Duniyan bar mein chali ak Prajati hai

by deepika_divya on June 20, 2007, 08:47:14 AM
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Duniyan bar mein chali ak Prajati hai
Karti khoob chalaki , par dhong bada rachati hai

Ho gai hai shaadi , phir bhi akal nahi aati hai
Apni Biwi nahi , aur ki biwi unhe badi bahti hai

Nikal padte hai saj dhaj k subah subah daftar hai
Waha par bhi unhe kaam nahi sirf ladkiyan nazar aati hai

Ghar pea aate hai tho boli bali sakal banate hai
Jese biwi nazamaj ho, unki leelao se anjani hai

De dete sari swag ki nishani biwi ko hai
Khud hai do bacho ke baap kehte,firte magar kuwarein hai

Kaam dham kuch aata nahi inhe hai
Par kuch bhi ho karni inhe apni manmani hai

Ghar mea khaana biwi kitne pyar se banati hai
Par  unhe padosan ki khane ki khusbu jyaada bahti hai

Jo sadko pe over style marte hue nazar ate hai
Woh sabhi Prajati PATI kehlati hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2007, 03:29:07 PM »
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Pati !

Subhah savere roz duty bajani hai, !
Thakaan ho yaa ho beemari ..
Lekin fir bhi hamesha yahi kahani hai, !

Soche kabhi toh, mile usse kuch araam,
Mile kuch rahat in bandishoN se ..
Use lekein fir bhi sada fileN banani hain !

Chilchalati dhoop mein roz usse hai jana,
Lut-ta chaein uss pyari neend kaa..
Lekin logoN ko lage ki mast zind-gani hai !

Impression dikhana bhai boss ko..
Acchha aur energetic lage tan va mann..
Suite-boot-perfume ki hi toh sab mehrbaani hai !

Pohonche fir woh daftar, dekhe kaghaz farr farr,
Jhele kitne hi undekhe-sune fasane
Bechare ko kabhi boss toh kabhi client se banani hai !

Iss beech poore din jaane kitne shor,
Jaane kitne shigoofe woh dekhe ..
Din bhar sekroN baar apni kabilyat bhi toh Jamani hai !

choor choor ho jata hai dimaag ka system,
Shaam tak Sharir bhi karta hai malfunction,
Fir bhi ghar jaakar biwi ko muskaan dikhani hai !

Bechara bhook se mara, tan bhi kare ishara
Ki mile kuch khaas usko ki thaka bechara..
Lekin ghar laut kar wahi roz roz daal khani hai !

Ados pados mein jo sharmji-varma ji hai..
Ho unse bhi dosti bane bhaichara..
Wajah yahi ki society mein bhi toh image Banai hai !!

Bahar ki duniya woh jhele
aur ghar pe bhi shaanti banani hai..
Lekin iss parr bhi BIWI
.......ko Pareshani hai !!
.....................Pareshani hai !!
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2007, 05:45:44 PM »
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ha haha bahoot khoob Divya... good job!!

Nice reply Ricky....

Good job Both OF YOU..
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2007, 09:14:11 PM »
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Waiting for some real husbands to comment upon Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2007, 01:34:37 PM »
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Pati !

Subhah savere roz duty bajani hai, !
Thakaan ho yaa ho beemari ..
Lekin fir bhi hamesha yahi kahani hai, !

Soche kabhi toh, mile usse kuch araam,
Mile kuch rahat in bandishoN se ..
Use lekein fir bhi sada fileN banani hain !

Chilchalati dhoop mein roz usse hai jana,
Lut-ta chaein uss pyari neend kaa..
Lekin logoN ko lage ki mast zind-gani hai !

Impression dikhana bhai boss ko..
Acchha aur energetic lage tan va mann..
Suite-boot-perfume ki hi toh sab mehrbaani hai !

Pohonche fir woh daftar, dekhe kaghaz farr farr,
Jhele kitne hi undekhe-sune fasane
Bechare ko kabhi boss toh kabhi client se banani hai !

Iss beech poore din jaane kitne shor,
Jaane kitne shigoofe woh dekhe ..
Din bhar sekroN baar apni kabilyat bhi toh Jamani hai !

choor choor ho jata hai dimaag ka system,
Shaam tak Sharir bhi karta hai malfunction,
Fir bhi ghar jaakar biwi ko muskaan dikhani hai !

Bechara bhook se mara, tan bhi kare ishara
Ki mile kuch khaas usko ki thaka bechara..
Lekin ghar laut kar wahi roz roz daal khani hai !

Ados pados mein jo sharmji-varma ji hai..
Ho unse bhi dosti bane bhaichara..
Wajah yahi ki society mein bhi toh image Banai hai !!

Bahar ki duniya woh jhele
aur ghar pe bhi shaanti banani hai..
Lekin iss parr bhi BIWI
.......ko Pareshani hai !!
.....................Pareshani hai !!



