JAAN - E - JAAN , SHOLA - BADAN ................ HASAN

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Teri  zulfoN   ko  ghata , chehre  ko   Mahtaab   likhooN ,
Aye   Sanam  , tere  liye  jhoot  ke  sub  Baab   likhooN


'Jaan-e-jaaN' , 'Shola-badan' , 'Husn-e-Mujassam'  likkhooN ,
Teri  khushnoodi  ki   khatir ,   sabhi   Alqaab   likhooN


ZulfoN  ke   saaye   meiN  ,  tuu  aaj   sula  lay  mujhko ,
MaiN  laboN   say , tere Rukhsar  pe , kuchh  Khwaab  likhooN


Apni  majbooriyaN   kuchh  ,  aur   kuchh   unki   sharteiN '
DooriyaN    kaise   hueeN   ,  kaise   sub   Asbaab   likhooN


Maa  ki   yaad   aaye   to   yeh  aaj  bhi  bhar  jaati  haiN ,
Kaise  khushk  aankhoN  ki  in  jheeloN  ko  , be-aab  likhooN


'Alvida'  likhte   huay  ,  kaanpte    haiN    haath    mere ,
Khat  ke  aakhir  meiN , 'Hasan' , un ko  phir 'Aadaab' likhooN
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2012, 01:50:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
amazing hasanji bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2012, 01:51:08 PM »
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Teri  zulfoN   ko  ghata , chehre  ko   Mahtaab   likhooN ,
Aye   Sanam  , tere  liye  jhoot  ke  sub  Baab   likhooN
meri aadat nahin jhoot ki taarif sun-na . per likho to acha lage ga. aakhir aurat ki yehi fitrat hai.
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'Jaan-e-jaaN' , 'Shola-badan' , 'Husn-e-Mujassam'  likkhooN ,
Teri  khushnoodi  ki   khatir ,   sabhi   Alqaab   likhooN
zayada meetha bhi acha nahin hota ji . ab bolo mujh se kya khaas kaam hai to janaab ki itni chaploosi chull rahi hai icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek

ZulfoN  ke   saaye   meiN  ,  tuu  aaj   sula  lay  mujhko ,
MaiN  laboN   say , tere Rukhsar  pe , kuchh  Khwaab  likhooN
haqeeqat mein laut aao hazrat waqt guzar chuka hai... iss tarah ke kaweaabo.n ka ab to bachcho.n ke kawaab sajaane hain ji hamein
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Apni  majbooriyaN   kuchh  ,  aur   kuchh   unki   sharteiN '
DooriyaN    kaise   hueeN   ,  kaise   sub   Asbaab   likhooN
main to kisi bhi sahrt ke bina hi tumhaare paas hoon ji ye dooriyaan tumne bana rakhi hain jaane kyon pata nahin. kaoi aur aa gayi hai kya hamaari raah pe
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Maa  ki   yaad   aaye   to   yeh  aaj  bhi  bhar  jaati  haiN ,
Kaise  khushk  aankhoN  ki  in  jheeloN  ko  , be-aab  likhooN
sahi hai----maa to maa hi hai.uska muqabla nahin tearyeyed

'Alvida'  likhte   huay  ,  kaanpte    haiN    haath    mere ,
Khat  ke  aakhir  meiN , 'Hasan' , un ko  phir 'Aadaab' likhooN

dooriyaan sahi nahin jaaeen paas bhi nahin rah sakte.khuda khair kare . Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased


bahut hi khoob fazal sahab.............!
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2012, 01:51:23 PM »
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waah bohat bohat khoob .......bohat c daad ......... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2012, 02:20:25 PM »
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Teri  zulfoN   ko  ghata , chehre  ko   Mahtaab   likhooN ,
Aye   Sanam  , tere  liye  jhoot  ke  sub  Baab   likhooN


