Chir nidra mein ho vileen tu chali gaii ... Ram saraswat

by Ram Saraswat on December 31, 2012, 07:48:15 PM
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Ahle bazm ko naya saal Mubarak.

Dosto, yoon to har saal kuchh na kuchh badhaaii ke roop mein likhta raha hoon naye saal ke mauke per. Lekin is saal kavita ka man udaasi bhara hai. Us bachchi ke saath jo kuchh huaa wo lafzo se wayaan nahi ho sakta. Man mein sirf yehi aa rahaa hai….

Eik athaah vedanaa , aadhe swapan   liye,
                   Chir nidraa mein ho vileen tu chali gaii  
Kar balidaan yaad , maanavtaa royegi,
                   Kalankitaun  se AAh,  aatma chhali gayii

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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2012, 11:21:53 PM »
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Bahut bahut badhiya Ram Saraswat Jee.
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2013, 01:01:36 AM »
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Ahle bazm ko naya saal Mubarak.

Dosto, yoon to har saal kuchh na kuchh badhaaii ke roop mein likhta raha hoon naye saal ke mauke per. Lekin is saal kavita ka man udaasi bhara hai. Us bachchi ke saath jo kuchh huaa wo lafzo se wayaan nahi ho sakta. Man mein sirf yehi aa rahaa hai….

Eik athaah vedanaa , aadhe swapan   liye,
                   Chir nidraa mein ho vileen tu chali gaii 
Kar balidaan yaad , maanavtaa royegi,
                   Kalankitaun  se AAh,  aatma chhali gayii


bahut sahi aur acha likha hai aapne. haan naya saal udasi bhara hi hai. reason sari dunia jaanti hai.
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bilkul sahee kahaa sir aapne
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2013, 04:28:53 AM »
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bahut sahi pharmaya
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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2013, 05:14:35 AM »
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bohut sahi farmaya aapne . ji haaN is saal insaniyat sharmsaar huyee hai

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very true....
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bahoot sahi kaha ramji
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