    thhaan   lay   Saaqi

Mujh  ko  tauba   peh   aitbaar   naheeN ,
Tuu   mera   Imtehaan   lay   Saaqi

Padte  haiN   roz - roz   chhaape   yahaaN ,
Aur   koi   Dukaan   lay   Saaqi

Chhipkali   gir  gaee   hai   Saaghar  meiN ,
Abb   to   thhodi  si   chhaan   lay   Saaqi

Eik   boti   meiN   tera   kya   ho gaa ,
Poori   Bakre   ki   Raan   lay   Saaqi

Dekh   sar   chadh  ke   bolti  hai  Sharaab ,
Tuu   bhi   oonchi   udaan   lay   Saaqi

Muft   halkaan   ho   raha   hai  'Hasan' ,
Abb   na   aur   usski   jaan   lay   Saaqi


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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2012, 02:20:19 PM »
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waaaah waaah hasanjii....bahut badiya...bahut khoob...clappings:)
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2012, 04:55:20 PM »
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Bahut Khoob hasan Sir

Kah   raha   hooN   jo   maan  lay  Saaqi ,
Abb  na   Bachche  ki   jaan   lay  Saaqi

MaiN  na   peene  ki   thhaan  looN  Saaqi ,
Tuu   pilaane   ki    thhaan   lay   Saaqi

Mujh  ko  tauba   peh   aitbaar   naheeN ,
Tuu   mera   Imtehaan   lay   Saaqi

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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2012, 05:18:04 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2012, 06:03:21 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2012, 06:41:30 PM »
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Kah   raha   hooN   jo   maan  lay  Saaqi ,
Abb  na   Bachche  ki   jaan   lay  Saaqi
khud hi peeye jaa rahe ho.isme main kya karo.N. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
MaiN  na   peene  ki   thhaan  looN  Saaqi ,
Tuu   pilaane   ki    thhaan   lay   Saaqi
phir to iss jung mein jaam ka hshr bura hone waalaa hai Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
Mujh  ko  tauba   peh   aitbaar   naheeN ,
Tuu   mera   Imtehaan   lay   Saaqi
wah wah wah kya baat hai kya baat hai. just center of the ghazal Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Padte  haiN   roz - roz   chhaape   yahaaN ,
Aur   koi   Dukaan   lay   Saaqi
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Chhipkali   gir  gaee   hai   Saaghar  meiN ,
Abb   to   thhodi  si   chhaan   lay   Saaqi
chheeeeeeeee.! zahar pe zahar. icon_silent icon_silent
Eik   boti   meiN   tera   kya   ho gaa ,
Poori   Bakre   ki   Raan   lay   Saaqi
main bhi hoon ji kuch gosht ghar bhi le aana. per zabah hona chahiye. pataa nahin pee kar kis haal mein raho. tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
Dekh   sar   chadh  ke   bolti  hai  Sharaab ,
Tuu   bhi   oonchi   udaan   lay   Saaqi
isliye jab tumhe zyada chhadh jaati hai to ghar nahin aate aur bahaana karte ho office mein boss ne rok liya thaa. acha ji main itni nadaan nikli.koi baat nahin ab dekhti hoo.n
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Muft   halkaan   ho   raha   hai  'Hasan' ,
Abb   na   aur   usski   jaan   lay   Saaqi[/color][/b]

main ne to kabhi tuhein itna tang nahin kiya ke saaqi se meri iss tarah shikaayat kar baithe. icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

hasan sahab mere comments ka please kabhi buna mat maan naa. mein ek ek sher enjoy karti hoon aur uss sher ko apna samajh kar use jawaab deti hoon. mujhe
dil se jo pasand aaye main aisa hi karti hoon. pahle se hi meri aadat hai. per YOINDIA mein main aisi jurrat shuru mein nahin kar paayi socha pataa nahin log kya samjhein ge. per dhire-dhire meri aadat ne mujhe majboor kar diya.

  ummid hai aap kabhi bura nahin samjhein ge..
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2012, 03:44:14 AM »
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waaah bahut khub..

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