'Jaan-e-jaaN' , 'Shola-badan' , 'Husn-e-Mujassam'  likkhooN ,
Teri  khushnoodi  ki   khatir ,   sabhi   Alqaab   likhooN


ZulfoN  ke   saaye   meiN  ,  tuu  aaj   sula  lay  mujhko ,
MaiN  laboN   say , tere Rukhsar  pe , kuchh  Khwaab  likhooN


Apni  majbooriyaN   kuchh  ,  aur   kuchh   unki   sharteiN '
DooriyaN    kaise   hueeN   ,  kaise   sub   Asbaab   likhooN


Maa  ki   yaad   aaye   to   yeh  aaj  bhi  bhar  jaati  haiN ,
Kaise  khushk  aankhoN  ki  in  jheeloN  ko  , be-aab  likhooN


'Alvida'  likhte   huay  ,  kaanpte    haiN    haath    mere ,
Khat  ke  aakhir  meiN , 'Hasan' , un ko  phir 'Aadaab' likhooN


bahot din miss kia maine aapki ghazlon ko Hasan Sahab
jawaab nahi iss taaza ghazal ki
mai to bas kismatwala smjhta hu ki aaj yahan aa gaya
daad to bht chota shabd hai magar dena hi parega
daad daad daad

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2012, 02:38:51 PM »
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BEHATEEN kahooN,laajawaab kahoon bhaaijaan tay naheen kar paarahaa kyaa kahooN bss naacheez kee duaa qubool ho
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2012, 03:50:56 PM »
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Hasan ji sabhi hajrat ne jo aap ki etane umda lafjon main tareef ki hai hmare liye koi shabad bache hi nahi....waah....
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2012, 04:51:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Hasan ji... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke... ek dum masssttt likha hai Sirji....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2012, 05:16:22 PM »
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kya baat hai  saini sir ne sahi kaha  main kya likhun is qalaam ke liye...behtareen likhun, lajawab likhun., bemisal likhun..mahan fankar ka ek aur mahan qalaam likhun........


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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2012, 06:19:57 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat aur umda kalaam hai Sir
bahut mazaa aaya padh ke..
wah wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2012, 09:01:17 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hasan Saheb.
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2012, 01:10:34 AM »
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Bohut khoob sir, lajwab, umda, peshkash hai, aur is shair ke liye aapke hath choomne ka dil karta hai, itni romaniat, inta pyaar, khubsurat adaegi, meN bayan nahi kar paraha, waqai aap bemisaal hai, hats off to u.



ZulfoN  ke   saaye   meiN  ,  tuu  aaj   sula  lay  mujhko ,
MaiN  laboN   say , tere Rukhsar  pe , kuchh  Khwaab  likhooN



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aur sir is khayal ke liye meri dili daad qubool kareN.. khat ke aakhir meN aadab kya baat hai , zindabaad, khuada aapko aur bulandiyaN ata farmaye, khuda hafiz




Alvida'  likhte   huay  ,  kaanpte    haiN    haath    mere ,
Khat  ke  aakhir  meiN , 'Hasan' , un ko  phir 'Aadaab' likhooN
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2012, 04:51:38 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
amazing hasanji bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne
aqshji, hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya . duaaein.
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«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2012, 11:31:13 AM »
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bahut hi khoob fazal sahab.............!
Ghazal   kaisi    bhi    ho   ,   aap    ke   khubsurat   
tabsire  usmein  jaan  daal  de te  hain  . Bahut  shukriya.
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«Reply #14 on: October 12, 2012, 01:32:22 PM »
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Maa  ki   yaad   aaye   to   yeh  aaj  bhi  bhar  jaati  haiN ,
Kaise  khushk  aankhoN  ki  in  jheeloN  ko  , be-aab  likhooN

'Alvida'  likhte   huay  ,  kaanpte    haiN    haath    mere ,
Khat  ke  aakhir  meiN , 'Hasan' , un ko  phir 'Aadaab' likhooN

Bahut hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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