BAAT AJEEB HAI...

by surindarn on October 29, 2014, 07:02:47 AM
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This poem is a satire on what we all write on the subject Ishq and Husn. I hope you will all enjoy it.

Baat merii suno kaa.n lagaaye, hai to ajeeb hai...
Oh what the heck! Yeh duniya kyaa kam ajeeb hai!

Woh larkee jiss ke ishq mei.n mai.n doobaa ho.on...
Uss kee chaal.waal dekhne mein dikhtee ajeeb hai!

Shayad iss liye ke woh pehentee oonchee heel hai...
Kuchh bhi ho meraa ishq to head over the heel hai!

Chehraa uss kaa dekhne mei.n kuchh gol matol hai...
Poochho to kahoon gaa iss liye duniya bhi gol hai!

Par itnaa to yaki.n hai meraa ke woh maajabee.n hai...
Abb aur kyaa kahu.n main mere iss dil ko azeez hai!

Kaalee zulfei.n usskee ghataa ban khoob barsen gee...
Koi bataa de kitnaa nahaanaa mere liye maufeed hai!

Aankhen uss kee saletee rang kee gehree jheel hai.n...
Doob to jaau.n mai.n, haaye aankh usskee azeez hai.

Baat karne ko munh khole hai to jharhte phool hai.n...
Kuchh to usse khaanaa hai, jaa.n uss ko bhi azeez hai!

Jiss rahaa chaltee hai bahaare.n bichhaatee phool hai.n...
Phoolo.n mei.n kaante zaroor honge mujh ko yaki.n hai!

Chalo achhaa hee hai ke paao.n uss.ke oonchee heel hai!
Abb samjhe naa, kyu.n woh oonchee heel kee mareez hai!

Kehne ko to bahut kuchh hai par kahu.n kyaa naa kahu.n...
Dartaa hoo.n ke kahi.n yeh kehdo kitnaa bad.tameez hai!

Koi samjhaaye bhooreh 'MohanN' ko kyu.n kartaa mazaak hai...
Yeh theek hai dil jawa.n hai uss.kaa, aakhir to hai peer hai!!

Surindar.N                             "MohanN"





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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2014, 08:14:59 AM »
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बहुत खूब.....

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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2014, 08:59:51 AM »
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behad umda peshkash waaaaaaaahhhhhhh dheroooooooooo daaaaaddddddd
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2014, 12:49:04 PM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2014, 02:40:57 AM »
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बहुत खूब.....

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bahut shukria Meet Sahib.
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2014, 02:11:48 PM »
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behad umda peshkash waaaaaaaahhhhhhh dheroooooooooo daaaaaddddddd
bahut shukria Jeet Sahib.
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