Jiyo Rajaa...

Patiyon  aaur patniyon keep posting!@
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2007, 07:49:01 PM »
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Thankyou!
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2007, 03:43:38 AM »
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really Ricky sir its really wonderful... well expressed !

yahan itni mehnat karne wale pati bahoot kam reh gaye hai....
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2007, 03:01:28 PM »
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Bahut Acche Ricky ... Nice one !!

Deepika ji ...   yeh sara sar ik khokli kahani hai ....  ab sach baat aap ko batani hai ....... Suno uss be-dard ki dastaaN .. jiska naam janani hai !!


Kabhi balooN ka nochwana aur kabhi belanoon ko khana
Hume hai yaad aaj tak woh Begum ka humko Murga bnana

Sale Saliyo ka aaye din mere ghar pe muuh utha ke chale aana
Aur unke khatirdari ke liye mera, sara din kitchen mein bitana  

Gyi ruthooN mein "HumTum" hamara to bas yhi ik mashgala tha
kabhi to sab bartano ka dhokna, kabhi ghar par jadu lagana!!

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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2007, 04:22:45 PM »
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Deepika..............wonderful and equally befitting replies from Ricky and Hum Tum......sahi hai yaar...........mujhe toh ye future Haldi ki Ghati nazar aa raha hai.................tongue3

Deepika ji....

Pati naam ke prani par, ye kaisa aatyachaar hai,
Mare hue ko marne ka, kaisa bhala vichaar hai..

Office mein wo kam kare, sham dhale ghar aaye,
Aate hi phir uski biwi usko, kitni baat sunaye..

Sabji se bacche tak, sab uske karmsthal bane,
Phir bhi khana pakane ko, biwi kyu usse chune..

Ek shadi ki galati ki ye, saza badi bekaar hai,
Mare hue ko marne ka, kaisa bhala vichaar hai..
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2007, 10:21:56 PM »
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Mr. Amit..
Very well Addition :
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Pati naam ke prani par, ye kaisa aatyachaar hai,
Mare hue ko marne ka, kaisa bhala vichaar hai..



And by post of Humtum.. seems that things are really getting practical here.. new new aspect Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2007, 03:20:47 PM »
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saara ghar ganda karein, phir shikayat humse karte hain
kaam to kuch hota nahi, baatein sau sunaate hain

office kya gaye sahab, teer badaa hai maarr liya
rasoyi mein zalim do minute na tik paate hain

jab mann chaha so gaye, jab dil kiya jaag gaye
jab jee kiya botal khaali kar ghar laut aate hain

bartan maanjte, farsh saaf karte,kapde ghiste rehte hain
jab le aate hain joote andar, ek aur kameez thamaate hain

kya kahein inke baare mein, shohar hain ya ZAALIM
hum par hi zulm dhaate hain, aur hum hi ko batein sunaate hain!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2007, 05:04:55 PM »
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Wah ..

I would answer it as..

Shauhar, Kitni mehnat jhalkati hi hais lavz sae,
Suniye jaanab, Apke liye hi toh kaam karte mehnat se,

Ek hissa hamari mehnat ko aur zaaya kijiye,
Rakhlijiye Nokarani aur yun ghar ke kaam ki dhauns naa dijiye....
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2007, 07:02:17 PM »
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mehnat aap karte ho, hum kya vele baithte hain
aapki khaatir karne ko, har waqt haazir rehte hain

khana banaye aapke liye, kapde ghise aapke
galtiyan nikalne mein phir bhi, bade maahir rehte hain

raub na dikhaiye paison ka, ye haathon ka mayl hota hai
asli mehnat aap kya jaano, jo rasoyi se baahir rehte hain
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2007, 04:26:38 PM »
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kaam koi bhi asan nahi hota
ghar ho ya bahar pasina sabka he behta
pati gher se bahar hai mehnat kerta
toh patni ki mehnat se gher hai sanwarta
mehnat toh sab baraber kerte hai
fir aap sab aapas mein kyun jhagadte hai? Puzzled !
per ek baat sabne hai mani
patni ger chahe toh jaker gher se bahar
ker sakti hai gher bahar dono ke kaam
per pati lakh chah le magar
kabhi nahi ker sakta gher ke ander ke kaam  :wink:





i m new n junior to all u ppl
so
bhul chuk hamari kijiyega maaf
bade pyar se badhaya hai humne dosti ka haath Usual Smile
isse thukaraker humara dil na todna
warna hume ab aajyega rona :cry:
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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2007, 12:58:53 PM »
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wah wah ji aapne kya baat hai farmaayi
aapki baaton mein hai badi sachhaayi
aur aapki baaton se saabit hota hai
patni se hi hai ghar mein raunak aayi
hum sabhi yahan par hai dost aapke
dekhooo sbhi logoo aaj maine ek nayi dost banayii :D
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